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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Strong arguments and a clear message to the many people who are uninfomed, biased, and prejudiced. Thanks for your work.
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    Who...Are You?

    Dolores Esteban commented on MJ85's story chapter in Who...Are You?

    I figured out it was Kevin and I hoped for a happy ending. I was not sure about that, though. I'm glad they came together. I definitely like the story.
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    Uhm, yes, there is only a faint connection to the theme. Gabriel asks a question. In fact, the sentence is of no great importance. Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it anyway.
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    The Room

    Dolores Esteban commented on Johnathan Colourfield's story chapter in The Room

    Surrealistic at first sight. But definitely a story with depth and meaning. I liked it.
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    Act 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on W_L's story chapter in Act 1

    Definitely a good Act 1. The characters and all layers of the play are well introduced. I especially like Dr. Lucas and his role in the play. I like that kind of stuff. Personally, I would reveal his true nature later in the play in order to keep suspense and have reader's wondering. A scene close to the climax would be perfect, I think. Anyway, Act 1 grabbed my interest and I would like to read on.
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    A very good story. Very emotional. It left me thinking. I like your story a lot.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    The story drew me in completely. Great!
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    Thanks for the prompt that inspired me to write the story. Glad you liked my fairy tale.
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    Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
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    Thank you!
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A very moving and touching story that I liked to read.
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    Beautiful story! I enjoyed it a lot.
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    The Elven Lord Who rides so late through the windy night? A knight with fair hair and face so bright His handsome squire is by his side The two set out for a nightly ride Why is your face so frightened, my squire? Can’t you see the Erlking in his dark attire? With a golden sceptre and a golden crown? Squire, it’s just the fog rising from the ground Come, handsome squire, pretty boy I’ll take you on a ride of joy Through flower fields and meadows green I’ll show you things you’ve
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    Neldor and Leandor stood in the main hall. The only window in the room had been opened. Light fell into the hall and illuminated it. The brethren had left the hall and they had taken Ogol with them. "I thank you, Master Neldor, that you followed the call," Leandor said. "Unfortunately, I understood a bit late why fate had summoned me here," Neldor replied. Leandor smiled. "You understood it all in time, Master Neldor," he said. Leandor pointed at the window. "A ward guards this window. Tw
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    The palace disappeared from one second to the other. Neldor and Qildor jumped to their feet. The abyss had disappeared. The material world had returned to their original shape. The sky was blue and the sun was out and shed a warm light. Ogol and Magath were lying on the path that led up to the Castle of Saelethiel. They did not move. Their bodies were lifeless and numb. Qildor instantly started to run. He hurried to Magath. Neldor took a deep breath. A shiver ran through his body. The ultimat
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    Time passed by. Magath was lying on his back on the ground. The feelings of despair and shame slowly faded. Magath gazed into the darkness. He ignored the rain. Time was running out and it was too late to alter the course. The past was gone and could not be undone. It did not matter any longer anyway. Time was running out. Time had starting ticking. There was no future for him. There was only one door. With every hour that passed, he stepped closer to it. Soon he would place his hand on its knob
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    The brethren stood and with their inner eyes watched out. Silence hung over the castle. The Castle of Saelethiel lies high up in the Western Mountains. It was founded in the mists of time. The castle guards secrets that are far beyond a man’s understanding. The guardians of the castle watch out and enforce the law. The law is timeless and it cannot be shaken. When time has come, man must face the truth. He is summoned to look into the abyss of his soul. Man must undergo a trial. The brethren
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    Qildor and Neldor awoke. The sun had already risen and shed a warm light. They soon found out that Magath was missing. They called out for him and searched outside the camp. But they didn’t find a trace of the man. "I must go and find him. He cannot have disappeared," Qildor said in utter concern He felt a knot in his stomach. His gut feeling warned him. They hurried up the path, calling out Magath’s name. "I’ll kill the man if he has a hand in it," Qildor hissed while they hastened along.
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    Congratulations!
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    Congratulations!
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    Ogol looked down into the canyon. He felt magically drawn to the bottom of it. Eager to find the truth at the bottom of the abyss, Ogol more skidded than climbed down the slope. He didn’t pay attention to his scratched hands and his half-twisted ankle that was the result of a risky jump. Ogol ignored the pain and his exhaustion. He eagerly sought his way down to the ground. He sensed an energy that was strong and tempting. Ogol felt that he was close to his goal. Night had fallen when Ogol reac
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    Prompt #71

    Dolores Esteban commented on Andy78's story chapter in Prompt #71

    Great story. It really grabbed my interest.
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    An apology

    Dolores Esteban commented on comicfan's blog entry in Wayne's Updates

    It's okay to wallow for a while until you're ready to resurface.
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    Night fell and no sound was to be heard. Silence hung over the castle that was hidden from sight entirely. The mighty ward worked well and hid the castle. The powerful energy spread from its centre where in the main hall the guardians had gathered. The brethren formed a perfect circle. The centre of the circle was the centre of the gigantic energy field. At midnight, the brethren stood like on a command and dissolved their circle. They stood in a line, and while they did, the energy stopped rad
  25. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you! Writing to the prompts is fun.
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