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I didn’t want to bring in Joshua and Daniel in my comment - I was trying to encourage others to go back and read the two instalments of that story. I trust that all will interlink knowing how your tales develop. I must say that only having visited Australia on a couple of occasions your writings do bring back memories - mainly pleasant.

The truth will out….

A great chapter with a lot of loose ends to follow up. vexious ex. a young brother becoming worldly wise. Many budding relationships both bi & homo. evidence of paedo sex. the introduction of a Police Inspector that we met in ‘What beings us together 2’ ( Hopefully we will meet some other characters from that tale too) I really like it when we get interleaving tales in apparently separate stories. I look forward to further developments. Thank you Paladin for your continuing efforts to keep us all enthusiastic for the next chapters.

So with Shane and Jimmy, who we remember from ‘The Mardi Gras’ story…. Do we get to have an update on Rick and Adam? I’m certain that Shane will still be in contact with the ‘cop that saved him’ … I really appreciate these interlinked tales - thank you for all your work

I’m beginning to think……. Maybe a dangerous thing to do……. But…….. We read that the keys were back where they were normally kept.. so the car was apparently stolen and the ignition ‘jumped’ good for the insurance claim… However…. So did one, or both, of the Dads see the wreck on their way home…. recover the keys, torch the wreck and return the keys to their usual home? Possibly even recover the ‘lost’ logbook,! then maybe I’m barking up the wrong tree!!

A great ‘Turmoil’ free chapter all love and acceptance… However I feel there may be a little ( maybe more) Turmoil soon, as the events occurring in Sydney are revealed. Matters of allowances, relationships are a couple that spring to mind. I’m sure that the ‘unofficial’ birthday party will also expose more turmoil for our friends. Much has been recorded about the ‘dance floor’ I’m sure it will lend some turmoil in the near future - or maybe a contract to supply more to others in similar circumstances. Thank you for keeping an old man up to date with modern gay practices and events!!

I feel that Levi is just realising, and maybe coming to terms with, all the things he has lost… OK on the physical side - His driving log book….. however on the mental side - all the trust, all the future plans, all the friendships, his Street Cred, He sure is learning, the hard way, who to trust, who to admire, who to not associate with. he definitely needs a lesson on the ‘Town’s History’ allied with the Family history of the founders and their descendants. Maybe some footnotes to previous tales would help!

Oops - finger trouble or spell correct going haywire - envious should be enjoy.🤣🤣🤣

Come on guys let’s get back to comments on the story, not a discussion on rival merits of musical performances. This a story based group! In addition I really envious reading ‘MPP’s’ tales however I have heart problem that means I can’t listen to any music with a loud base beat - so I can’t follow any of your musical diversions from the main story. 🥲

Saw a post from another storyteller, on a different web page, that he was being troubled by the hot weather and wildfires. one can only hope that others are not similarly devastated.

That’s two more sharing the champagne!! I wonder if Aunt will join the party set? I look forward to events in Adelaide - could be a tumultuous series of events as apartments are cleared, and parents, relatives and friends are told of ongoing events and sexual pairings. I look forward to reading more of the Turmoil that is being unfolded. Many thanks to Paladin for the effort being put in to generate this tale.

Another gripping chapter in this tale of teenage angst. one can only hope that Levi confides with his Dad (s) or Fr. Costas if he has any doubts or uncertainties as to his relationships, especially with Casey ( knowing of past events with the Thompson Family members). Also that he makes known any inappropriate phone calls or messages from Casey - or anyone else for that matter! Thankyou once again for your time and effort in writing these gripping tales.

I learned to ‘drive’ on a farm in UK. The old Ferguson Tractor I almost taught myself how to drive had an interesting gear stick located between one’s legs, to prevent unusual sensations it was better to sit well back on the metal seat ( a cushion was useful too). I feel that many of the commentators to this wonderful tale by MPP would be very happy to have such a stick to play with!!

I am intrigued by the interaction between Casey & Levi. Levi knows, I assume, the reputation of Casey’s family, however it is very wrong to judge the son by the actions of his father and his siblings. I’m wondering if there will be a loving and fulfilling affair between the two adolescent lads, of if it is just ¿? I look forward to further episodes in this tale of very diverse and complex characters. Thank you for all your time and effort in creating these characters - and forcing me to have to keep researching previous works to keep all of them and past events, in order in my mind. I think I may need to form a Thompsonville codex file system to keep track!

Another great chapter of the progress of the company, the relationships between the main characters. Thank you Paladin. I'm intrigued however by a passing comment in the early part; of a ‘project’ at the university - now as often as I can recall from earlier tales by our favourite tale spinner, these somewhat ‘passing remarks’ often reappear a few chapters down the line. I await the reveal of this ‘project’ happy dayzzz…