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  1. Vcs
    Well written example of the aftereffects of childhood trauma. Perhaps if the justice system would only take such matters seriously...
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    Chapter 1

    Vcs commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What a great turn of phrase, countdown to escape. So much said in those three words.
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    Encrypted

    Vcs commented on Jeff Burton's story in Fiction

    From the beginning the author grabs the reader's attention with a unique pacing.
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    Unknown Origin

    Vcs commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Unknown Origin

    Phenomenal, unique approach with great pacing. Excellent start Jeff.
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    A lovely short story about a young boy finding love, acceptance, compassion and a brand new family.
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    Across The Pool

    Vcs reviewed Cynus's story in Fiction

    What a unique presentation of self-discovery and acceptance. Bravo!
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    Delicious

    Vcs reviewed Mikiesboy's story in Fiction

    Delicious is a perfect title for this deliciously delightful romp in the life of Faris and James. I had to stop reading during the night because of too loud laughter.
  8. Vcs
    Excellent story with great main characters. The ending - heart pounding though satisfying.
  9. Vcs
    Exquisite imagery not many are capable of.
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    Preferring to click reactions, I don't often comment. However, your words above left my heart heavy. It's amazing how some respond so strongly to what they find unexpected. Personally, IMHO, the entire chapter was fantastic! Is it sad Vincent lost his magical powers? Sure! There was a price to pay though and honestly, what was offered makes perfect sense. Excellent job, keep up the good work!!!
  11. Vcs
    Another great story. Especially enjoyed seeing how far former ADA Radcliffe has come!
  12. Vcs
    For someone with both professional and personal experience in the vile and traumatic world of abuse and exploitation of children, Kept Boy to Made Man is a phenomenal representation of what victims and survivors of such atrocities endure. A challenging must read for those interested in examples of experiences of those who have been traumatized. Readers can follow along the often treacherous and trying paths taken by the victims, survivors and those courageous and compassionate enough to step forward and help. One man's bravery in taking the first step to defend a teenager in an untenable life crisis leads to an unimaginable future not only for the teen and his attorney but many who will ultimately become an army of caring, loyal family of choice.
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    The Final Targets

    Vcs commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Final Targets

    The last sentences of the final paragraph were icing on the cake of this story 🤣
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    Epilogue

    Vcs commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    The worst thing about really good stories is that they must end. Was just thinking too that it would be fun to read the story of Michael and Jess.
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    . Nah the tomatoes all belong to Aiden!
  16. Vcs
    Another beautifully written chapter!
  17. Vcs
    You've really outdone yourself with the writing of this chapter. Great job!
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    Connections

    Vcs commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Connections

    Seriously? A tissue warning would have been so incredibly helpful. You've absolutely nailed the tender moments in this story.
  19. Vcs
    This is my favorite of the four Tampa Chronicles. I sure hope you'll finish at some point if for no other reason but to reveal who Erin is!
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    The Poetry of D/s

    Vcs commented on Mikiesboy's story in Non-Fiction

    Simply exquisite writing from the heart.
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    Wild Card

    Vcs commented on Dayne Mora's story in Fiction

    Awesome story especially the dialogue between characters. Sure hope it continues at some point!
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    Man Crush Saga

    Vcs commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Man Crush Saga

    OMF... this chapter seriously should have come with a laughter warning! Frankly, going was rough reading it in the middle of the night and trying to refrain from cracking up out loud so as not to wake anyone else in the house. Poor Baker no waffles treats or loans of hoodies.
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    Josh.mp4

    Vcs reviewed albertnothlit's story in Fiction

    Powerful, deeply moving and devastatingly beautiful story that tugs at the readers heartstrings. The character development and pacing are outstanding.
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    Hellish Date

    Vcs commented on Hellsheild's story in Fiction

    The problem with these stories is that it's the middle of the night and I was trying desperately to control my laughter so as not to disturb anyone else. Well, that didn't work!🤣 Soooo much fun! Hope you write more in future.
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    Piper

    Vcs commented on Hellsheild's story chapter in Piper

    Oh no, that poor unicorn!!! 🤣
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