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  1. Palantir

    Chapter 3

    Yep! There is a great deal to cover - though I do think a couple of rather incredible things occurred.
  2. Palantir

    Chapter 2

    Thank you, @centexhairysub. The Aussie locations are all real places I have explored. The power zap? Maybe! - lol.
  3. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Hi @centexhairysub, Keiran and Mr B. are the only two from the realms. I'm delighted that the story has caught your interest. - I hope that continues.
  4. Palantir

    Chapter 3

    Chapter 3. *** The expedition progressed with a busy time of organising packs and a drive to a new area where the next hike started. After half an hour of walking beside a small creek, past a beautiful waterfall and up a steep scrambling trail, a strikingly desolate scene opened in front of them, a scene of charred trunks and isolated boulders, blackened remnants of vegetation and bare, scorched ground. Cameras and minds recorded this strange fire-scarred environment which stretched to t
  5. Watch the films! lol I don't need to - I remember seeing him live on the tele.
  6. Ask an Author does it again! Every time this blog turns up, new people (or old stalwarts) enlighten us with personal insights, tit-bits of experience, new viewpoints. So interesting!
  7. Palantir

    Chapter 2

    hi @travlbug, Thanks for the comment - feedback is so good to get. Yes, there are complications ahead. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the nature writing - lol - I can't not put it in. Hmm! Watch closely in future chapters for more detail about the headache business.
  8. Palantir

    Chapter 2

    @Daddydavek Lots more to come (this is already my biggest story)
  9. Palantir

    Chapter 2

    @Dathi - lol - I had to come up with something green. And yes, a few unusual elements are hinted at.
  10. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Hi @ColumbusGuy, Yep, it's a long time since the last story - this is a biggie though so I'll be active with posting for quite a while. And yes, answers will come - but so will many more questions.
  11. Palantir

    Chapter 2

    Chapter 2. The High King pushed all thought of court matters aside and gave full attention to his advisor. "Your report is not as I expected, Uirebon. There is much that concerns me, and much I don't understand. Keryth's vision is being affected and the head pain is so debilitating he can do nothing for hours at a time. During all the months of preparation and treatment there was no mention of any discomfort, let alone this disabling pain." "Yes, my Lord. The effect is unpleasant and
  12. HAVE A GREAT DAY!
  13. YAY!! HAVE A GREAT DAY, DD!!
  14. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Hi @aditus, Thanks for that - it's nice to hear when something sparks a connection in a reader's mind. There are lots more chapters and I sure hope they hold your interest.
  15. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Hi @IBEX, Yep! You're completely correct. They are one and the same - though the Keiran persona hasn't a clue about who he really is.
  16. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Hi @Dathi, I'm delighted that you've found the story. It's a neat feeling to be renewing contact with old past readers. It's a new genre but I think the storytelling style is pretty much the same.
  17. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Great to have you on board @Daddydavek, Hmm! All I will say is that you are very perceptive. Ditto @Bndmetl
  18. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Thanks @Bndmetl Great to hear you're enjoying the story. The next post is roughly 2 weeks away. Lol, and I was worried that, despite stacks of things happening eventually, this introductory chapter might be somewhat quiet as a good attention grabber.
  19. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    Thanks @JCtoGO2, There's a bit of personality stuff as well as a lead into some of the nature and adventure stuff I like to write. I hope you continue to enjoy.
  20. Palantir

    Chapter 1

    WIDDERKIN. Gliding effortlessly in wide, lazy surveillance circles, the Courser veered for a different view of the sprawling heart of the High Realm. Concepts of magnificence and grandeur were for other minds and the keen eyes regarded the panoply of ramparts, courtyards and tall spires with indifference till movement stirred a primal hunting drive. Recognition of the being below quashed the thought of prey and the pattern of watchful oversight resumed with a long sweep of the High C
  21. Palantir

    Widderkin

    Keiran, banished from the Elven Realms, faces curious happenings across different worlds.
  22. Lol - Yep - I love vegemite - and lamingtons - but the prawns make me throw up (allergy)🤢 Thanks Reader!
  23. Wow! Thanks, Sandrewn (Ishmael). I love the greetings - and it's unbelievable how appropriate they are. The wintry cake for a start because my birthday morning was a very cold reception from the elements - frost making the grass crunch with every step until the winter sun warmed everything up. As for the party birds, apart from making me laugh, they were appropriate too, because every single type in the song was an actual birthday visitor to my yard - lol they live here really .
  24. HAVE A GREAT DAY!!
  25. HAPPY BIRTHDAY CIA!! HAVE A GREAT DAY!!
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