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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 11

    Dolores Esteban commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 11

    The ritual was beautiful, although I think the boys are too young to make a lifelong commitment. This could turn out problematic, I think.
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    Thank you, Cia. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.
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    Thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    The story spoke to me on an emotional level. It affected my mood. I thought about it for some time and I'm really hesitant to write it down. But it was like standing alone and looking out on the sea, sky covered with gray clouds, and listening to the waves for a long time. I always feel little and mortal. There's sadness and grief. Yet, with the passing of time, there also comes calmness and acceptance of fate.
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    A wonderful and fascinating story. Very well written. I totally liked it!
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I can't really imagine things would develop like this. But I could very well be mistaken. Too many atrocities have been and are being committed in the world and oftten in the name of whatever god. Very good story.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Mark92's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Just yesterday I visited with a friend an old and empty house, rather entered the garden that was overgrown with weeds. The gates to the garden had been open. I felt as if something dark was emanating from the house, as if someone was lurking inside of the house or somewhere in the garden. I could totally relate to your story. You captured the scary atmosphere well. Good we did not enter the house.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A scary but not entirely unrealistic picture of the future and a thought-provoking story. I definitely liked it.
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    Thank you very much! I'm happy you liked the poem.
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    Thanks for reading and leaveing a comment. Yes, writing the poem was lot of fun.
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    Thank you very much! I'm very happy you enjoyed the poem.
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    Thank you! I'm glad you liked my poem, although poetry is not what you prefer to read in general.
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    Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked the Dr. Seuss style of the poem. You brought it to my attention with one of your writing prompts, after all. Glad you liked the content of the poem also.
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    Thank you very much! I'm very glad you liked it.
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    What a great response! Thanks, Bill. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem.
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    Chapter 9

    Dolores Esteban commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Very nice chapters. I'm glad about the turn of events and curious to learn what the First Servant told Thomas.
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    A Real Man This is the story that I was once told About a man who was brave and bold He quit his job at the local clothing store To set out for the adventure that he was longing for He had dreamed of this adventure his entire life Now his dream would finally come alive He packed his bag. He took along a recipe book A man on a trip needs to know how to cook He left town in his vintage car with a smile on his lips And then he set out. He drove down Route 66 He was listening to the rad
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    Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.
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    Prompt #81

    Dolores Esteban commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #81

    I didn't see the ending coming. Now I want to know more. You have a way of making me curious. Great answer to the prompt.
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    Captain’s Log 　 Captain’s log 301817081116 　 The small comet hit the southern region, but nobody came to harm, luckily, as this part of the region was a vast salt desert. As a result of the impact, however, new plants started to grow on the farmlands that adjoined the desert in the south. The stellar material changed the genetic constitution of the cereal plants. The plants were bigger and richer in essential nutrients than the original plants. The experiment had proven to be a striking succ
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    Thank you, Cia. Glad you liked it.
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    Congratulations!
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    I was totally surprised to see my name. Thanks for your kind reviews, comicfan.
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    Chapter 7

    Dolores Esteban commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Killing in the name of love. "Your most humble servant Bryn Morgan Jones." This is just bigotry and blasphemy. How will the order cope with their lie? Can't wait to read more.
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    Sometimes an idea hits me out of the blue and then I'm able to write 10K in a day. I once got up at 3am and wrote a long poem within a few minutes. The words were all in my head. I am in a somewhat dreamlike state when the muse strikes and then I can't stop writing. Sadly, my muse is wayward and absent often.
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