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Must be in a bit of mood this evening as in reading through the description and note, I suddenly chuckled seeing "...be prepared for at least a bit of straight sex" thought, hmmm that's a different trigger warning. At any rate, working through stories offered here and am struck by Jack Poignet's ability to stunningly paint images with words.

What an interesting take on body building and vampires. Caught in a cage chasing the perfect form not so dissimilar to those who become hooked. Well done.

A unique take on were-creature, vampire and witch universe. From the start, characters and pacing draw the reader in and ensures audience remains engaged.

Such an exquisitely satisfying ending. So many possibilities lay ahead for Renato perhaps we might have an opportunity to hear of his future adventures?

Henry beamed, now fully committed. “It’s all about preparation, son. You can’t just park a barge like that in a boathouse without dredging the channel first, if you catch my drift.” “Stretching!” Odetta Henry and Odetta are adorably hilarious! The lines they come up with remind me of conversations shared with a dear friend of mine.

Personally, I'd love to see Timmy get a shot in. He's sure earned it! Yeah, I know the story has been written but one can dream. What, me evil? Bwahahaha

Oh my, what a lovely example of a loving, devoted mother - not! Great line though: “And you haven’t changed all that much, have you? I still remember you sucking your cute little thumbs. Now look at you. All grown up… sucking dick.” Well, they do belong to an interesting pack: "Breeding committee" “If you need volunteers—we’ll take shifts.” Now here's a line I could have happily used earlier this evening: “I am going to strangle you with your own spine.”

Pardon, the "perfect ending..."? Ugh, what a relief to see there are more chapters ahead! Am so wrapped up in this story I shudder to think of the comment that would be left now if this was the last page. LOL

Curiouser and curiouser

Loved the pacing and subtle suspense of the first chapter. As for the second, the humor is fantastic! Only problem was reading in the wee hours and trying not to laugh out loud waking others up. Loved the wolf's expressions and attempts to communicate with the sidenotes on messages he was attempting to provide the young man.

There simply are no words, one simply must read! Obviously, by the comments, not only have readers appreciated the additional chapters but are hoping Jack Poignet will turn this into a full-length story. Wouldn't mind a backstory for the biker either.

Well again, damn! This definitely needs to be turned into a full-length story.

Damn!

So much passion and feeling in such few words written beautifully.

Lugh has a stunning and unique ability not often seen. This story is certainly worth a read.