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Andrew was given a termination order by his boss. This is the rough nature of the intel service. The CSIS must do this under its regular authorities when the threat to the nation is so grave and it was. He did his duty as a CSIS agent. Andrew did not act impulsively or without thought. Of course, Andrew is human and regrets having to kill the general. Andrew also knows there are major threats out there aiming to hurt or destroy people he loves as well as the nation. Will must know he was given a proper order. He is fighting the system and Andrew is being damaged by his morality and an Order mole. I said in an earlier comment, the US Secretary of State around 1919 closed the department cryptographic office that was breaking the codes to read the diplomatic messages of other countries. I am sure other major countries had similar code breaking offices. Sec State Stimson said in effect--Gentlemen do not read other peoples' mail.
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I am betting on the Director of CSIS being very insightful and realize that the drug Andrew is being given as having terrible effect and not what should be happening. He might have a CSIS doctor test his blood. With evidence he can confront Will since he has direct access to him. I hope Sarah does not push and suggest Will could benefit from using a supposedly beneficial drug to let him handle his stress.
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Will, You are an idiot. He gave away a terrible secret. Why this Sarah? Does not CSIS have its own professionals who counsel staff after critical events?. You blindly pushed Andrew away with this horrible , cruel analysis and hurtful drug by a mole for Silas Abernathy . His mole says--“The drug is an Agonist-based Dissociative Inhibitor. It does not treat CLIS-D; it creates it. The primary function is to destroy his compartmentalization and amplify his existing shame and paranoia, masking the effects as severe burnout.” He is going to be made impotent and in need of care away from the CSOS West will protest and not meet Sarah. He will not be given the hurtful drug as it stands now. I expect he will be forced out of CSIS. This Sarah will remove CSIS as an effective opponent to the order and she will go on to traumatize and mislead Peter, Matt and Ned or Ed, I expect. Will--The results of this order will severely harm you and your family
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I agree. I think Walter is behind the CIA kill squad. He has the position, the authority and knowledge of how to order a hit and the likely reason to have Josh killed so as to not reveal what he knows.
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The Message in the Rock
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Message in the Rock
Now, we are making progress, Al long as Theo can keep his sexual drive under control and not fuck the two would be mates The three meet at the boulder, touch and read the runes they see They find an insightful riddle. They must go as a group and find the Wisdom Tree. Theo's pack is there hidden. Theo might well get his pack back from where Cassandra hid them. Can he accept the help of Vince and Jack ?- 15 comments
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OMG--This is "The Empire Strikes Back" We are going to have one heck of a mess with pain and distress all around for the good guys. I am going to need a therapeutic, life affirming, good government solution with a loving Andrew and Will Carter in Book Three, please.
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Jarvis was tracked and found at a charity auction with his wife. He surprisingly ran away and had to be caught before he left the convention center. He did not want to be arrested. He was going to be held overnight to see a judge tomorrow. His lawyer could not get him out. The inspector receive two worrying calls: one from the police commissioner and one from an assistant commissioner, Are they connected to Jarvis? Are one or more of them users of the rent boys controlled by Jarvis? Rick took the night off from Adam to think. He is worried about the rent boys and the murders. He is finalizing the move of the boys tomorrow. I think both boys are in increased danger. Jarvis and his men now have more need to kidnap them. Rick and Helen need to be extra watchful and protective of them.
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You are going to have fun with your next story.... But for now, you have shown us how Kenny did focus and saved Alex. They are alone and Alex still have real and serious med issues that impair him. The huge dam disaster has sent most south from Raddison to help at the disaster Nice cliffhanger--Who is calling Alex at his motel room? I bet it is dad since he can be tracked by the use of his credit cards. I hope it is not Wolf.
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Bravo--Josh number one and Josh number two to the rescue.What an amazing, educational chapter. Josh number two with the Jason Bourne's skills took over. So, it was a CIA team that was ordered to kill Josh and the man in the hospital. They thought they were authorized to end both lives under a Chimera order. When the CIA desk was called for termination approval, they only heard confusion and then heard a CIA team was on its way to their location. Nevertheless, the rogue team was going to kill Josh. But Josh number two did not wait. While lying on a cot zip tied in a warehouse, He took out 5 guys meant to kill him. What a heroic performance! Then he took over a Tahoe and drove away fast. Josh number two was in charge, He called into the FBI and asked for Greg Kincaid, When he encountered resistance, he knew the code words to be transferred immediately to Greg's cell phone. Josh number two talked to Greg and was given a place to find and await medical care. Greg now knows about Josh number two The CIA needs to find out about the kill team and who authorized it..The CIA kill team needs to be found and stopped from more killing, Elenor as we have all said needs to be punished and reprimanded. Claire can let go on her. Are we getting any close to unlocking the CIA system? Greg might find some clues talking to both Joshes.
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Joel has sabotaged for now his low key role at his new high school. I do not think his situation is as dire as Custer's was. He has made waves and made himself to be a visible supporter of the school's rival. He fit the role of a traitor to most of the student body. He has rejected joining the baseball team so that option was newly taken off the table. Given his very public actions will he listen to others he knows and moderate his hostility to his new high school? Or, will his anger issues still rule him. Let us hear what guidance the principal is giving to Joel and Roy. Will she suspend then for a few days? Will she assign them some extra duties?
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True believers-Their leader died. All hope was lost. Those inside the Alberta compound agreed to commit a mass suicide. The compound was set on fire and massive explosions shocked the surrounding Canadian Army and then the news when it was reported on air. Caleb Henderson attempted to spin the explosions and deaths as a failure of the government and the Prime Minister, It was not convincing and rang hollow. Will the Conservative Party leadership take up his views? Will spoke to the nation through the TV news channels."We will own the trauma. We will not own the corruption. We will rebuild, and we will emerge from this darkness stronger, more resilient, and more united in our commitment to the values we share." He pledged to seek out and fight the shadowy Order which is behind the effort to overthrow the government. He was earnest , solemn and forceful and had to give confidence to those worried about what has been happening Driving to CSIS HQ, a huge motorcycle ran into his car forcing him to stop. He got out and Brad Lapointe spoke to him claiming he would end West and get back for his jail term and fight 18 years ago. Brad was big and bulky. He expected he could easily kill West. But, he was wrong. West had learned how to fight in combat and strategically hit Brad and disabled him after taking brutal hits. He zip tied Brad and reported the attack to 911 and CSIS HQ.. He learned Brad was connected to Peter's corrupted evidence. I expect Brad is going to be interrogated by CSIS soon.
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[Memory, Junior Year, February] – Who Does That?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, February] – Who Does That?
The three are talking past each other, again Lyn is now in a position to not need money from Alexander and wants to pay him back. Lyn asked Alexander to tell him how much he owed him. But, Alexander said he would not. Lyn said it was humiliating. Alexander said he gave him money since they were friends and he did not need to be repaid They ended up getting physical and holding hands. Just then Brad found them and hinted they were acting gay. Lyn wondered why Brad would say this. Brad began running his hands through Lyn's air in an act of dominance cancelling out what Alexander had just done with Lyn. Again, Lyn could not read what was motivating Brad. I bet Alexander can see the latent rivalry with Lyn being oblivious.- 26 comments
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Joel made his point visibly and loudly and with intent. He was not a Warhawk. He was a Tiger. He rubbed his disobedience and what must be real anger in the faces of the student body. He was not making an effort to fit in. He is willing to be ostracized and it is happening. I am sure the principal with chastise both Joel and Roy. Is he trying to sabotage his life as a student and maybe prevent him from inviting the two Celia wants him to invite I think he needs to really think about his new type of behavior. Is this rebellion an outgrowth of his mutual masturbation session with Davin? He seemed to ignore this action in the morning. I am sure Colt and Trace will be talking to him to find out why he did it.
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Thomas Dewey received leaked information in 1944 that the US had broken the Japanese code before the Pearl Harbor attack. He was furious at how badly the code breaking was handled and thought FDR should be impeached over not being ready for the attack. FDR would have faced a serious public outcry and loss of support in his re-election campaign. BTW, both candidates truly hated each other. General George Marshall convinced Dewey to not publicize the code breaking because it would critically harm our ability to fight the Japanese and give away a vital vantage. Dewey put his country first and did not leak the US code breaking ability.
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I am in favor of Andrew's position given the seriousness of the threat and can see he is not acting without a moral compass. He knows Silas and his men have killed and want Will destroyed. Taking out this mole will likely really hurt to planned insurrection. The danger is not over. In 1929 the US Secretary of State Henry Stimson closed down the US codebreaking office which was reading foreign diplomatic messages. He said in essence--"Gentlemen do not read other's mail." The US government changed this position as tensions heated up in 1940.
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It was painful to hear Will and Andrew fight. Both have strong guiding principles. Will does want Andrew to turn into his dad. Andrew feels he has to do terrible things to protect Will, his family and the country. The enemy has no limits and wants to take over the country. Will is going to carry out more bad things and he knows it. I hope Will again keeps not asking questions that is going to cause Andrew to lie. Well, they fought hard and kissed at the end. The staff accepted it and saw them as passionate committed partners. They loved each other clearly. The three boys overheard the load, angry voices. They were not troubled, and they knew Andrew and Will would make up. Weston was very insightful. He remarked that Jacob and Tommy were getting close and said they should get on and kiss each other. Those two ganged up and tickled him. Well, I expect it will not be long before Tommy and Jacob kiss and no one will be upset.
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Wolf is not ready for real chaos and his plans falling apart, It will be glorious to watch. Enrico was misunderstood and not seem as truly dangerous as he is. He skillfully robbed the guards to get the tools he needed. Enrico was taken to be with Brian and Steve and together they soon will begin the wreak havoc. He took the boys to a room with a computer terminal and told Steve to mess up Wolf's AI system which is soon supposed to crash the world's financial system. Steve is in heaven. The computer system accepts him and gives him full control with Alex's drone leading the way. He is going to take down the AI threat Alex gives Brian a gun to protect Steve, Then Alex leaves them to cause more disturbance. Alex captured a cell phone from a guard and is calling others--like his men and maybe CSIS to alert it to in impending disaster and need for men to take back control of the dam.
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When the family gets together and finally listens to each other they can find solutions. It took time and some extra steps but the meeting in Will Hawaii home was conclusive They figured out Petrovic was providing data to get rid of his opponents and leave him and his core people harmless. Moreover, Jake, Brad and others would be tagged as the ones who leaked to the FBI. However, the drive was not opened at Escorial and no cash payment is going to be made so the family would not be implicated. The FBI will take down those with the evidence they have and further investigate Petrovic. Brad and Jake will ask for a pardon for BIG since they gave the files on the crime gangs. With Fellowes and his law firm destroyed, Ttavis should be free from any more problems.
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The town looks impressive and well planned. It must have a medic/doctor/clinic and security/police force. Alex can get the medical care he needs. I hope Wolf does not have people there watching out for him.
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People in high places will go all out to protect themselves. Rick and Helen might be careful and be on the lookout for people who could seek to kill them. It is not as if Rick does not also have to worry about a serial killer watching him.
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OMG--Kenny was determined to save Alex who was getting sicker with his wound clearly infected. They are very tired and worried. Alex needs real medical help. Kenny found/stole an old vehicle which just had enough gas to get safely to a distant place that might have food, fuel and medical care. But, now Kenny was uncertain of his new actions. He had no money and they are in distress that might make others suspicious. He has to check out the people he meets in case they might be Wolf's men. Will he find good Samaritans or the bad guys? I hope their luck holds out. We are going to find out soon.
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The lodge could be supported by propane powered generators. It could have large propane tanks and be set up to operate easily for a long time in a very cold mountain climate. It would not need a utility connected powerline from a distant station. The cameras and listening devices could gather evidence. Will is going to be isolated under military guard at his office. Silas has lost his most serious charge of a huge drone attack necessitating a military take over. The general is dead so his legitimacy is not available to claim leadership Might West, Andrew and Yani have the time and luck to find Peter et al before Silas acts. I hope so.... However, Silas is very angry and may act too early and think he still can bluster his way through since he really hates Will and Andrew. Peter and Matt are also isolated and cannot respond to the corruption charges. Might Silas have the new Conservative Party leader claim that Will should resign. Will Silas be deluded to think he can shock and overwhelm Will now that the military has him under guard away from his friends , Andrew, the media and Parliament. He could send the number two military commander into see Will and demand he resign due to the corruptions charges of people close to him. He could show Will pictures of Peter, Matt and his son Ned under military control implying they are hostages until he resigns. Will learned of his missing son at the end of Book one. What is Will going do next?
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Peter and Matt are thrown out of a military transport helicopter without coats and shoes in the bitter cold in the distant Canadian mountains. They were disoriented and lost. But, they fumble and eventually find a mountain lodge well lighted and go inside. They meet Ned who is the spitting image of a young Will Carter. He even has Will's mannerisms. Ned has no idea that Will is his father and they think Will does not know about Ned and are not opening to telling Ned. They investigated what is a high end mountain lodge maybe owned by someone connected to the Order and not a military institution. They have no way to communicate to the outside. Leaving the lodge without proper clothing would be deadly. There is ample good food and the heating works. Cameras are not fully hidden. They expect there are listening devices and that the surveillance system is being monitored in real time. Matt and Peter know they have oi be careful about what they do and say For now they are isolated and lost. " Their chance of rescue seemed very far away. "God help us all." West and Andrew and Yani need to up their game and find them. Can Yani break into the video feed that must be sent to the military headquarters and look for connections if they see the lodge,
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"Mi Papa did it. By removing their only means of escape, he now controls the only exit.” He pointed to the seaplane bobbing in the middle of the reservoir. “It's a cage match now, mi hermano." OK--What do the two want ? The Wolf wants to take his men and leave when he is ready. Enrico wants to take the two boys and leave safely. The Wolf's men could overwhelm the three. Both sides need assurances of safety. But, what about the planned disruption of the world's finances? So, Enrico and the Wolf need to talk and come to an understanding and realistic plan.
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Andrew should reflect on the deadly steps the Order's men have taken so far. His car was rammed in a brutal, serious chase and he could have died. Jane was killed in Louisiana.
