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Purchasing this house is the smartest thing Adam has ever done in his life!
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I'm very close to the conclusion that @kbois wrote ALL stories!!! (too much free time after the end of the tunnel)!
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This is joyful story that promotes amazing friendship. But still, I'm wondering, was it a proper way Timothy used to get true out of Jason. If he has seen something on Jason's iPad, why didn't he talk to him about it in private. Why making all this performance with pink jockstrap, just to prove something to Stephen who even kept silent about himself! Owen seems like a great guy, good for conversation at least! (If he is not some 'Christmas Ghost 🙂)
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Good point, that was really left hanging! 👍
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Reunion with Ahmat was not something that Matt wanted, but he had his suspicions. Nevertheless, this wasn't unpleasant encounter. It was emotional and touchy farewell. Looking Ahmet's destiny, question arises about 'freedom', the issue you've brought in some earlier comments @Mikiesboy. What is freedom and who is really free?
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But I'm still wondering, how easily Matt is thinking of hiring unknown taxi driver who introduced himself as former tourist guide! I mean, this guy might be perfectly ok but, with Matt experience as victim of human trafficking, wouldn't he be cautious and distrustful with people?! Afraid that someone wants to hurt him...?
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I'm so late to the orgy party! Compering to you guys, I'm such softcore!
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This chapter made me look at Doc in a new light (and NO, I don't think about weapon in his pants). His 'inappropriate' behavior and his honest speaking without any filters might be not just part of his personality, but his way of fighting PTSD and war traumas! Adam might be overwhelmed but ultimately, Doc gained his respect, maybe even admiration. Beautiful chapter, it is going to be interesting to see when the third sibling come! 🙂
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And normal! When we put all prejudices aside, isn't it hot to watch two cute teenagers!
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You've covered some very important topics in this story - child abuse and pedophilia, domestic violence, neglection etc. Now, you're discussing cybercriminal and devastated consequences it might cause. I'm glad it's Bradley who showed interest in topic. Before he expressed his interest in programming and now, he wants to explore this new field...after all, he is his father's son! Beautiful chapter @Paladin.
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All the roles were played by men anyway!
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How did I miss your comment?! I've been just thinking - where is @akascrubber when you need him?! He gives the best summaries. He will know who's who!
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Well, this is...*looking for a word*...weird! Good story, with so many he/she mixings that I was confused at the end - who is who, who is he, who is she. Even when thinking that I finally understand - I'm not sure I'm right!
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I like your coming-of-age stories. I like Shakespeare too, so, combined those two, you've written great short story. Ha, King Dick III, reminds me of parody on Shakespeare's dramas I watched some years ago in Cambridge. The title was "Richard the Turd"! I'm wondering about one thing: "Oddly, at both schools you could be subject to corporal punishment". Is it allowed, in Texas or South Africa?!
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Amazing! Thanx!
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The Bakery – Endings and Beginnings
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Bakery – Endings and Beginnings
I don't understand why they want to frame Mitchell's drawing...to hang it above the baguettes in Liam's bakery? 😜 -
This story started as tender, romantic, calm and slow burning piece! How did it become so funny and exciting?! Have you planned it @Andr0gene or story just went in that direction?
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Alltopia is in Nick's head, Connecticut is reality! Similar as Doroty from "The Wizard of Oz". She lives in Kansas but, after being hit by tornado, she finds herself in fictional Land of Oz!
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The Bakery – Endings and Beginnings
Cane23 commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Bakery – Endings and Beginnings
Of course he liked something in him - his dick! Greg should take every penny he can from the old bastard! -
Amazing story. I've been wandering is it sci-fi, magic, shifters, angels...what kind of world the Secret Author is guiding us through? Till the end had no idea it is all happening in Nick's head! I've read it again to find out some subtitle connections between conscious and subconscious. Malcom takes care of Nick, but in Nick's head (in Alltopia) he is shown as Malach (Angel). Author leaves a hope that Nick's guardian angel will help him wake up.
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Yes, a rock musical needs a strong hand asap! Is it Snowy or someone else but, if somebody doesn't take a weel in his hands, this ship is going to sink! Too much democracy leads to anarchy!
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If Kai is 'hallo soldier' than what shall be Adam - 'hallo writer'?! (hope not 'hallo Kitty')
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I'm always amazed how passionate your characters are. Carter slapping Jeremy is like a scene from Latino telenovela! He is still insecure and starts apologizing while he should turn around with dignity and leave the f*cking place! While I know Dexter is a bad guy, who is plotting (what we already know and what we are assuming) to get Jeremy, Jeremy has never clearly put a distance and red lines. I mean...he is giving him massage in office!?!?!?
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Reading for the second time! This is...just...beautiful!
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