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Thank you Freerider for your consideration. I apologize for making you feel as if you couldn't post the comment you wanted. I am no longer following this story, so I will not receive notification of comments. Once I have posted this comment, I will be blocking you, not out of anger, but out of consideration for you, so that you can express your thoughts about this story without hesitation.

I wonder how the reunion of Jasper and Xavier will go and then, somehow, Kyle will have to be added into that reunion?! Just in case, I hope Xavier kept his "escape" convertible!

Hmmm...I have read stories about threesomes, even one about a foursome, but this story has the potential for a tensome!!! Oh my Ken, where are your fantasies going to take us?! Not to worry, I will definitely be along for the ride!

Well...hmmm...alrighty then...not what I was expecting. Lucky Jake.

Yes and I am not sorry to disagree with you. I have first-hand knowledge and experience that it can work and be the most amazing experience of their lives! Raising any child, no matter what your age, is always best when you have help from other people such as family and friends. As for this story, it appears both Robbie's and Stephanie's families want to be involved in their son's life. Nicola will obviously be the perfect overprotective, overbearing, but over-loving Aunt.

Wow! I'm equally angry at and hating both Stephanie and Robbie. They need to get together and talk about this and figure out a plan of how they will both raise this child (since adoption seems to not be an option) and then bring in their families. They are both smart enough and caring enough to be able to handle this at their ages! There are no free passes when 2 people create a baby!

quokka, I really love this story and was so happy to read your comment that there will be a "book two". You have created characters that are easy to fall in love with and leave us wanting more!

My heart wasn't ready for this story to end.

I am some what perplexed at the end of the chapter it says The End. I certainly hope this is not the end of the story. There is too much left undone. One thing is Austin's interest in Oscar's boner. Big bro's should help little bro's with such developments. There is also Austin's relationship with George. Lastly of course there is Eagar. Will he be able to stay with Austin? Are all of the boys gay? Do they enjoy frolicking about naked with each other? Sorry to broach such sexual subjects. Hover they seem to have been put into a puritan box where their sexuality has been locked up. Probably by the nuns, who aren't ever supposed to get any.

Hey maybe you can help me. I have a story I'd like to publish - but as I go to post it it asks for the Editor & a Beta Reader. I tried put in my pen name but that didn't work where do I go for this. Thanks

I usually don't like it when a story jumps so far into the future, but I am intrigued. I would not have expected Cheryl's character to make an appearance in the "future", and can't believe Jessica and Kyle are still talking (that seemed like a friendship destined to end after high school), so my curiosity is getting the best of me. Now, where is Jasper?

Quentin needs to catch up on his sleep because now is not the time to be sleep deprived! He is going to be a busy boy! I hope he is prepared to be outed, cuz there is no way of keeping 9 popular guys falling in love with him a secret from the rest of the school!

If this was a book, you would not be able to pry it out of my hands until I was finished reading every last word. It is just such a great story! Thank you quokka. Each new chapter is making me enjoy the story even more! I, too, hope the 3 brothers will be able to live together now that Austin is turning 18.

Yes a wonderfully written story by Comicality - No doubt a hard subject for him to write - hence why it took so long - searching for the right words - over coming his feelings to get his fingers to type. You did an outstanding job, Comicality, Zack must be one of your dearest characters.

This has to be the end - Zack has handed in his story - his documentation of his tortured abused life - he has kept it together, all be it by the thinnest of margins, Brody actually saved him. But here he is in open defiance of his abuser - sharing love and sex and pleasure in the protective arms of Brody. Mr. Raffe will finally see what he had been so blind to - the abuse, the torture. He will investigate. Zack will have to own up to it but with Brody waiting for him; he'll do it.

Ohh give me more - love the pace of the story - use the voice recognition to speed things up - LOL -

For sure all around the world bullying in school is a issue, in some it is a real problem in others not so much In the fantasy of fiction it was amazing how it was handled in "Another Brother". If that reaction were only real. The sad fact it is very hard for schools to control bullying. There are always the boys will be boys reaction leaving the bullied with no where to turn. Plus all over the world the might makes right scenario plays out with police often using bullying tactics. Might makes right is the basis of almost all forms of discipline. If only it could be dealt with as effectively as in the story. The plot thickens, will Austin become the guardian for both his little brothers going forward? Young Eager being autistic and dyslexic could very much be a handful.

My mother played the piano - just before her death she explained to me that music was like another language - It spoke to emotions - uplifting the soul to a place where the troubles of the world cannot get to you - Austin has learned this as it frees him from the lost of parents, Grandmother and brother. However he has yet to learn that those given the gift have a responsibility to share it to uplift the spirits of others.

Wow really - Well I always say to each his own - but not being one who likes clothes a lot - I prefer a Tee or untucked out of pants shirt - I don't see the straps as easy to get out of - looking positively I'm sure they have to extend foreplay a bit.

Being American I am new to reading Australian writings. I must confess I do love the style and localisms of their derivative of English. So much more polite than here in the states. The author moves the story along beautifully with just enough descriptive passages. You have cry for poor Austin losing his Mum and Da and now his Gran. Thankfully he has been provided for with inheritance. I am anxious to see how he gets on. A great start to what seems like an excellent story.

Great that Ridley went out to see Gabe. Teen boys are very complex folks. They can want to reject someone and their pecker wants to love the same person. For sure Ridley is attracted to Gabe but Gabe keeps wanting to let the world into what Ridley has closed off. That private place is Ridley's mechanism for dealing with the devastation of his father's injuries. He is too involved with his father being a vegetable for 2 years to deal with anything else. Almost missed in the whole situation is Gabe being adopted. He identifies with Ridley. In some ways he knows how it feels to lose or never know parents. As a result he gives Ridley what he can never have; a way to go back in time with his dad. Buried in his subconscious is his wish to do the same with his father. Both of them have suppressed their homosexual feelings until Ridley over come with emotion from his father's phone call, plus his game, and the wonderful gift Gabe gave him let's his emotions out. Ridley has to face the fact that no one can be an island and accept Gabe's friendship. Maybe in chapter 5 his dad will help him with that. What do ya say Krista?

Apparently I need to get in more fights!

Last chapter the waterworks started because I was so happy for Ridley. This chapter, because I felt so sad for him. He is just a kid trying to deal with a terrible situation with his dad, that he has no control over. So, he goes a little overboard in the areas of his life that he can control. Okay Krista, I am waiting to find out where we go from here and which of my emotions you toy with in the next chapter!

Please tell me that Xavier is not going to have a "Thelma and Louise" moment driving "off" in his convertible. So who will it be that changes their plans and ends up at the same college as Xavier??

WOW George in his unrelenting grief has come out to us and while doing so outs Paul as Bi. What a difference from today to 1940 when to be gay was to be jailed and today where we can marry and we have many out openly gay individuals in government. But for poor George who has lost his lover and best friend. The only one with whom he could be as he is; the only one who knows and understands. The only one who he can share his love, touching and caressing. I can understand the devastation, the complete and utter despair that he faces. How to go on being different always holding yourself in check never able to be who you really are? So hard to understand the devastation in the context of the world today.