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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Will has played his diplomatic part masterfully. Lisa saw it impact the American Ambassador and is going to tell Will. Will's actions coordinate with Yani's efforts to fabricate the presence of a nuclear weapon existing in Canada. The American reactions dispersing their bombers, etc signal the Americans are worried. Trump realizes he has been checkmated. Now what ? I bet things will happen fast. Nuclear bombs next door instill pressure. Get more evidence Canada has a bomb. If it seems real, Trump will call Will Carter and make a public statement and carryout a face saving turn down of the military pressure and open the border. America will want to get the CIA on the suspected location so Yani's work is not done. We are shown this standoff has a real human toll beyond Will. West and Peter are reacting and be drawn closer together. I can see kid resulting. The idea has been introduced
  2. Alexander is ghosting Lyn and not answering him. Lyn does not know why. He fears it is because his mother was an escort. Lyn is not able to consider Alexander thinks Lyn has chosen Brad over him and is upset. Alexander is taking time off and will see them later when he is ready.
  3. Something was going to happen. Hunter noticed the gates were open and it was unusual. His bodyguard and a few others stayed behind. They were worried. The attack was planned and the headmistress giving the anti-drug cartel speech was targeted and killed. There will be a painful after action study. Will not the school be closed for a while to figure out what to do next ? I like Zach he seems well grounded. He is helping Hunter fit into the culture. The extent and acceptance of the local online sex for pay scene surprised me. . I can see where it would be an option for lower income people to make money in Colombia and other South American countries. I think Hunter is not aware of the large US online sex business. I do not use OnlyFans and related options, but guys and girls advertise online and stories appear about users in normal US media.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    A stunt worthy of Perry Mason--I assume Theo would not have agreed unless he would pass the test by the doctor Now what will the judge do when the doctor certifies there is no evidence repeated anal sex? Will he begin to question the other evidence?
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 11

    We are shown what Dr Hale's drugs are doing to try to break Andrew. He dreams of fighting Marc for Will and loses. Andrew is crushed. But he dreams of their son Jacob and renews his efforts to keep Will. Andrew is still fighting . You can tell Andrew is not broken....“Then choose me, Pa-pere,” Jacob said sounding so much like his father. “And kick his arse, Mister Carter.” This gives me confidence Andrew can survive his drugged up experience and not be ruined and be coherent when saved later
  6. akascrubber

    Carlo

    If Will continues to like Carlos, he might bring him into some good investment opportunities that are brought to him. If needed, Will could give him the funds to make his own investments. As Will said....“... I will help you out,” I promised"
  7. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    Listening to Colt and others talk, it is clear Colt is having sex with his girl when she is comfortable and ready. Sierra was not ready and at ease at the party to have sex this night. Colt was not happy when Sierra left the party The focus on Joel and Davin might be changed for a while if Sierra gets pregnant or tells Colt she has missed her period. We do not know what type of birth control they use.
  8. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Thank you. I will gladly read your new holiday story in a warm, non-Canadian climate with great interest.
  9. akascrubber

    Carlo

    Wow--Will met a new hot guy, Carlo from Milan. He knew about Will and wanted to meet him. They clicked, went to dinner at an Italian place and had sex with Will being the bottom. They agree to have dinner again in a few days Here are my concerns: Carlo has to make money to support his family's high-status lifestyle in Milan. Is he going to be a gold digger and try to find a way to use Will to help him get more money? The sex they had was not the best and Will does not know why. Carlo is not out to his family and cannot appear to them to be gay. Will should have more insights on Carlo after their next meeting.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    Since you kindly asked for ideas, might Brian and Alex meet for a happy holiday celebration?
  11. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Instead of CSIS getting involved with the clean-up, might not the RCMP detail covering the three kids at a distance notice the takedowns by Xue and arrest the three alleged kidnappers and see they get medical treatment. To wait for CSIS help might mean the three guys beaten up by Xue will get away. The fact that the three kids were still targeted by the Order shows they are in play to upset and possibly influence Will. The RCMP detail might later talk to CSIS and Xue.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 27

    Joel is getting a reputation as an assertive drunk who takes on guys. This time he found a way to handle a drunk Jaxon with out using his fists. A video of Joel sitting on Jaxon holding him down is making the rounds. Joel might have problems from this vid later Joel and Davin spent the night in a tent but they were chaste. Joel was too drunk. If anything seriously sexy is to happen, they need to find a better place and time.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Yani added the missing defense element: deception. He has ideas and will build the credible backstory. He thinks his plan will feed Trump's world view and belief men are flawed. the DG, West and Will approve. Let's hope Yani's deception becomes convincing and leads the US to negotiate and not invade.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    A new youth was killed in the same way as the others. This serial killer has to be found. BTW, Shane can look like Martin when dressed in his clothes which makes him a target even if the Jarvis related criminals are not involved. Helen and Rick need to be very protective of Casey who internal affairs and others want to see. It is thought the corruption gored higher than the assistant commissioner.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    So dark and corrupt and hopeless Sawyer is arrested for indecency-- having sex with a male and taken away with Cobb and the gold by Rourke. It looks like Sawyer is going to die either on the way orby a public hanging after a trial, if he gets one. Rourke beat the cavalry to their gold and the military will not be happy.
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 29

    Out of the frying pan into the fire. They thankfully have left the Redeemers and a life of forced religious purity. But, they do not know what is in store for them. The temperament of Csillla suggests they are not liked or valued as near equals . They likely are going to be pawns and once again have no control over their lives
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    The result of the experiences and people interactions are totally positive You can feel things are going to get much, much better. Brody, Lisa and Caleb were a good team applying their different media and psyop skills effectively. The ending video by Will was powerful and convincing. It rang true. You liked Will and saw no reason to oppose your neighbor. Trump has lost. I loved the monologue by Enrico and his intent to viciously go after Agent Smith and Silas Abernathy. He will continue the fight after Andrew is freed and terminate the top evil participants who must feel invulnerable for now.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Ned became a brother, Jacob, Tommy and Ned are linked and very comfortable with each other. It all started with hot chocolate Enrico took over the space simulating a movie set. He bought out the Senior Deputy Sherrif and had the Sherrif. a member of the order, killed.. Now, they are looking for Dr Hale who will give them Andrew. This mission is almost over.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    chris191070 said Enrico is not limited by laws--to paraphrase I expect Enrico and his team will face Dr Hale and Agent Smith who are in the LA compound torturing the drugged-up Andrew and preparing a brutal video showing Andrew under extreme distress to force Will to act as Agent Smith wants. Enrico could skillfully take over the compound and not hold back. When Enrico sees how badly Andrew has been hurt, he will feel free to forcefully interrogate Hale and Smith and not worry if they die.
  20. akascrubber

    Bollocks

    Very interesting premise about a tortured, lonely , magical soul who is seeking the proper key to solve his main problem. You tell us he thinks he just has seen on TV what he wants. Now his long hunt begins afresh. Living in America , I was not aware of the prevalence of CCTV surveillance. This condition is scary and so limiting. I am very happy to learn you are keeping up your other writing projects.
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Excellent--The plan worked. Silas and his gang finally gave up and were utterly defeated with no loses by the good guys. Jack was sharp and fearless and scary. But there is more to go and the big boss needs to be brought to justice. It should be a great ride !
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    There are five intel sources to be forcefully interrogated. CSIS will handle three in Canada. Enrico may find Dr Hale and Agent Smith and will seek to get all he can from them. Enrico has no restriction to prevent him from killing them. With these 5 sources the full effort and clear US involvement could be revealed
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Enrico masterfully handled Hayes and his wife, He found the likely place Andrew is being held by the location of pills for a doctor in Louisiana. Enrico will have his staff research the doctor and possible location. I bet Enrico will go to retrieve Andrew soon.
  24. Noah is being sued. His mother is claiming he cannot inherit from his grandmother because his mother gave up her rights to Noah. It is a preposterous claim. However, his mother hired a high powered lawyer who maybe accepting a percentage of the winning for her fee, The amount at stake is very substantial. Now, his mother's lawyer called his lawyer, Noah and others. She began by saying she hired a private eye who found out something surprising. We will find out her news in the next chapter. I bet Noah's lawyer will need to get his own investigator.
  25. I hope Brad goes back to Alexander and tells him what he has learned from. Brad Well, one thing he learned was that he made Brad mad when he told him he saw him getting a blow job. Brad said he liked getting bj's from guys. He did not say his behavior will change when he gets married Brad worries if he should tell Bella. He does not know her. I bet he will make her mad at Brad and himself. She may not want to see Lyn again. My opinion: Do not tell Bella. He has his own secret life he does want exposed. Plan on being polite and then leave Brad and Bella and do not contact them again. Work on your relationship with Alexander. Brad and Bella are set to blow up in a few years or come to an understanding
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