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Seagull’s Bay is a unique look at one man’s journey of discovering his true self. Admittedly, the first several chapters contain some seriously disturbing events. So much so, some readers might be tempted to read no further. Don’t be deterred, though, as in the last few chapters, the audience is gifted with details of an intriguing, well-thought-out psychological mystery. If one pays close attention, there might be small snippets of clues about what’s to come and who was involved. As for the characters, one might say most of them are complicated. The best advice would be to reserve judgment, as once history is revealed, their choices and predilections explain how they’ve become who they are.
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CasualWanderer82 has a stunningly original writing style that keeps readers entertained and wanting more through every page. Down in the Holler is the story of Jackson, a 19-year-old boy’s journey to manhood filled with grit, passion, trials, and heart. Young Jackson meets a rugged, handsome rodeo cowboy, whom he immediately becomes enamored with. There’s only one problem: someone he loves deeply has also set their sights on the man. Will the draw be too strong to pull away? As it turns out, fate has other challenges ahead, leading him to question which path to choose.
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"Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
Vcs commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Ride That Bull, Jackson!"
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One of the sweetest, most touching lines in a story: Don't worry...I'm here.
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No apologies necessary, happens to all of us unfortunately. Hopefully, things are looking up for you❣️ I'll definitely be looking forward to the rest of this story when you are able to post. Meanwhile, take care.
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Finding Liam is the exquisitely painful yet triumphant story of a young, successful, handsome actor whose life is not his own. One night, he escapes those he sees as wolves by slipping into a restaurant, hoping for a little peace. In a unique booth, he feels alone and desperate, wanting only to be invisible. There, he meets a young, amusing server who catches his eye, beginning a journey that will surprise them both. Following along, readers are treated to romance, well-developed secondary characters, drama, and problematic legal proceedings that address real-life issues. Can love endure the challenges of life that lie ahead of them?
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Both would work for me!
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Whew, what a chapter. Drsawzall has excellent ideas. Perhaps Liam should have hired him as a consultant. Then, rake the CFB through the fire and destroy her reputation and career. After the above is accomplished, Dboggs9700 hit it on the head, our dear Mateo will no doubt want to get involved and contact his associates to deal with that disgusting POS on a more personal level.
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Never have I ever heard nookie referred to as Oscar-worthy.😂
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A clue that a story is well written is when the villain is portrayed so perfectly that the reader wants to.... Hmmm, maybe it’s best not actually to put that thought into words, yes?
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Never Alone is the story of young Jacy, who, after losing his parents, is raised by someone whose fanatical religious beliefs lead them to deny him his heritage. Uncovering his secret past and family connections leads him on an amazing journey, meeting individuals he never knew, and the gifts of creating a family to call his own, and a surprising ability.
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Wrenhaven is a stunning, artistically written story of Rowan, a 19-year-old traumatized boy, and Elias, a strong, caring man in his 30’s. Their first meeting is far from a little rough, but each is somehow drawn to the other. Can they overcome their pasts? Will Elias be able to reach the boy? And why are Rowan and his mother, Camille, at such odds? Follow along to discover the answers. Those who do are sure to be drawn in by Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro’s writing, as each scene is vividly painted. Throughout the tale, this reader imagined each keystroke translated into a brushstroke.
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This chapter reminded me of one of my favorite quotes: There is no hate like Christian love.
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Small Fry Speed is a stunning work of written art that examines the often-tragic effects of fanatical religious beliefs. Chapter 5 hit hard, with an intensity that left this reader gasping at the rawness of the emotions. Will those sitting in the self-imposed darkness of distorted beliefs see the light in time?
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The Confused Traffic Light is said to be a work of fiction, but is it really? Not only have Ryg and I met, but he’s apparently sent out alerts to his little gang as well. Dear readers, have you met this havoc-reeking traffic light as well? Curious now, aren’t you? This little tale is only one chapter, a mere 1,182 words. Don’t be shy, click on the singular chapter to read along. Perhaps you’ve met Ryg, too, and possibly his buddies.
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The Confused Traffic Light
Vcs commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Confused Traffic Light
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If Furniture Could Talk is a fun, unique little collection of tales that share the thoughts and observations of pieces of furniture. A quick read and good for a few laughs.
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The Other Side of Me is an intriguing tale centered on Frank Seaberg’s life, as he starts over with his family in a small town. Stuck out in the middle of nowhere, he makes a new friend who will take him on a mysterious journey. Follow along to find out who’s real and what the truth is.
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Ones and Zeros is an intriguing horror story of what happens when individuals within a society are unjustly oppressed. What steps does Poll take when he discovers his brother Costa is missing, and then the reason behind the disappearance? Will there be any winners in the end?
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Hank sure has a way of handling skittish mustangs. All caught up now and anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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Such a slow, painful process; however, Hank is providing the steady, needed, and desperately craved.
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The stark, gut-wrenching reality of waiting for that hit, the crushing strike, was chilling.
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They’re just what each other needs. Hope the mustang doesn't suddenly get skiddish.
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Character development of both is incredible.
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Fantastic start! Love the sharing of Hank’s thoughts on Jesse.
