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  1. Paladin
    Thank you noticing and especially for commenting. I'm pleased that readers appreciate some of the little things I plant in my stories.
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    That could all still be one man! The barman asked him what he wanted. "I'll have an entendre, no make it a double." So the barman gave him one.
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    Chapter 2

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Will Simon find a loophole in the Ministry's bureaucracy? Misplaced paperwork? No birth certificate or maybe an incorrectly completed or lodged birth certificate? Cecil seems to be warming to this dads along with smoke, flame and Latin.
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    Chapter 1

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Tyler is confident about his relationship with Taine. He may be relying on love and lust, or his status in the Ministry database as a Class-A Metaphysical Dependent to an Immortal Entity (Taine). I love that he is tempting Taine to attempt a relationship with Charlie.
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    Chapter 11

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    #TeamCherub not #TeamCharub ??
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    Not long now before you meet her @Summerabbacat.
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    Thank you @Lynx003. I'm still working on the sequel to 'What Brings Us Together' told from Daniel and Kevin's perspective. Hmm only the future will tell if the stories dovetail. 🤞
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    Thanks @Flip-Flop. Keep reading Natasha next chapter and later, more on Martin and Nathan.
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    Me too!
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    Yes @Daddydavek, a few more bumps. I agree it would make sense for Nathan to move and live with Martin. They would have the support of two same sex couples. Yes adulthood is only a few months away for the twins.
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    A sad situation @Gary L. Australia is also facing the grim results of climate change. The Great Barrier Reef is suffering.
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    Yes @Davide Nathan and Martin need to come to understand their sexuality. While they don't need to label themselves they have to deal with how other people label them. Natasha features in the next chapter. Noah's age hasn't been mentioned, but he is 16 (Year 10 at school). He's straight.
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    Nathan and Martin are definitely cute together but they still have a lot to work through. Rick and Simon are there to help. Benjamin's twin is Maria, Noah is their younger brother. They do come into the story later. You will meet Natasha in the next chapter @Summerabbacat. I'm sure you will have more observations then.
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    I thought people on the Mediterranean weren't allowed to complain about the weather. I thought it was always like the Queensland promotional campaign, "Beautiful one day, perfect the next." Natasha does appear in the next chapter.
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    Lucky you. On holiday. In a bar with your phone open waiting for notifications. OK full holiday disclosure, what apps were you monitoring?
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    Yes @chris191070 life is like that. It has its ups and downs, Tumultuous. Don't worry, Martin and Nathan will get more but not immediately. More about Ben next chapter.
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    The unsure lovers exchanged text messages as Nathan was on his way to work where he had difficulty concentrating on his clients as his mind kept slipping back to Martin and last night. During a break he went out for a coffee and tried to rationalize what was happening to him. He looked around the café and through the window onto the street. No, he didn't see himself as attracted to men. Even those in the café and walking past that he could appreciate as "cute" or "attractive" did zero for h
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    I admire the courage of the few elite sportsmen who have been prepared to come out publicly as gay, at great risk to their careers.
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    Chapter 11

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    My impression was that Pip is a demon when pumping Charlie.
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    Simon is well paid. Also his lover, Rick, is an important member of the family business. He's doing OK
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    Chapter 11

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Did Pip get promoted in all the chaos?
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    Chapter 8

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    That's a good line!
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    Chapter 8

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    The Ley lines at the church are important. Does the squad have a way of interfering with their power?
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    Chapter 8

    Paladin commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Or Demons in the 1970's
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