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Dolores Esteban

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  1. He has definitely a way of making others curious...
  2. Thank you, Cia
  3. The Mayan Tribute Anthology totally intrigues me. I've already started a story. Are there any word count limitations?
  4. Thanks for reading and commenting, Andy. Glad you liked the tale. I've never read the legends of the ravens. Should be interesting to read them. Thanks again
  5. Egg of the Dragon     "Goodness! What a fuss they make of it," I said to myself. I was feeling annoyed. They had found the skeleton of a dragon. The news on TV and the newspapers were full with it. The scientists of course said that the skeleton was that of a dinosaur. And, in fact, it resembled one. There was just one difference that the scientists were unable to explain. The skeleton had wings. This alone would not have caused much stir if the skeleton was small enough to be the skeleton o
  6. The Mud Worm   I had been a worm ever since I was born. I lived in a little hole in the ground. I crept here and there. There was mud everywhere. I was a mud worm, so to speak. The center of my world was a big and fat spider that eyed me constantly and for ages, so it seemed to me. I wormed along every day and rested only little at night. Time went by and nothing changed. I hated my mud worm life. It was frustrating me. So I made plans. I planned my escape. But I did not know where to go since
  7. A little worm plucks up courage. A fable.
  8. Suprise again. Thank you!
  9. Dolores Esteban

    The Game

    The Game "Gordon." It took me some time to connect the name with the man whose voice I heard on the phone. I held my cell phone tighter when I had found the connection. "Gordon? How are you doing?" I asked. My voice was rough and hoarse. I had pushed it to the back of my mind. However, subconsciously, I had always known this day was inevitable. Gordon talked on. His words were fast and chopped. I felt the urge to just end the call and dismiss him. Instead, I listened, albeit wi
  10. Debbie, Richard, and Liz are dead. Who will be next? Vivian, Gordon, or Andrew? Thirty years have passed. The killer is back. The lethal childhood game has not yet ended.
  11. Thank you. Glad you liked it.
  12. Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
  13. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 11

    The ritual was beautiful, although I think the boys are too young to make a lifelong commitment. This could turn out problematic, I think.
  14. Thank you, Cia. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
  15. Thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
  16. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    The story spoke to me on an emotional level. It affected my mood. I thought about it for some time and I'm really hesitant to write it down. But it was like standing alone and looking out on the sea, sky covered with gray clouds, and listening to the waves for a long time. I always feel little and mortal. There's sadness and grief. Yet, with the passing of time, there also comes calmness and acceptance of fate.
  17. A wonderful and fascinating story. Very well written. I totally liked it!
  18. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    I can't really imagine things would develop like this. But I could very well be mistaken. Too many atrocities have been and are being committed in the world and oftten in the name of whatever god. Very good story.
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Just yesterday I visited with a friend an old and empty house, rather entered the garden that was overgrown with weeds. The gates to the garden had been open. I felt as if something dark was emanating from the house, as if someone was lurking inside of the house or somewhere in the garden. I could totally relate to your story. You captured the scary atmosphere well. Good we did not enter the house.
  20. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    A scary but not entirely unrealistic picture of the future and a thought-provoking story. I definitely liked it.
  21. Thank you very much! I'm happy you liked the poem.
  22. Thanks for reading and leaveing a comment. Yes, writing the poem was lot of fun.
  23. Thank you very much! I'm very happy you enjoyed the poem.
  24. Thank you! I'm glad you liked my poem, although poetry is not what you prefer to read in general.
  25. Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked the Dr. Seuss style of the poem. You brought it to my attention with one of your writing prompts, after all. Glad you liked the content of the poem also.
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