Conner

When is the next pool party?

I wanted to say that! Happy B-Day, Mark!

I don't think Lark will be narrating anything for a while. I loved the story. Chapter 14 did venture into the melodramatic. But all's well that ends well.

Excellent chapter, Mark! It's looking like Marcel did such a great job with Max, he'll be transitioning from top to versatile...at least for the next little while. Looks like Pete is coming out of his shell as well.

So much for Lou changing his stripes! Marcel didn't take it so badly. In fact, it seemed he fully expected it. The rolex switch was a hoot! I'm also thinking Lou's not terribly bright. I was really pissed that Max had Lark over again. I mean if you're going to go all co-dependent on someone, try not to pick a sleeze ball. Where's Brad when you need him? Hopefully, Max will get a clue. Great chapter, Mark!

I'll tell ya, I gave it my best shot. "Staying Alive" by the Bee Gees still gets me going. I have thrown out my disco "outfits"....just last week. If I were to wear the boots I wore in those days, I'd more than likely fall off them. Actually, there are two passtimes I engage in after I've had too much to drink. Dancing is one; the other is directing classical or band music. I don't mix the two. Dancing to classical music is way too gay.

So the chapter started with Marcel doing his "Why am I so unlucky at love?" thing. Frankly, it was a godsend that Lou showed up. Otherwise Marcel would spent the evening in a real funk. I was looking for some sign that Lou had changed his ways. Taking the offered money in exchange for getting out of Marcel's life wasn't it. The ending was positive....I think. Marcel's sticking his neck out again. We'll see I guess. The scene with Bruno was great. Loved it. Disco....I remember it fondly.

Great story, Jack! Let me be perfectly clear about one thing, though, I wanted Oleg to get together with Joe. Joe just needs a little man love to get him out of the closet! Instead, Oleg ends up with a divorce lawyer. If anyone is down on relationships, it's got to be a divorce lawyer.

I'm inclined to give Max a break on this one. Yes, his note to Marcel was definitely a "blow off". So if that's the charge, Max is guilty. When it comes to sentencing, however, I'd put him on probation, no jail time. Max woke up that morning, no longer drunk or stoned, and realized he had been betrayed by someone purporting to be his friend. Marcel was well aware of Max's vulnerability over the Lark thing. Max had repeatedly told Marcel he didn't want to get f**ked. Marcel proceeded to seduce him anyway. And that's what it was, a seduction, plain and simple. Marcel chose to get his rocks off instead of respecting his friend's emotional state. "Here, let me fix you with my dick!"

Why did Scar take the time to tell Yuri that he hasn't had much night time jumping experience? It would be great if Scar jumped right into the volcano! That way this whole island invasion thing will be over quickly and we can focus on the lovin', male exotic dancers and pool parties!

Yes, there were some good yuks in this chapter. Keith and Brian....I like it. I think CJ will just leave it in the "sparks" stage. I smell a sequel here. Great job, CJ! Take good care of yourself, goat-buddy!

Three excellent chapters, Mark! I hope Marcel realizes that getting Pete out of his shell is not the same as getting him out of his clothes. Then again, it might help. So Max is back in the story. Marcel was really good for him, particularly when Marcel talked to him about Lou. I'm not convinced that Max will get what he needs from his parents right now. I'd rather see him with Brad, Marcel and Steph. I'm not surprised that Robbie was being positive about Marcel and Max getting together. I'm hoping Robbie doesn't have another 'episode' of insecurity. It would br great to have Brad in the story for a bit. I agree that Lark needs to straighten himself out. He's behaving poorly. That chore would somehow involve Brad too.

Great story, Mark! Needless to say, I'm glad there will be a sequel following Summer Love. Granger has turned into a fine young man and naval officer. Where can I order a midshipman?

One more chapter! Say it ain't so! There's going to be a sequel, right? I must say, that was a sweet sweet chapter. Now we just have to hope there's still a Barracuda for Granger and his men to go back to. Welcome, kiwiboi! Mark got your first post. He's gonna love that!

While Eric and Jansen were hanging around near the airport waiting for the General, there was time there for one hot and heavy make out session. Instead they were looking for a sandwich shop??? :wacko: Doesn't sound like the Eric I've come to know. Talk about a missed opportunity!

Great chapter! I guess the war will have to serve as a distraction for both Granger and Travers. Mind you, Granger has other distractions as well. It seems it won't be long before George is screaming, "O Captain, my Captain!" on a regular basis. It also looks like our brand new Lieutenant will be breaking in his own Midshipman! I was impressed and amused with the exchange between George and his potential spouse. George's looks and charm will just about get him into anyone's bed. Yes, indeed, Sir Evelyn fires his first salvo!

You're just a big tease! That lake scene could have been a whole lot more satisfying! You made Greg chicken out. Meanwhile, Corey seems oblvious...

OMG! Granger and Travers are to be separated. Splice the main brace! God save the King! I'm thinking this whole war thing with France is plot by Sir Evelyn to get Granger's sweet ass all to himself! Can't say that I blame the dude! Looks like being disowned was the best thing that could have happened to Bertie. He's gone to India to prove his worth. :2hands: Good on ya, Bertie. Here's hoping you don't get your nuts shoot off. He's quit gambling but intends to hang onto booze and whores. I don't know, Bertie. Lots of great stuff in chapter 10.

I'm in a total state of shock! Nick, what have you been up to? Well, I suppose I know what you've been up to....at least 9 months ago. You're a daddy! Big big job! It's the job everyone is the least prepared for...but trial and error works. You stud! Well, now you know you're not shooting blanks! I have fathered and raised 3 children. They're all adults now; my baby is about to turn 30 this year. Not a grandfather yet, though. So throw out Dr. Spock (not that anyone still reads him anyway) and PM me! Congrats, dude!

Actually, I started the ball rolling on that one.

Yes, I like that. Sir Evelyn of the Mast. Bertie's back! Surprise! Granger's butt is in high demand at this particular point. Poor lad, he's just trying to be a good sailor. Lots of good laughs in that chapter. Great job, Mark!

I was about to give you crap for not commenting on my comments. Good thing I checked and discovered I didn't make any. I hate putting both feet in my mouth at the same time. My bad. Great chapter, Jordan. Jake did annoy me this chapter. He really does think too much, particularly around Shane. He's finally getting into the relationship and more accepting of himself but he's still looking over his shoulder and waiting for Shane to do all the work. Anyways, things are good so I shan't be too hard on him. The closing scene with Ry and Jake was superb. Loved it. Actually, Ryan was totally sweet this chapter. Ryan becoming sensitive....who wooda thunk! Conner

Thanks, I'm on chapter 4.

Chapter 7 was extremely enjoyable! Young Granger continues to amaze me. He's maturing and really beginning to assert himself aboard the ship. He's got Travers in his hip pocket....not to mention other places. A fine lad he is. So Travers has to overcome the shame and stigma attached to his father's treason. That's a tough one. Granger certainly seems eager to help him out there. I hope the visit home to meet Granger's parents doesn't backfire. I must admit though that they're quite the formidable team. Carnal duties. Interesting concept.

Really great chapters, Gabriel! I think Evan got a bit of a bum rap from Raf and Kenny around the annual trek to the cemetary to see Luke. In my view, Kenny should have made his feelings known to Evan. Anytime you do stuff you don't like doing supposedly for the benefit of someone else, resentment usually follows. It's like those parents who "sacrifice" something for the benefit of their children and end up throwing their sacrifice in the form of guilt into their children's faces. Their "higher purpose" got lost somewhere and only resentment and regret remain. Grieving is a very personal thing and we all handle it differently, but I suppose there are some forms of grieving that can be "unhealthy" in terms of achieving some reasonable degree of closure with the grief. It strikes me that Evan may well have gone to an unhealthy place if Jeff hadn't turned up. I'm wondering if grieving is in fact more difficult when the person being grieved is someone like Luke - very attractive, athletic, fun loving, a totally loving human being. There have been no Lukes in my life. Jeff's low self-esteem issues seem to continually rear their ugly head. I wish he'd stop that. It seems that Evan has decided to tackle that issue head on even if it takes the next 50 years. That can be a very draining process. Good for Evan is all I can say there. The humour is just excellent, Gabriel.