MontrealOrmolu
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I'm back after a few years away doing other things. Loved CrossCurrents, and I love this story, too. Good writing, pretty different style, nice dialogue, especially enjoy the erotica because it is so understated. You allow for our own imaginations and go deep beneath the surface to the emotions. Great stuff. Thanks.
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Fascinating story. Do hope that things will begin to work out a bit better for the two of them. They're both so isolated from each other by their own fears...
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This would be a good place to finish -- sigh. I've gotten caught up in this long saga, and it has been a wonderful tale of growing up, reconciliation and finding peace with oneself. Thank you.
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Chapter 50: Epilogue
MontrealOrmolu commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 50: Epilogue
Thank you for this story. It has been a wonderful read. Good character development, nice surprises and a tight plot. Keep on writing. -
Chapter 7 - Meeting the Family
MontrealOrmolu commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Meeting the Family
What a horrible, sinful, evil woman! Unfortunately, characteristic of some of the worst of Christianity. Lovely story! -
Thanks for this. Your rightly point out the problem with quoting 6 verses out of context to condemn one "sin" and avoiding the hundreds of verses which condemn others. Hopefully, Peter will question himself and his iron bound beliefs.
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I've just found this story and read it in one sitting. Lovely. Great character development, lovely interplay between the two main characters. Looking forward to what's going to develop.
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Please check the formatting. It is almost impossible to read as it is...and I do so look forward to reading each chapter.
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This has been a lovely story. Enjoyed it immensely. Thank you.
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Sweet, sets up changes for the future. BTW, note the typo in the first couple of words.
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I enjoyed this story the first time I read it, and I'm happy to have the chance to reread it.
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Ch. 4 ~ Committment
MontrealOrmolu commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Ch. 4 ~ Committment
Really enjoying this story. Now ... you haven't given any hints about Richard "turning" Simon. Is that not possible in the world you see? Or is that something still to come? That would settl the angst over one dying long before the other. -
Chapter 3 - A Trip With Sam
MontrealOrmolu commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Trip With Sam
Lovely new story. As I was reading this chapter, it occurs to me that some of what you are describing with Silver could be similar to institutionalized people who are then released. If you haven't already done so, you might look at some reports about their behavior and how it is modified.I do love your stories. -
Thank you. I am really enjoying your story, too. Glad you enjoyed this one. Try some of the others.
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Thank you. I am enjoying your story a lot, glad you like some of mine. Yes, these were transferred from the old site.
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Very sweet...I had to doublecheck to make sure it was by you Loved it, and second the hint that this character could live on.
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
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The Glance – rev – 8 John glanced up nervously. What time was it? Again? He waited for the two Wardens, the senior lay officials of the parish, to come into his office. He was going to tell them. He didn’t know how it was going to go, but he was going to tell them. He’d thought it through with the bishop; first, tell the wardens, then the Vestry (the parish council), then the parish at large. So, tonight was the night to get it started. There was a knock on the door, and then the wardens c
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The Glance – rev. 7 Jeff drove home quietly, thinking hard about what John had told him, and trying to think of what this could mean for him, and for all the gay and lesbian clergy of the diocese. His mind was in a whirl, too many thoughts – and memories – swirling around in there. He knew that he was a bit jealous, maybe a lot jealous, but that couldn’t sway him now. His mind kept returning to his own seminary experience. He remembered that first day, looking around in class, trying to find
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The Glance – rev. 6 Chuck woke in the darkness, his arms curled around John protectively. It had been quite an evening. John had finally fallen asleep in Chuck’s arms, exhausted after all those strong emotions, and now he slept soundly nestled up against Chuck’s chest, every now and then cuddling up closer yet. Chuck let his hand wander down John’s back, giving both himself and John the reassurance of closeness and touch. As they lay there in the darkness, Chuck realized just how much he had
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The Glance – rev. 5 John wandered around his office at home, puttering, his mind running around and around. He was having trouble settling down. He should be working on his sermon, or on the class he was teaching, or looking ahead to the series or … Well, there were lots of things he should be doing. But he wasn’t. He was wasting time thinking about Chuck. Well, maybe it wasn’t wasting time, but he wasn’t getting any work done. He had so enjoyed this past weekend. It had been great waking
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The Glance – rev. 4 Monday morning came bright and early, like it always does after a good weekend. Chuck stretched, caught John up in a deep kiss, and then jumped out of bed. He had to hurry. He showered and got dressed. As he came out of the bedroom, he smelled the wonderful scent of fresh coffee. He followed his nose to the kitchen to find John, dressed only in loose gym shorts, pouring coffee. “Here’s yours, mine’s coming,” John said as he handed a steaming mug to Chuck, “I’ll have toast
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The Glance – 3 John woke up slowly, dozing halfway between awake and asleep, feeling good. He felt secure, warm, relaxed. As he slowly came to consciousness, he felt arms around his body, hair tickled his nose, and he was nestled right up against a warm body. Where was he? What was going on? He lifted his head off the comfortable shoulder and looked around. It was his own bedroom, so that was OK. He looked up and saw Chuck’s face. He began to draw back but Chuck’s arms automatically drew him
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Chapter 2: “What is going on with me?” asked John quietly to himself as he, too, got into his car and drove home. It had been such a long time since he had allowed himself to be interested in another man. He’d been a priest for years, and in all those years there had been very, very few people who knew about him. It wasn’t any of their business, he’d told himself. He was there to be their priest, to help them to know God, to help them deal with the realities of life. They didn’t need to kno
