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  1. I don't know about that. Nobody complained to me! 😜
  2. I'm too shy! 🙈
  3. I'm glad you are continuing this story. I know its kinky, taboo...and little bit on the edge comparing to other writings here at GA. Nevertheless, your style is amazing, plot is intriguing, and tension is so high. Joshua is predator, using his brother lack of medicine to take him. How is Noah going to break free? Is Shane going to be able to help him? Journalists are offering help but, is the cost for their help going to be too high?!
  4. I like Gordy! I've been thinking he is some old pervert, but he is just another exhibitionist in @Robert Hugill's 'naked buts gallery'! 😁 Fire-crotch!!! I know how THAT looks like! Even with hair getting darker and graying beard, 'fire-crotch' still burns it its flames! 😂 (sorry for TMI 😉)
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    Quack, Quack

    Enough tape can make it thicker! 🤷‍♂️
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    Quack, Quack

    I'm curious - what was the redneck's story and is it based on true events?! Oh, I see the answer now, @weinerdog was faster!!!
  7. In one word - HILARIOUS!!! Lee excelled in comedy again! Warning! Don't try this at home!
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    Quack, Quack

    Ahahahhahahah, Lee, before doing anything with his dick, your guy needs lobotomy! 😂🤣😂
  9. The story is perfect just the way it is! You have focused on one very important, I would say crucial part of Jacob and Tyler's life. That makes this story so intense, something you can read in 'one breath'. Turning it into a saga would make the message of this story less prominent.
  10. Trauma from the childhood and violence outburst triggered by the 'f' word! It all makes sense now. What amazes me the most is support from friends, especially Tyler! Incredible character!
  11. I'm reading this story and have so strong deja vu! Has it already been published elsewhere or I was reading it before becoming a member at GA...I really cannot remember... Nevertheless, amazing characters and interesting plot. Great work @Jeff Burton!
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    Chapter 1

    I LOVE that film! A true sci-fi! Idea to communicate with aliens using the music - amazing!
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    Chapter 1

    Well, if it means something, I like the original trilogy, I don't like prequels and sequels!
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    Chapter 1

    Everybody likes 'Star Wars' - it's not sci-fi, it's a fairytale! 😁
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    Chapter 1

    🤣😂🤣 Well @Paladin your characters are certainly not waiting - always straight at the point! 😁 You've made a nice little mystery around Aaron! Who is he and where is he from? Might be from the future but might be an alien... Is he one of those honest people without filter, or there is a light spectrum of Asperger there? Great start - funny and intriguing!
  16. I thought Dexter knows Carter is Ethan's twin brother and that is the reason he locked Elena - to prevent truth coming out. Obviously, only Elena knows the truth and the reason for capturing her is something else (or nothing at all - Dexter is simply sick bastard).
  17. The best argumentation ever! If you have problem with it than take the twins!
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    Chapter 10

    I know it's ridicules being jealous of fictional characters, but I really envy their sex life, stamina and passion. It's so tender and emotional how Quinn takes care of Orion's legs and scars. Sex is great but this is love.
  19. Being diagnosed with Diverticulosis, I know the word of the day way too good! 🤪
  20. Death of Jeremy's father rises some questions. Why would anybody wont a death of good, honest, family man? Unless...it was a family member, or someone very close to family who saw him as obstacle. Carter didn't say the complete story - the part about his mother and twin brother. Could Jeremy connect the facts based on that information or it is still too early for that?
  21. You have no idea how happy I am to hear you are well!!!!!! I've been watching news last night...actually, the impact happened early in the morning CET.
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    Chapter 2

    I agree with @Al Norris very informative (educative) story! Gender issue is so complex...as human nature is, I suppose. You wrapped it nicely in a romantic story! Thank you @CassieQ!
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    Chapter 1

    Beautiful! Unlike 'en pointe' I see the trace of light here! Barking dogs seldom bite! Always remember - lash is in your hands! xo
  24. Written in poetic style, no verses but story you could easily recite on the stage - simply marvelous! Such conflict of emotions - both regrets and reliefs; sadness and acceptance of end. We see that love doesn't die the day when it's over, it cannot be switched off. You ended the story An Accidental Clarity with words "You are human...!" It's exactly what this story says - being human, having emotions and memories... Oh, how I envy the people who can turn around and never look back!
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    Well, Well, Well

    Ahahhahahhahah, Lee, you are CRAZY!!! Only YOU can take topic 'In Too Deep' literary! 😂 Good you haven't written about colonoscopy!!! 😂 Still laughing...😂🤣🤣
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