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  1. Cannot wait to see what our talented authors come up with for this one.
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    Fault Lines

    Well, honestly, I am shocked that some government goon squad hasn't tried to grab them. In this case, a good offense might well be the best defense.
  3. I am totally baffled by the courts, his parents, and the schools having Ed go back to school. I understand continuing his lessons, but home schooling would have been a much better choice. Not the least because school or it's environment was where the teasing and abuse started.
  4. This is almost taking family togetherness too far. LOL I was quite sure that Matthew would be okay after the initial moment of oh no. Rory handled it about as well as could be expected, and rather smart of him to go to Irma.
  5. Dante has never been able to truly make any decisions for himself in regard to what he might find attractive, or who he wanted to have sex with. That doesn't mean he can't do that, just that he has not as of yet. I think this is something that he needs to really think on, however. Frank isn't as much of a child as most of his family thinks, but not sure that he fully understands that what he did hurt Dante as much as it did. Frank is large enough that without preparation and care, he can do some damage. Can't decide if he is falling in love with Dante, or the idea of who he thinks Dante is to him. Henry got some honest answers from Dante, they might not be fully what he needed, but they were honest. How many weeks has it been since Mistress Alice and Dante had sex?
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    Chapter 23

    Jake may never be able to reach out to Killian, or he may call the next day. If and when is up to him. Jake has so much to process that it will take a long time to recover from this. I think Judy will help him though. Killian made a few very foolish decisions, but in the end, he did save Jake and perhaps Kane as well. Came to this story late, will play catch up with the rest as I can.
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    Chapter 23

    Have watched it on Netflix more than once. It is brilliant.
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    Chapter 22

    I know from a story perspective, Killian could never have called the police, but in real life, he definitely should have. He could not have saved any of the rest, and honestly, Jake might have died too, but he would not have had to have been the one to kill Todd. Even if Todd deserved to die, Killian should never have been the one to kill him. I guess Seth's nickname for Killian was apropos.
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    Chapter 21

    Killian will be the fool and not call the police... If he is that much of a fool, he is too stupid to live anyway.
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    Chapter 20

    Killian was as big of an ass as Zach. While he may not have known what Asher was going to do, he certainly should have talked to Jake before all of this came out.
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    Chapter 19

    Zach may have been an ass, but he didn't deserve that. Killian is being stupid on several levels right now. He is not only endangering himself but others.
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    Chapter 18

    Did Gilly break the windows or was it Zack and his group or was it Batman? Killian needs to develop more of a survival instinct or he isn't going to survive this tribulation.
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    Chapter 17

    My mind is in a total whirl, and I can't land on a particular person yet. Todd seems too obvious, but he is someone that Jake would wait to tell him about if asked.
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    Chapter 16

    Truly hope that the deal with Kane doesn't blow up in anyone's face. Asher and Killian were just not meant to be. Wish Killian would pay more attention to the book; I really think it means something.
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    Chapter 15

    Told you this deal with Gilly was going to get complicated and it is going to get someone hurt. Glad that Killian's mother is getting away, we can hope she makes it to her sisters. The sperm donor is not going to be happy about any of this. Even if he can get out from under all of this, people will still talk.
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    Chapter 12

    Gilly is great, but this is going to be a huge disaster at some point. Sort of understand Asher's reaction, but he sort of deserves it as well. Kane is in a mess, but they have to do this legally. The dream and the book clearly mean something, and I am betting something important. Was Gilly's uncle killed in this area? Could the murders be linked in some way?
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    Chapter 11

    That was actually my first thought.
  18. Thanks for the updates, really appreciate them all.
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    Chapter 10

    Beautiful Things is one of my favorite movies of all times. Love it. Killian and Asher need to slow down some, they just decided to see if this works, and they need to be careful how they act with each other, or everyone will figure it out.
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    Chapter 9

    Kane showing up was a revelation and a cause for celebration. He is going to catch hell from his mother, but it was totally worth it. In most states 15 is the age that you can decide which parent to live with, unless there is something preventing you from doing so, maybe they should look into that. Asher and Killian had another talk that seemed to go in circles, and nothing ever really got decided.
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    Chapter 8

    Asher was really hurt by what Killian asked, and honestly, he should have been. Nothing that happened would have led me to thinking he was involved, but we can't see into Killian's head. Hope that Kane is able to call his father, I wondered for a second if he even knew about Seth, but I am assuming that the burial was near his mother's place. Killian's mother has made her decision, let's hope that she carries through and is able to do so.
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    Chapter 7

    The hospital will have to report it, but in a small town like this with the sperm donor being who he is, nothing will happen.
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    Chapter 6

    Killian's sperm donor is going to be hot under the collar. I truly have not seen anything that would honor him with the name of dad or father. Have to admit, Killian asking questions will not be well received by many in his high school, too small town and to insular, protect the status quo.
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    Chapter 2

    Honestly, if there any creature with more capacity for stupidity and viciousness than the average American teenager, I would like proof that it exists.
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    Chapter 1

    Some really interesting characters, and well developed for only the first chapter, can actually visualize a couple of them fairly easily, and already know which ones we should all avoid.
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