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  1. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, I realized that after a second read-through prior to the finale. We’ll pretend something happened to make them stop going to the first.
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 10 OxyStat

    Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 10 OxyStat

    I hope Carey’s not going to fall into something he’s not going to like. Sounds awfully suspicious to me.
  3. Lee Wilson
    Apollo is afraid of commitment. He gets too close to Carey and it scares him off. Poor Carey.
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    Chapter 8 Rikk’s

    Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 8 Rikk’s

    Carey’s going to fall off that fence he’s straddling between gay and straight. Bye, bye straight side.
  5. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 6 Bell

    Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 6 Bell

    The little shit is actually a big shit. Wow. He basically rapes Carey and tells his sister another story. What a f’d up family.
  6. Lee Wilson
    You’re welcome. I’m not sure what I like better, the writing phase or the compliments on my writing.
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    Chapter 4 Harper

    Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 4 Harper

    The two worlds collide. How will Toby re-enter the picture? Just keep reading stupid, maybe you’ll find out. Calling myself stupid if there was any doubt.
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    Chapter 3 Apollo

    Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 3 Apollo

    Okay, two encounters, two sudden disappearances. I wonder where this is going.
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2 The Lake

    Lee Wilson commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 2 The Lake

    Poor kid. He probably just started doing that because he was hungry. Does Carey come to his rescue? I guess I’ll have to read some more.
  10. Lee Wilson
    Late to the party. Good start. Have to wonder if Bell will reappear. I’m not sure if it’s a thing, like grammar police, I guess I’m with the numbers police. Apologies if you take this wrong, some oddball things just bug me: Midsummer of his seventeenth year, he was also only seventeen. One would turn seventeen at the end of his seventeenth year. You’re still sixteen during your seventeenth year. Are you one yet during your first year? Okay, I promise not to be pedantic for the rest of the story.
  11. Lee Wilson
    Glad you enjoyed it. I had help with the wedding details, but I did think it was a nice touch, thus searching for some details.
  12. Lee Wilson
    I didn't want to overdo it. A huge win like that would be unbelievable. Unbelievable things can't happen in fiction, right? 😝
  13. Lee Wilson
    What more? More chapters, I guess. 🤪
  14. Lee Wilson
    I hope I’m getting better so you have fewer suggestions. I am trying to do more show and less tell. I’ve said it at least a dozen times, but another won’t hurt. Thank you for all your help.
  15. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, I decided I had too many MEA (miserable ever after) endings. Needed to make one completely clean. I should add that because the next one starts at the bottom and works it’s way up also had something to do with the HEA.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Thank you, and you're welcome. I had to end at least one of my stories on a high note. No-one was harmed during the creation of this chapter.
  17. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. The start of the new one should post around the middle of next week. It's with a potential editor now.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Monday (Memorial Day) Colton's anxiety has been ramping up throughout the month following the finalizing of Shi-Woo's travel plans. He initially went along with my idea of surprising his parents, although he waffled back and forth on that decision almost daily. Now, with only two days until he arrives, Colton is completely against surprising his parents. After we were both home from work, I could see that it had become an epic disturbance for him. I put my hand on his shoulder. "Hey, i
  19. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. And to think I thought I could only do bad emotion scenes.
  20. Lee Wilson
    Some people jump to conclusions before knowing the whole story. First impression, yeah. For real? …
  21. Lee Wilson
    If you think they’re scum now…
  22. Lee Wilson
    Kids not only say the darnedest things, but will do them too.
  23. Lee Wilson
    Exactly.
  24. Lee Wilson
    I considered that, but common advice is don’t do anything that big for at least a year. Not sure that rule of thumb applies for divorce/death, but for sure, it would be disrupting for Dom.
  25. Lee Wilson
    It took you 12? I got myself after 4 sentences. Glad you liked it. Keep them tissues handy.
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