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The Sound of the Ultimate Sacrifice, Through trembling night, the bugle weeps, A mournful cry where silence sleeps. Soft notes drift- then rise then fall Another farewell whispered, a solemn call of the ultimate sacrifice. Beyond the ridge, where banners lay, The wailing wind and sorrow stay. For every tear, a mother's cry, Her sacrifice etched in the sky. For every tear that streaks the land, A brother's oath- no soldier left behind. A steady hand in duty sworn, Though l
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Tears, the Language of the Soul They fall without a sound, A river etched in quiet pain, Tracing lines upon the skin, Like whispers lost in rain. Each drop holds a shattered dream, A memory sharp as a razor blade And bright as blood, Echoes of a distant voice, That brings comfort as it fades into the night. Yet not all tears are born from grief, Some shine in love's embrace— An embrace that is eternal, Like silver threads of gratitude, Or joy’s unbridled grace. For tears are
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Grief By: Brandon Haines Grief is like a river that is winding and wild, a tide that pulls, a whispering child that is whispering for a love that is gone but not forgotten. It flows through valleys deep and wide, hiding beneath the shifting tide. It flows through valleys deep and wide, hiding beneath the shifting tide, grief is like the Mariana Trench deep and uncharted. Grief is like a river that is calm one day and untamed the next. A flood of sorrow, a spark of flame. It disapp
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That would be a good idea for Will, to do, but he won't do that because that is too much like something Brad would do.
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I agree whole heartedly that 33 is too young.
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Thank you @Gary L. It is also one of my favorite lines in the poem.
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yeah but Travis has fought tooth and nail about the guard. He knows he is still at risk since they don't know who hired the guy to stalk him and run him over with his motorbike. Yet he goes to one of the busiest airports in the world. He is being dumb and taking risks that are not necessary. Just because he doesn't want a guard. If I was Will, I would tell Travis if he does this shit again we are over
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@Mark Arbourthat was a good chapter.
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What I want the most I can not have for what I want the most is to have my brother back. Since I can’t have what I want the most, I will have to just settle with knowing that one day I will get what I want the most. For what I want the most is to be able to hug my dear brother. What I want the most is not a gift you can find in the mall or a high end department store. What I want the most you can’t wrap it and put it under the Christmas tree. Since I can’t have what I want the most I s
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Dedicated to my Mom who left a Grand Canyon-sized hole in my heart. But she also left all these memories of her love and dedication to me and her family. I call out her name when I seek comfort I call out her name when I am seeking the loving touch of a mother I call out her name when I’ve had a bad dream I will call out her name when I'll see her once again in heaven In moments of joy and sorrow, her name is my haven, Her love, an everlasting presence in
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family embrace is poems that I have wrote about the embrace of family how it is always eternal never ending. all of my poems are short and will be about the love of family. the poems are about losing loved ones.
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@Mark ArbourThat was a great chapter. I really don't think that Will is the target because if he was they would not mess with Travis they would just kidnap him to lure Will out
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if it was Claire, than she has really lost it like white jacket lost it. Because not only would Brad just go ape shit on her so would JP and Stef shit even Isidore would go ape shit on her.
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@Mark Arbourthat was a hard chapter to read. I have friends that have been a victim of sexual assault and rape. and it effects them for years. but other than that it was a good chapter.
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knowing Will I say it will be more like two slugs one in between the eyes and one in the guys micro 🍆. or better yet Will, will take a quick trip to California and meet that director and show him how to screw people over and maybe piss on Curtis grave as a bonus.
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no not really besides I can't give the redhead any space when they are in their wild hair mood. Since I am the redhead. 🤣
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Not really since I have redheads in my family so I am use to the quick wit and as quick temper.
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I rolled my eyes but followed her without protest just so I could say later that I went because I wanted to, and not because she’d made me. right Max🙄 keep telling yourself that. just be honest and admit that your scared of the redhead powerhouse.
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@MacTravis is trying to stay in the closet so since Travis is wanting to stay in the closet he only has a few ways to work this out into his favor. one he could name drop Will's Stepfather Robbie and if that doesn't work he could name drop Stef's name granted he has been out of the Hollywood Sene for nearly 10 years when his partner Greg passed away
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I find Claire's snit is worse than JJ's snits not all of the coming out that Mark have wrote come out as nice as this two come to mind in this series one is Jake in the book Be Rad and the one about Robbie also in Be Rad
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@JJQuinnThat was a really good chapter. Now I can really understand why Ben, acted the way he did. Still doesn't mean I agree with it but I understand why.
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Oh I was more than just frustrated with Ben. I wanted to just smacked him hard. But I am to scared of Sam beating my butt if Sam didn't kick my butt I would be scared of Tara kicking my butt if Tara didnt do it I would be scared of Sofia if she didn't kick my butt i would be scared of Addie Cat if she didnt kick my butt I would be scared of Cayden kicking my butt
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@JJ Quinn That was a better chapter than last. I can understand that Ben was hurt when Sam walked out but he is being a total asshole and if i was Sam I would text Ben that says if you are done I want MY DAMN DOG TAGS BACK. and if you're not done that open the damn door.
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@akascrubber I think you solved one of the mysteries yourself. Since I think CAWS stands for California Will Schluter. Since the abbreviation for California is CA and Will's monogram is WS. @Mark Arbour That was a really great chapter I found it funny that the first event since Jeremy, got out of the hospital for a mental breakdown was the event that was destroyed by his huge blunder, and he says that Will is embarrassing I would say he is.
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@JJQuinnThat was a really well written chapter. I am loving how you are getting the reader invested in the buildup of their relationship. I also love how you build up the flame of love. The way you have wrote the book with the buildup to hanky panky moment makes this book feel real and meaningful.
