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Lee Wilson

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  1. Do not send flowers, please donate to the Russian Mafia.
  2. No intent for nude swimming, although there is something slightly related upcoming. They are: "The rest of the staff had rooms at the back of the ground floor." Nope. No kidnapping successfully occurs.
  3. On the way to the pool, Manny realized, he hadn't brought a swimsuit. "Um, Bass. I don't have a bathing suit with me." "That's no problem. Mr. Tanner kept quite a few in the cabana. That is, of course, if you're okay with wearing a dead man's things." "As long as they've been washed. It may be a little creepy, but I can handle it." "Excellent. You look to be the same size he was. We can take a look through his wardrobe later and you can have anything you like before we donate
  4. Maybe, maybe not. You’ll learn the answer in chapter 4.
  5. On my profile, the ‘About Me’ section is completely musical. No literary references yet.
  6. I guess we’ll see if it was or not. Perhaps he covered his tracks well as far as his “job” was concerned. All makes sense to me. Me too!
  7. Yeah, he’s hooked.
  8. Thanks for taking the bait. Your guesses about the Mrs, are all wrong. You’ll find out in time.
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Buckle your seat belt, you’re in for a ride.
  10. Definitely hypothesis, I haven’t written any more on that topic, yet. May be difficult with Boris, you know, dead and all.
  11. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 50

    Even some of what Calvin read shows him in a pretty bad light. He’s going to look like a complete moron when Billy gets done with him.
  12. P.S. I guess my ‘About Me’ only warrants a 1/3 on your scoring method.
  13. All very good points. Is this something that will become a problem for him later? Maybe, I haven’t gotten there yet. Jaws plus Schwarzenegger times two. Hope is a good thing, maybe the best thing. Etc., etc. I’ll try to work in the literary references too. Maybe some Mario Puzo or Henry Hill?
  14. Lust at first sight.
  15. Not a tough choice. What are those commercials with the painfully obvious choices, Geico maybe? Love to see one for that choice.
  16. Ivan’s dead, but he did have “friends.”
  17. Hmmmm, someone’s been reading ahead again.
  18. Only if you’re really a dachshund!
  19. I’ll toss out a hypothesis here. Perhaps Boris was more concerned with keeping his son safe than himself. More yo learn for sure.
  20. Of course. Would it be a Lee Wilson story without problems?
  21. Manny had his issues, but overall, likable when you get yo know him better. It’s a transition for him, hopefully he’s ip to the task. Otherwise it’ll be a very short story.
  22. At least it wasn’t chapter 1. 🤪
  23. Lots of comments already. Good observations. Wariness is necessary. It is me writing the story after all.
  24. I definitely painted Manny in a negative light. You’re not alone thinking about him in that way. Rocky’s a smart ass, but he’s also pretty smart. Smugness comes from entitlement. Thanks for joining the fold. Your Bassey looks cute. A little like my Chloe. One of 8.
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