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Dolores Esteban

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  1. Great advice. I was unhappy with a story and now I know why. Thank you, Libby.
  2. Invitation to Hell   # 163 (You’ve just moved into a new place. While busy still trying to get everything organized there is a knock on the door. You find a delivery guy there with a present for you new place. What did you get and who is it from?)   My story is hard to tell and even harder to believe, but I swear it’s all true. All happened precisely as I have stated it. It began on a morning in July 2008. I had moved into my new apartment the previous day and I had gotten up early to organ
  3. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, KC Grim. I'm glad you liked the poem.
  4. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    A beautiful story. Not exactly the stuff I usually read, but I liked your story a lot. Jade is a lovely character.
  5. Thank you, Bill. I'm glad you liked the poem and could relate to it. Thanks also for taking the time and researching on flarf poetry. I really should have posted a brief introduction to it.
  6. Thanks for reading and commenting, Michael. I'm glad you liked the poem.
  7. Thank you, Percy. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I should have posted a brief description of flarf poetry. Thanks for taking the time to read up on it.
  8. Dolores Esteban

    Six

    I'm completely stunned and at a loss of words. I'm usually hesitant to use it, but I must: Excellent.
  9. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Flarf poetry is an interesting concept and fun to write. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem.
  10. Five million dollars...oh, unfortunatley I don't have a house of my own with an old tree in front of it. I certainly would have investigated a bit. Great story, Bill. I enjoyed it a lot.
  11. Thank you very much for reading and leaving a review. I'm happy you liked the poem.
  12. Dolores Esteban

    In the Cold

    A frightening experience. I guess I wouldn't have been able to deal with the situation so well. Truly a night to remember.
  13. Dolores Esteban

    Story

    LOL. Interesting what you can do in the briefest of time when you are bound and determined...Nice and cute story. It made me smile.
  14. Great stories and I'm only halfway through.
  15. I totally liked your story. Really enjoyed it. Thank you.
  16. Thank you, comicfan. I'm happy you liked the piece. Flarf poetry is interesting. I've experimented with Google search results. They are sometimes totally meaningless, but now and then they tell a whole story. I will submit another Flarf piece to the Poetry Anthology. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
  17. Thanks for your kind review, Ieshwar. The poem luckily doesn't recount my daily life, although I can understand the narrator's frustration. God, people, do I come across so frustrated? Your reviews really make me ponder. Thanks again for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
  18. Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the piece. The narrator is not happy, but luckily the author of the poem and the narrator are not the same person
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    A very intense and touching story. You truly got into the head of your character. I liked your story a lot. Just a thought: I think they should have informed Damian on his attacker's identity in order to answer an unanswered question that I could imagine will haunt him for the rest of his life. He's happy now, but happiness can be transient.
  20. Beautifully crafted: the plot, the characters, everything. The story totally drew me in. Very well done.
  21. Thank you, carringtonrj. Glad you liked the poem.
  22. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    The ending is so sad and tragic. A very touching story. Thank you.
  23. I like your experimental pieces. They are always so different and refreshing. Very interesting take on the theme. Thank you.
  24. Beautifully written. Another piece of yours that makes me stop and think. Very good. Thank you.
  25. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 8

    Thanks again for reading and leaving so many reviews. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I have an idea of another crime thriller, but the idea is vague and I need to follow the instructions of my muse. I don't know if Adam and Steve will be involved again. I have not yet started the story. I'm currently doing some research. Thanks again.
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