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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Jason has a new signature graphic. Fortunately it doesn’t show up in comments. At least not on my cell phone
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Check your messages
  3. Yes, I do expect to return him to the police force at some point in time. I’m struggling with moving forward on the two ongoing stories lately, but I’m sure I’ll return to this in the future.
  4. Yeah, probably the worst of the Saggio series. Thanks.
  5. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    That’s not a fault. It’s pretty much a requirement. After 20k or so words, it’s easy to lose track of details at least a little.
  6. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    I could try… What color hair do you have Krista?
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    I thought Joel passed on the wings and only Davin ate them?
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    I can say from experience, sometimes they practically demand it. See the comments in chapter 27 of “Rocked to the Core” if you don’t believe me: https://gayauthors.org/story/lee-wilson/rocked-to-the-core/27
  9. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Whoa! Hooooold on thar Babalooey! Perhaps you skipped this part:
  10. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Hmmm. I wonder… Wasn’t there someone who made an effort at finishing someone else’s story? Last year, I think it was. Maybe that person will volunteer. Or accept a nomination if one is presented. Who am I kidding? I can’t even find the motivation to continue the two ongoing stories of my own. Although it would be an interesting challenge.
  11. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    It’s okay. I’m only mean to fictional characters. I wouldn’t go as far as saying I’m a pacifist, but I’ve never really ever been in a fight and I avoid confrontation as much as possible.
  12. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    Shot in the head and lingered in a coma for a while before she awoke but had no control of her body. Believe it or not, based on who she was and what she did, I was kind to her.
  13. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    I’m sure I could volunteer a few more moms/women to join that tea party. I know I’ve written at least a few of them. Aunt Jessica from “Before and After the Divorce” might be the best candidate. I’d suggest Kathy Taft from “The Boy on the Porch,” but I killed her.
  14. Seems? I think any jury would find her guilty of first degree control freaking in about 30 seconds. Nice chapter. I hope Ollie gets into college. Even a D3 school is better than none. Maybe he’ll shine at web development. He can always have HTML guides and the like at his fingertips while he’s working.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Hybrid Theory, their first album was released in October, 2000. So they were indeed a thing.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I’ll add it to my to do list.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    @Krista if this is truly the end, you’ll want to mark the story as complete so the 30 reviews that are waiting to be written can happen.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31

    If it has to end, this is definitely a good place to leave it. I’ll miss the characters and the banter in the comments. They could be a book in themselves. I’ll start working on the 200,000 word epilogue tomorrow. OK. Not really.
  19. But, but, you gave it a like emoji. You know, maybe it should have been you like the poetry anthologies? 😁 They scare me, but I have put in the attempts.
  20. My thought exactly. They were in such a hurry to get to the pool, they didn’t secure the door. Did the snow tracks have to be theirs? Or did Ethan leave them whilst sneaking in?
  21. Paging Detective Saggio. We need you to solve the case of the stolen underpants. Will Bethany be left out? Inquiring minds want to know.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 30 S3

    Well the stakeout was mostly successful. Mac got injured, but at least he was still able to continue his story. Hmmm, would Devin have taken over the narrative if you killed Mac, or would that be the end? Hehe
  23. No problem. There were 15 “cities.” The original Captain had the lake named for him. So there were 8 others who were only mentioned in the population count: Baxter got the smallest out of all them. The unmentioned all were to get 464 colonists.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 30

    I’m not so sure about the chewing aspect. Licking and sucking might work better
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 30

    Never would I suppose such an outrageous idea. Unthinkable!
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