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  1. Lee Wilson

    Things Move Fast

    Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    Hmmm, I'm going to have to think about that one. I was not planning on having him be a victim of that, but I have a reason why not floating around in my evil mind.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Things Move Fast

    Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    The good characters are very good, the bad ones, um, yeah.
  3. Lee Wilson

    Things Move Fast

    Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    Definitely something I will address in the future. Another item with coverage at a later date. I have to consider exactly what I will do to them. I've had a couple similar scenarios in at least one other story. I don't want to repeat myself. But I'm sure you know, they're not getting off with a slap on the wrist.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Things Move Fast

    Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    Yikes! I might have to skip the chapter with Jill's story. You guys will show up at my house with pitchforks and torches. Although I do have to say, all your reactions are spot on.
  5. Lee Wilson

    Things Move Fast

    Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    With manure being the material used to bury her?
  6. Lee Wilson

    Things Move Fast

    Lee Wilson commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Things Move Fast

    Yeah, that about says it all.
  7. Lee Wilson
    After a long lunch, allowing the boys some time in the play area, Brendan took the kids to look at the house. It was roughly halfway between his and the kids’ house. One thing he wondered about was how Nick could run, and walk, for most of two days between the two houses. It would probably have taken him less than two hours. When he asked Nick about it, Nick simply said he walked around in circles a lot. Further interrogation would wait, but Brendan thought it was more than that. The house
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 28 S2

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 28 S2

    No, you’re wrong. The tornado picks up her house but leaves her behind because she’s too damn fat!
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 28 S2

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 28 S2

    It’s odd. I think of this chapter as a storm in the calm before a storm. A fairly tame chapter, the calm before a storm, but it had its own storm. Luella: Petty Plump Pimpled Blimp
  10. Lee Wilson
    I guess it shouldn't be a surprise about the type of abuse. I was holding onto to that for a bit, but you all are too smart. My feeling on the stuttering wasn't that it was related to any abuse, but as @Summerabbacat indicates, the head strikes could lead to something else. But will it? I'll agree that Nick's abuse has been the least brutal. A revelation in chapter 4 may cause a change of opinion on the psychological part. Complicity will go to the wayside in chapter 4 as well. Thanks. As with most criminals, they have to rot in jail for a long period sometimes even waiting for trial.
  11. Lee Wilson
    All possibilities. Further details forthcoming on some of this. Not so far along that I can’t address others that I haven’t yet. Agreed about returning them ‘home.’ It’ll be a fresh start for all them.
  12. Lee Wilson
    That is my hope as well.
  13. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A sad story, but life is often sad. Another song I think describes Carver:
  14. Lee Wilson
    My alter ego?
  15. Lee Wilson
    Nope. Again, reasons will be provided at a later date. Hey, I had something to do with that too, you know! 😁 As it should.
  16. Lee Wilson
    I can imagine there are CPS horror stories from all over the place. I only made them a little bad. They're not the true villains of this story. And I already mentioned Steve's mouth getting taped when he stuttered too much. I guess I wasn't subtle enough about Jill's treatment. But so far, it's just speculation. As I said above, there's more on that in a few chapters. I'm happy you think it's excellent. Maybe I'll keep doing this for a while. I'm already inside the top 100 authors by total word count. Onward and upward!!
  17. Lee Wilson
    And a perfectly valid worry it is.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Damn, another one that's been peeking at my manuscript. Horrors, yes, bailing out, hmmmm. Although, I suppose what sooner might be, definitely not the next few chapters, anyway.
  19. Lee Wilson
    I've even included a horror story about CPS. I'm not hitting them hard this time, aside from being understaffed and taking shortcuts, that actually benefit our main characters.
  20. Lee Wilson
    We're taking an old military position on that one, Don't Ask, Don't Tell. But I will say there will be a twist later with respect to that situation.
  21. Lee Wilson
    You'll hear a little more about Nick and Steven's stories in the next chapter. Like @weinerdog's school question, Jill's story is a bit of a longer wait.
  22. Lee Wilson
    In this case, I made it go fast due to the excuse they're understaffed. I honestly don't know exactly how it may or may not work. A little research, a lot of imagination. I think you can already tell things get moving quickly by the next chapter title.
  23. Lee Wilson
    I kind of pictured all the kids with dark hair. I don't think I've given them any specific physical attributes.
  24. Lee Wilson
    It was Steve's stuttering. Nope, it isn't that, but you'll have to wait a couple chapters for the answer. Probably legal, but I don't think it's going to go that way.
  25. Lee Wilson
    You're welcome. I think it slows down a little for the next couple chapters. Still lots happening though.
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