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Lee Wilson

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  1. I guess I got you too with the fake chapter 16 I left lying around.
  2. Or kill someone else. I did consider killing him, though. But why let him get off easy?
  3. True, but a DWI, I figure he'd be in the minimum-security section. Not as many hardened criminals. But, he still may have some problems.
  4. Because you read the first draft of chapter 16, and maybe it's changed?
  5. If he's smart he will, although, that may be in some doubt.
  6. Awwww, why not? Ooof. That wouldn't work too well, now would it? No, it's nobody we've encountered before. Yeppers. My thinking was it wasn't until just before he called Fred, and potentailly late in the day before he realized there wasn't much to eat. Well, not the contacts, anyway. What, you can't wait two days to find out? 😁
  7. Everybody was curious why Sebastian would call a staff meeting on a Tuesday. Cheryl knew something, but she wasn't saying. All of Sebastian's junior associates, Kirsten, and Cheryl were waiting in the small conference room. Sebastian walked in. It was obvious he was unhappy about something. "I won't keep you all long. Over the course of the next three and a half days, I'll be meeting with all my junior associates to hand off my cases. Fortunately, I only have five open cases, so I can almos
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 14

    Maybe not a sequel, but an epilogue might have been a nice touch to tie up the loose ends. A good story though, a nice mix of characters.
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    Chapter 13

    Things are looking better for some of the characters. I can see Mr. Vance being angry with Devin, but he’d have to be a complete moron (like many of my homophobic characters) to hurt Devin.
  10. Thanks much.
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    Chapter 12

    Another chapter, more drama.
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    Chapter 11

    Poor Devin. He starts to turn the corner and he’s about to be knocked down a few pegs when Ashley gives him the bad news. Can’t say he didn’t deserve it.
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    Chapter 9

    The abortion regrading Ashley is actually around sixteen years too late.
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    Chapter 9

    Had to comment before I read the others. Paul needs a serious ass-kicking. I wouldn’t mind seeing a little four or six on one action.
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    Chapter 6

    Cameron’s uncle being gay didn’t surprise me either, but the coach? Excellent twist.
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    Chapter 5

    I feel the opposite about dad than others here. I think Kevin will be pleasanly durprised when his father finds out.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 4

    Ashley isn’t the only bitch in this one. Sherri needs some interpersonal skills corrections too.
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    Chapter 4

    Uh oh. My next story has this problem, except it’s Derek and Erik. But they’re only 7.
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    Chapter 3

    Paul might be painfully disappointed when he tries to help Devin kick Cameron’s ass if Kevin is around.
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    Chapter 2

    Devin should be protecting his brother, not harassing his new friend. Asshole is too nice a word for him.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Came across this one in the news blog. Sounded interesting. That thought was accurate. Looking forward to the rest.
  22. I, fortunately, haven’t had to deal with a parent or grandparent with dementia, but my mom lives 9 years after having a pretty severe stroke. That they will.
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