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Lee Wilson

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  1. I'm going to change my middle initials to KP - Karma Provider.
  2. Completely out of my extremely demented imagination. Although I'm sure the punching parts really do happen. Yes. I'm not planning anything devious with Colton. Perhaps a minor bump here or there, but he's "safe."
  3. Both the karma and sunshine comments are dead on.
  4. Wednesday - Mercer County Jail The first Public Defender assigned to [1] Zach's case had a child close to Dominic's age and begged off the case. Knowing he wouldn't give his all, his supervisor agreed, handing the defense an immediate appeal. The second PD knew what his job was, and although Zach's actions revolted him, he agreed to take the case. He's led to the visitor's room, where he waits for Zach. Zach arrives and immediately has questions. "Where's the other guy? Pissoff or what
  5. Roger will set the local record for dropped passes.
  6. I don't know. I'd say this was just the kickoff. Beth has to be careful of the illegal use of hands penalty as well.
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 4

    Things are going to get messy, I believe. That was definitely an unexpected turn of events.
  8. Dad is definitely bigger. You know what they say about assuming. Dick-tok - pretty funny. Roger is Roy's brother, but it was Roger's friend Daniel that wanted to take a peek. Daniel and David are twins, and yes, just friends with Roger. Although that topic will come up again later.
  9. He’s a good kid. Not yet eight, not yet fully corrupted like teens these days.
  10. Besides, I can make them as stupid as I want.
  11. A reckoning is at hand. You are right about his permanent residence. Again, I wasn't going to let anything to bad happed to Dominic.
  12. I guess the doofus who was writing the story didn't think of that. And yes, the plan is described in the next chapter.
  13. Yes, there was no way I was going to write that anything worse happened to the boys. I may have my mean streaks, but they're almost always directed at the bad guys.
  14. Shhhh. Don't give anything away.
  15. Friday At lunchtime, Jackson left his class for a few minutes to go to Mrs. Patrick's room. "Do you think I can talk to Dominic for a minute, Mrs. Patrick?" "Sure, Mr. Trevon, we still have a few minutes before I start back up." "Great. Thanks." Jackson walked up to Dominic, who was eating lunch with Mark. "Hi, Dominic." Dominic kept looking at his sandwich. "Hi, Mr. Trevon." "Did your dad say anything about the play?" "Yes. He said I could do it. I r
  16. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 3

    “My gaydar must have amnesia too.” Great line. Harry should at least try to abstain until his head ‘gets straight.’
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I'll answer, since I did the same thing. It's fiction. It doesn't have to match real life.
  18. I think I enjoy doing it as much as you all reading it (mostly).
  19. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    Harry is digging his hole deeper and deeper. Like akascrubber said, he's going to ruin the firm. Stuart is an emotional wreck, but he's doing everything he can to help Harry 'find himself.' Keep up the good work.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Interesting beginning. What I find amazing is the parallel to a portion of my story 'Rocked to the Core.' But best I can tell, looking at likes and comments for at least the beginning of the story, you didn't read it: Who's Jeremy? Have I been using my middle name, sort of? Where am I and why am I here? Who's this guy asking me questions? I have to admit though, he's way hot. Real tall, pretty well-defined body. God, dark brown eyes that just draw you in. Slightly too long dark brown hair. Clean shaven, or maybe just more of a boyish complexion. I'd be crazy to hope he was gay. Way too macho. Macho. Yeah, that's right. I came out to my parents, dad told me to 'get the fuck out of his house,' and smacked me in the side of my head. So, where the hell is he? And why, or how, do I have a beard? "I'm sorry. I'm a little, no, a lot, confused. I don't know who you are or why you're calling me Jeremy Berger. I kind of understand the Jeremy part. My name is Bryson Jeremiah Burlington. The last thing I remember was telling my parents I was gay, and my dad clocked me in the side of my head. This obviously isn't my house in Cleveland, Georgia. And I didn't have a beard, so it probably isn't March 2021 anymore." There's even a relapse of the amnesia where my character doesn't know he's gay. I am going to truly love this story; I can feel it in my bones.
  21. Not being facetious. I don't recall ever hearing the term, although I pretty much immediately could guess what it meant. The NHL simply calls them advanced stats. NFL, if I've heard a corresponding, term, I don't remember it. I don't follow baseball any more than being able to name one player, and only because I looked who the best current Braves player was specifically for this story. Basketball, same thing, looking up a specific player (the tallest in the NBA, Bobovich or something like that), for a story. I can however, name dozens from many years ago for both baseball and basketball. I'll pass on being more specific about nifty, because most, if not all, of my stories there fall outside of GA's guidelines. Acronymic hints, LBDLL, and TGBOB are the two related. Color me surprised, acronymic didn't get a red squiggly line. Here I thought I was making up a word. Dang it.
  22. And thank you. Would have been nothing wrong with making it longer, I just got to a point where I didn't really have any ideas to move it forward. A couple questions and a comment. 1. Why? Is Mahomes gay? Not a Chiefs fan, nor a fan of his. 2. Sabermetrics. That's measuring the size of sabertooth tiger teeth, right? Ain't they extinct? That'd be a pretty boring job. I know it's spelled differently. 3. I've often considered revisiting some of my previous characters. I did write one short sequel after closing out the story, on nifty. Cory and Roy are up there among the favorite characters I've created, so who knows?
  23. Thanks. The next one has a pretty rough start, so maybe a HEA ending there will be in the cards.
  24. Sunday Christmas dinner with the Stones was great. Now the best part of Christmas is happening. Cory's spending the night. It's not like that's unusual, but he said he had a special present for me. He already gave me a really nice Falcons shirt, so I'm thinking, well, hoping, it's something more personal. A lot more personal. We left his house around seven PM. We got to my house and told my parents we were going to play video games in my room. Dad asked if he could see me in his office
  25. It came from the dark recesses of my demented mind. I did say Jackson had a hidden agenda. I didn't say it was nice. But, yes, good will win out over evil.
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