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Sir Gareth’s Plight
Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Sir Gareth’s Plight
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What a great response! Thanks, Bill. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem.
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Very nice chapters. I'm glad about the turn of events and curious to learn what the First Servant told Thomas.
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A Real Man This is the story that I was once told About a man who was brave and bold He quit his job at the local clothing store To set out for the adventure that he was longing for He had dreamed of this adventure his entire life Now his dream would finally come alive He packed his bag. He took along a recipe book A man on a trip needs to know how to cook He left town in his vintage car with a smile on his lips And then he set out. He drove down Route 66 He was listening to the rad
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# 141 - Captain's Log
Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in # 141 - Captain's Log
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I didn't see the ending coming. Now I want to know more. You have a way of making me curious. Great answer to the prompt.
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Captain’s Log Captain’s log 301817081116 The small comet hit the southern region, but nobody came to harm, luckily, as this part of the region was a vast salt desert. As a result of the impact, however, new plants started to grow on the farmlands that adjoined the desert in the south. The stellar material changed the genetic constitution of the cereal plants. The plants were bigger and richer in essential nutrients than the original plants. The experiment had proven to be a striking succ
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Thank you, Cia. Glad you liked it.
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I was totally surprised to see my name. Thanks for your kind reviews, comicfan.
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Killing in the name of love. "Your most humble servant Bryn Morgan Jones." This is just bigotry and blasphemy. How will the order cope with their lie? Can't wait to read more.
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Thank you, Andy. I'm planning to continue the story. Hopefully, my muse won't disappoint me and you. Thanks for the review.
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Thank you so much! I'm planning to take part in CampNano this year. This story might be a good one to write in June and/or August. Provided the muse dows not leave me again, that is. Thanks for your encouraging words.
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Cold Case "A case of burglary," Steve Mills said. He placed a folder on Adam’s desk. Adam looked up with surprise. It was his first day in the office. He had just joined the cold case team. "A case of burglary?" he asked back in confusion. Steve gave a nod. He opened the folder and took a bunch of photos out of it. "Someone broke into the house of Derek Peterson, a wealthy banker. Peterson was on a vacation. He was in some exclusive club in Spain. His house was empty. The alarm sys
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Thank you for another amazing chapter. This story really draws me in. I'm curious to see what happens next.
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Sir Gareth’s Plight There once was a man who sought power and fame The man was a knight; Sir Gareth was his name He came to see the wizard Cathbad at night Because Sir Gareth felt that he was in a plight You see, I want to ascend to the throne Sir Gareth said urgently with a dark undertone But I’m not entitled; I can’t raise a claim However, this is my chief and ambitious aim This is why I’m asking you to cast a spell Sir Gareth said, pacing the warlock’s cell The wizard Cathbad r
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Sir Gareth, the noble knight, is in a plight. He asks Cathbad, the wizard, to cast a spell that will make him the heir to the throne. However, the spell only works if Sir Gareth makes a choice and offers a sacrifice. A poem in Dr. Seuss style.
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Edward II (Lament Of The King)
Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Edward II (Lament Of The King)
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I think I sent an empty review. Sorry for that. Thanks for your detailed answers to my previous review. It's all very interesting.
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I very much liked this part. It's an amazing story. Do we really have to wait four weeks for the next chapter? Another question: Is it all made up or is there some truth behind the story?
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In the Dark I looked out of the window. It was a rainy day and fog lay low and heavy. I was lucky. I had a day off. I would definitely not leave the house today. I went back to the table and resumed reading the newspaper while eating a coffee roll and having a cup of coffee. I would have a good time. I would spend a lazy day at home. My happy mood, however, changed when I found that I had run out of toilet paper. I looked at my watch and decided to go shopping. ‘Never put off till tomorr
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# 117 The Smell of the Snow
Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in # 117 The Smell of the Snow
It's actually the beginning of a story that I have never (or not yet) found the time to continue. Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the piece. -
The Smell of the Snow ‘What is that smell?’ Gavin thought. And what was that sound that he heard? The strange whispers filled the air. Gavin looked at the men beside the fire who drowsily rose to their feet. He tried to figure out if they had also heard the faint sounds. But their faces were blank. None of them mentioned the whispers. They looked tired and yawned. The sun was just rising. The air was chilly, and fog lay low and heavy. It was the beginning of November. Another hard wint
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The hall was illuminated by candles. But the light was still poor in the room. The walls were made of rough stones. The carpets on the gray stone floor looked old and worn. The tapestries were rough and looked almost tawdry. The air in the hall was stifled and stale. Lyaris looked around in the hall. The hall was by no means an airy and a beautiful place. It did not look magical at all. Lyaris swallowed. The hall, nonetheless, was part of his home and it felt so good to be home. Lyaris’ heart ju
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Neldor, Aaron and Lyaris found themselves in a clearing. The huge ash tree stood in front of them. They all recognized the tree instantly. Dark trees seamed the clearing. The light of the sun barely reached the ground and the air was chilly. The three of them felt cold. "Good day, wanderers," Mimir, the gatekeeper, said in a dark and loud voice. He stood in front of them with his spear in his hand. Mimir’s look was grave. Neldor bowed to Mimir. Aaron and Lyaris followed his example. "My gree
