Invitation to Hell
# 163
(You’ve just moved into a new place. While busy still trying to get everything organized there is a knock on the door. You find a delivery guy there with a present for you new place. What did you get and who is it from?)
My story is hard to tell and even harder to believe, but I swear it’s all true. All happened precisely as I have stated it. It began on a morning in July 2008. I had moved into my new apartment the previous day and I had gotten up early to organ
Thank you, Bill. I'm glad you liked the poem and could relate to it. Thanks also for taking the time and researching on flarf poetry. I really should have posted a brief introduction to it.
Thank you, Percy. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I should have posted a brief description of flarf poetry. Thanks for taking the time to read up on it.
Five million dollars...oh, unfortunatley I don't have a house of my own with an old tree in front of it. I certainly would have investigated a bit. Great story, Bill. I enjoyed it a lot.
Thank you, comicfan. I'm happy you liked the piece. Flarf poetry is interesting. I've experimented with Google search results. They are sometimes totally meaningless, but now and then they tell a whole story. I will submit another Flarf piece to the Poetry Anthology. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
Thanks for your kind review, Ieshwar. The poem luckily doesn't recount my daily life, although I can understand the narrator's frustration. God, people, do I come across so frustrated? Your reviews really make me ponder. Thanks again for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the piece. The narrator is not happy, but luckily the author of the poem and the narrator are not the same person
A very intense and touching story. You truly got into the head of your character. I liked your story a lot. Just a thought: I think they should have informed Damian on his attacker's identity in order to answer an unanswered question that I could imagine will haunt him for the rest of his life. He's happy now, but happiness can be transient.
Thanks again for reading and leaving so many reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have an idea of another crime thriller, but the idea is vague and I need to follow the instructions of my muse. I don't know if Adam and Steve will be involved again. I have not yet started the story. I'm currently doing some research. Thanks again.