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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 26

    Lee Wilson commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Or knock him off his bike to break an arm. Kickers may tend to be smaller, but they also tend to kick in fights too. Although having your foot caught four or five feet off the ground usually doesn’t turn out well.
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    Chapter 26

    Lee Wilson commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 26

    I made the kicker one of the assholes in one of my stories. Kicker, linebacker, and lineman. I think a linebacker in a second story. Not sure I made that one’s position obvious.
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    Back to school and drama, me?
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    Thanks much. I must be getting soft in my old age.
  5. Lee Wilson
    I suppose the “tissue time” in the chapter notes has nothing to do with your hayfever.
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    Chapter 26

    Lee Wilson commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Definitely a different Gavin this chapter. Watch the knuckles Joel. Hit Jax with the base of your palm, it’ll do just as much damage and Celia won’t see bruised knuckles.
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    Very good adjective, resilient.
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    I’m confident he’ll get through it with the love of his new family.
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    Thanks much.
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    Hopefully there were some good memories triggered too.
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    Caught? Or just an educated guess? Wow, separated all summer. If Ollie gets horny, Will Logan jump in and ruin things?
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    They finally made their way into Darren’s bedroom. Luca and Darren gathered up the loose stuff from Darren’s closet. Papá and Angel carried the heavier items out to the truck. Since Darren had brought most of his clothes Saturday, there wasn’t a lot of packing to do. Darren grabbed his bag of hockey equipment, and Luca carried the few sticks that hadn’t been broken. It took just over two hours to empty Darren’s room. “Come with me to my parents room, Luca, please.” “Sure. I would have
  13. Lee Wilson
    Change the names to protect the guilty and call it new!
  14. Lee Wilson
    I think Five may be a lot more gay than he pretends to be.
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    Dad is at least tolerant. Mom needs a swift kick in the tee… um, pants.
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    Yes, Oliver, there is a picture of you next to obtuse in the dictionary.
  17. Lee Wilson
    DnD, definitely an acquired ‘taste.’ I bet I’d be like Ollie, games should be simple.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Yep, Oliver is missing all the signals from Logan. You’re his crush Ollie-boy. That’s a situation that could blow up very ugly.
  19. Lee Wilson
    And they get closer. Hope Oliver can survive his parents attitudes.
  20. Lee Wilson
    You apparently suffer the same affliction. I said reading comprehension. For whatever reason, I remember tv and movies better. Reruns aren’t my fault, lol.
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    Amusement Park

    Lee Wilson commented on Celian's story chapter in Amusement Park

    Sorry. It just seems like maybe more explanation/history would have helped me understand what really happened. But based on your response, I suppose the how or why shouldn’t be important. He disappeared, came back inexplicably once, then a year later again to do whatever to another friend and they parted ways.
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    I’m glad I don’t have very good reading comprehension. I remember reading this before, but it’s just as new and fresh as the first time. Details escape me so I can enjoy it again.
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    Amusement Park

    Lee Wilson commented on Celian's story chapter in Amusement Park

    I went with like, but I’m honestly not sure. Definitely want what I expected. Others asked for a continuation, I kind of feel like I missed something in what is here. But then, werewolves and vampires are not my thing.
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    Poem

    Lee Wilson commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Poem

    Nice. I almost opened and closed the poem out.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Inkognito's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I’m not allowed to laugh out loud in public. You made me break one of my rules. It’s December. That means I have to write a story about someone I remember from school. We used to joke his sister was named Mary. Mary Christmas. Really. True story. I’d tell you where to find him on Classmates but then I might give something away about myself nobody needs to know. Well, almost nobody.
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