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Dolores Esteban

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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Very dark. The story kept me on the edge of my seat. Like Mark said, you could extend it. I'm under the impression the psycho bitch has escaped. Definitely a great story.
  2. The esoterics and prophets predict the end of the world, but none of them anticipates the truth that is ultimately revealed to the world on the day of Winter Solstice. History must be rewritten. Professor Sharma and his students are involved in the events and witness the day of revelation.
  3. The Ultimate Truth Mahesh took the sheet of paper that Professor Sharma had given to them and unwillingly worked through the text. It was another apocalyptic text and it was a religious one also. Mahesh was fed up with apocalyptic texts, particularly with religious ones. His parents were atheists and he was raised an atheist also. He didn’t care about religious texts at all. Professor Sharma had made it his goal to clear up confusion and inform his students about the true nature of apocalyp
  4. Just started editing a story. Great tips. Thank you.
  5. I don’t know exactly how she found out about my secret. What the hell was I supposed to do? Murder was not an option. Or rather it would have been my last resort. I felt the need to confide my predicament in Jayden. He came up with a plan that surprised me.
  6. Fair Enough What the hell was I supposed to do? Murder was not an option. Or rather, it would have been my last resort. Gregory Parker was fifty-two years of age. He was well-off and he was a man who showed he was wealthy. His clothes were elegant, he had a large mansion, he owned several companies, and his five cars were expensive. The marriage with Gloria had added to his wealth. He had married the woman two years ago. Gloria Parker was twenty-six years of age. It was said that the two of
  7. November Storm (Can You Write 50,000 Words in a Month?)     Brian’s body hurt. His legs trembled when he tried to rise to his feet. His body was cold and numb. He was totally exhausted and his mouth was dry. He had not eaten and drunk for hours. He was dehydrated and his vision was blurred. He felt sick and he had a headache. He was not able to type anymore. He gazed at the screen, but he could barely read the letters. Brian tried to rise to his feet again, but he instantly broke into persp
  8. I'm participating. Won three. My fourth year. Like they say, 30 days/nights of literary abandon. I like the feeling. It's great.
  9. Thank you for the review, Jonathan. I'm happy you liked the story.
  10. What a big suprise! Thank you very much, Jonathan. I'm happy you liked the story and even wrote a review for the blog. Many thanks again.
  11. Great post. You're so right. I wish you well!
  12. Thank you, Percy. I'm happy you liked the little story.
  13. Thank you for your comment, Joann. It's much appreciated. I'm glad you liked my story.
  14. Dolores Esteban

    The Game

    I was typing until late at night. The night was warm. The balcony door was open. And then the creepiness got me myself. I looked at the balcony door warily and thought: "I'd better close that door." And so I did. *lol* Thanks for reading. Glad you liked my story.
  15. Dolores Esteban

    The Game

    Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked the story. Oh, the bathroom window. I didn't catch this when I edited my story. Sorry. Regarding my writing style...English is not my first language and I don't know any native speakers of English in real life. I spent a few months in Toronto. But that was years ago. So please forgive any mistakes etc. I try my best and I'm happy I can post my stories here. Writing stories in English is just a hobby of mine. I hate to write in German. It just doesn't feel right. Many thanks again.
  16. Dolores Esteban

    The Game

    Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked the story. Oh, the bathroom window. I didn't catch this when I edited my story. Sorry. Regarding my writing style...English is not my first language and I don't know any native speakers of English in real life. I spent a few months in Toronto. But that was years ago. So please forgive any mistakes etc. I try my best and I'm happy I can post my stories here. Writing stories in English is just a hobby of mine. I hate to write in German. Just don't feels right. Thanks again.
  17. Writing poems in Dr. Seuss style is lots of fun. Thanks for sharing my poem.
  18. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Great story. It kept me on the edge of my seat. So sad that Randy died.
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Alright

    Thanks, Joann. You just made my day!
  20. Dolores Esteban

    The Game

    Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm very happy you liked the story. I put much time and effort into it.
  21. Dolores Esteban

    Amber Prince

    A beautiful tale that reminded me of the fairytales I read as a child. I really enjoyed this.
  22. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Great story! I was totally absorbed in it. I like your style of writing very much.
  23. Thank you, Andy. Glad you liked the story.
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