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    Act I - Shelter

    Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Shelter

    Loved the pacing and subtle suspense of the first chapter. As for the second, the humor is fantastic! Only problem was reading in the wee hours and trying not to laugh out loud waking others up. Loved the wolf's expressions and attempts to communicate with the sidenotes on messages he was attempting to provide the young man.
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    There simply are no words, one simply must read! Obviously, by the comments, not only have readers appreciated the additional chapters but are hoping Jack Poignet will turn this into a full-length story. Wouldn't mind a backstory for the biker either.
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    Chapter 6

    Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Well again, damn! This definitely needs to be turned into a full-length story.
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    Chapter 4

    Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Damn!
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    Testify This

    Vcs reviewed Lugh's story in Fiction

    So much passion and feeling in such few words written beautifully.
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    Lugh has a stunning and unique ability not often seen. This story is certainly worth a read.
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    What a beautifully presented message.
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    Shout It Out

    Vcs commented on Lugh's story chapter in Shout It Out

    Sometimes the silence does in fact provide the loudest message. Well done!
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    The Third Fire

    Vcs reviewed Lugh's story in Fiction

    A unique and entertaining presentation of story and a first-time experience.
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    Leader of the Pack

    Vcs reviewed Lugh's story in Fiction

    Absolutely love the format and approach each chapter takes. Thank you for sharing the lessons.
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    Chapter 3

    Vcs commented on Lugh's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Fantastic, each chapter. Completely agree with Ms. V on sharing and teaching at the same time. None of my writing classes ever included such unique approaches and can definitely see the purpose.
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    Chapter 2

    Vcs commented on Lugh's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Love this! What a unique approach to a story.
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    What a delightful little story! Thank you, that's exactly what I needed.
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    June 9th, 2023

    Vcs commented on astone2292's story chapter in June 9th, 2023

    What a delightful read, just what was needed in these wee hours. More please!
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    Mom Hugs

    Vcs reviewed Valkyrie's story in Fiction

    Bittersweet glimpse into the lives of two strangers with hope for moving forward. Tissue warning
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    Absolutely stunning and am so relieved tissues were close at hand.
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    A Beautiful Path

    Vcs commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in A Beautiful Path

    What a sweet, touching, heartfelt story of remembrance. It's been a weepy day here and somehow; I came across three lovely stories you've offered so eloquently. This one finally brought on the full tears waiting to be shed.
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    Whew! One word came to mind after reading this story: Powerful. Personally, I'd offer a tissue warning.
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    The Portal

    Vcs reviewed albertnothlit's story in Fiction

    Magnificent little story with a powerful message. Well done!
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    Wow, what else is there to say? What happens with a dear friend's good intentions when he wants to save the man he has always loved? Read and discover...
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    Well written example of the aftereffects of childhood trauma. Perhaps if the justice system would only take such matters seriously...
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    Chapter 1

    Vcs commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What a great turn of phrase, countdown to escape. So much said in those three words.
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    Encrypted

    Vcs commented on Jeff Burton's story in Fiction

    From the beginning the author grabs the reader's attention with a unique pacing.
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    Unknown Origin

    Vcs commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Unknown Origin

    Phenomenal, unique approach with great pacing. Excellent start Jeff.
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    A lovely short story about a young boy finding love, acceptance, compassion and a brand new family.
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