Manny had his issues, but overall, likable when you get yo know him better.
It’s a transition for him, hopefully he’s ip to the task. Otherwise it’ll be a very short story.
I definitely painted Manny in a negative light. You’re not alone thinking about him in that way.
Rocky’s a smart ass, but he’s also pretty smart. Smugness comes from entitlement.
Thanks for joining the fold. Your Bassey looks cute. A little like my Chloe. One of 8.
Yeah, that wasn’t really a surprise as it turns out.
And here I thought I made the name up from Tanner. All possibilities though.
Manny’s like a fine wine, he improves with age.
Manny pulled up to the front gate at two-forty. The commute there was quicker than he thought it would be. He went around two curves on the driveway before he saw the house.
Manny talked to himself when he was alone, so in his car, this was a common occurrence, "Holy shit. That's a big mother-fucking house. What the hell did Boris do?"
He pulled up to an empty spot next to the four-car garage, thinking that he wouldn't block anyone in parking there. He walked up the front stairs—he'd h
Thanks. Obviously, being from a prompt, I can't take any credit for the idea itself. Just the details.
Mostly written ahead, I'm working on chapter 9 at this point. Zuri gets an early copy, makes his suggestions, I integrate, then I post. I'm constantly reviewing the next chapter(s) to try and refine it as much as possible.
Keep that image handy. Although, I wish it was smaller.
Damn, and I thought I hid my manuscript well this time.
I don't know yet. OK, maybe I do. Sort of.
Amazingly good questions. I'm not saying. Yet.
On the surface, let's dig a little deeper over the next couple chapters, shall we?
One shoe? Macy's whole shoe department!
Good, I was hoping it wasn't too corny.