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Dolores Esteban

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  1. I read chaptered and non-chaptered stories, although I prefer stories that are not too long. I always write non-chaptered stories. I only cut a story into chapters after it's finished. I think uploading chapters of a long story is more convenient for the reader.
  2. Yes, the ending is a bit sentimental. Someone told me already. Thanks for reading and leaving a feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed it anyway.
  3. Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked that as well.
  4. Thank you very much. Glad you liked it.
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    Random

    Random (A Dadaist Poem) by Dolores Esteban Author’s note: Dadaism or Dada is a cultural movement in visual art as well as literature, theatre and graphic design. Its purpose was to ridicule what its participants considered to be the meaninglessness of the modern world. As Dadaist Hugo Ball expressed it, "For us, art is not an end in itself ... but it is an opportunity for the true perception and criticism of the times we live in." The artists created art in w
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    Random

    A Dadaist Poem
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    Why?

    Thanks for wasting your time on my story and the slap in the face. Honestly, I do not care.
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    Why?

    Thanks for your kind comment.
  9. Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I'm happy you liked the story.
  10. I was curious right from the start and I'd like to know what Mikie will find. I just fear that he will be disappointed. Thanks for sharing. I did like it.
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    Why?

    Thank you very much for your kind comment. Makes me feel happy.
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    Why?

    Thanks for your feedback. I'm happy you liked the story.
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    Chapter 1

    I liked the pace of the story. And I loved the image of the rain. A beautifully told story. I liked the happy ending. I feared throughout the story the mysterious guy was just some random guy taking advantage of Alex.
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    Story

    Your story almost brought tears to my eyes. This happens only rarely. A very touching story. Beautiful.
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    Why?

    Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it.
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    Chapter 1

    It took a while, but finally the story drew me in. I'd like to read more about the 'angels' who are actually aliens. Where did they come from, why did they come here? Interesting theme.
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    Chapter 1

    I really liked the first part of the story. Very vivid descriptions. The ending was bit 'mundane'', compared to the 'glittering' beginning. But that's just me, probably. Nice story.
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    Chapter 1

    We either do not really notice or we want to know the true reasons behind a situation. We want to know where it all leads to. But all we do is glimpse at somebody's life from our own perspective. Life does not provide reasons and it does not give 100% answers. We feel disappointed then. We would not feel this way if we left things as they are. Your story is a glimpse. And it feels right to leave it at that. Since such is life. I liked it. I wrote a glimpse, too. I currently feel unable to write a all wrapped up story. I feel restricted by this target.
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    Why?

    Sorry you could not relate to the story. Well, yes, I did not explain everything and I left questions. But actually I intended to write it that way. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment anyway.
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    Why?

    Oh, thanks for you kind comment. Glad you liked the piece.
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    Why?

    Thanks for reading and leaving a feedback.
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    Why?

    Thanks for reading and leaving a feedback.
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    Why?

    Thanks for reading and commenting.
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