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  1. A delightful mix of new characters and old friends that we have enjoyed for so many stories. A new protagonist that comes from such a different background but finds his life in the midst of our usual friends and their families. You would not really have to read the previous Seachange stories, but they would definitely be beneficial to understand some of the minutia and background information that comes out in certain areas. That said, this is mostly the story of a new protagonist and his fitting into these established settings. Don't want to say too much so that any surprises are maintained. Sit back with a lovely glass of tea and perhaps a scone or two and enjoy this newest story in this delightful saga.
  2. And the choice will be.... A lovely story that is a wonderful mix of newer characters and just enough of the familiar characters to blend in and give us that wonderful feeling of joy and happiness that there is so much love and friendship in the world around us. Levi has come full turn; he took a trip back to see his mother's grave and visit some familiar things. He has Jamie to take care of and try to be the best big brother he can be to Jamie. He has his friends and Brooke, and now perhaps Toby as well. Can't wait to see that next story in this wonderful saga.
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    Stevensham

    Well, we got some background on a stop on the way to the event. Some interesting ways for this to go from here. I do like the two main protagonists, but both Cliff and Gary just annoyed me, hope we don't see much of them. Can't wait to see where you take this one.
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    Chapter 22

    Have enjoyed all of these stories, and while I would like for them to continue, you must do what is right for you, your feelings, and your writing. Hope to see a new story from you soon, you are simply too talented to keep these stories to yourself, even if we are greedy gits, they do brighten our days and nights and give us all something to look forward to. All the best on any future endeavors.
  5. Glad your recovery continues, but take care and don't rush yourself... Runyan and Willie James have their own place to live, yes, it is part of Barnswallow, but just separate enough that they will be able to live their own lives as well. They need to be able to a rhythm and establish their own lives. Find a way to mesh their lives and find something that they can both help support themselves and that they enjoy. Let's just hope they are far enough from their old place that no one sees and reports back to their families. I think that Runyan's family learned their lesson about saying anything, but Willie James's father would cause trouble just because of the hate that he carries in his own soul. August and Fletcher as well as Runyan and Willie James are all making plans, can't wait to see what becomes of them.
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    Chapter 1

    I am so hoping that the ones entombed in the stone are not removed and subject to this. Never a pleasant job, but one that is necessary in all communities and cultures.
  7. I would so have that gym teacher fired. Any teacher that knowingly allows hazing of any type, especially what happened on days one and two should be fired and honestly arrested. The fact that Kurtis had the good sense to ask Connie before trying to kiss her says a lot about him. Carl is an ass, why is there always a few of them around, and why does anyone else ever listen to them?
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    Chapter 20

    Troy is going to have to be honest with himself, first and foremost. He had told Owen about the texting and the dinner, why not be open about the beach? Troy and Owen seem to be falling into a rut of sorts; with occasional bouts of outstanding sex. But is that enough to justify keeping a wedding planner busy? Like a few of the others, Owen seems more distracted and more involved than I would have expected for it being end of term, even with having the responsibilities of being a department head. Maybe the job interview, or maybe something else, we will see. Miles is being the gentleman, just keeping it light and easy and keeping everything out front and honest. Why do see storm clouds gathering in the distance???
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    Chapter 16

    A treat that will not soon be forgotten. Each person was touched by Julian's generosity from the youngest child to the oldest of the workers. They all received a blessing on good stewardship from Julian. Julian and Daniel grow ever closer; Daniel knows that Julian's heart belongs to Sam. But that begs the question, just where is this going between them? Beautifully written, the colors, smells, and scents of the day just leapt off the page.
  10. Well, a truly interesting start, and so much going on. We already have a number of truly interesting characters and of course a delightful and charming setting or two already coming into focus. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Withdrawal

    How sad, a young star perishes in the same manner as his character on a popular TV show...
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    Withdrawal

    Having the family behind him has insured that Travis will survive this within the industry. They will rewrite the show if need be and do what needs to be done to ensure that he has a chance to move forward from this experience. I would suggest that Sebastian listen to Aaron, because if Brad or God forbid Jake has to become involved, well, how many rattlesnakes are there in California? As painful, and yes, it is physically painful to go through detox; the real work will be when that is over. Travis is going to have to be stronger mentally and psychologically to deal with this business going forward. This ended on a somewhat upbeat note; but I can see certain traces of Brad and Robbie starting to run through the relationship between Will and Travis, and I am not sure that either of them is prepared for some of those ups and downs.
  13. Anticipating so many good things..
  14. Well, first the unpleasant, I am sure like a bad penny, Casey will turn up creating turmoil and trouble in his wake. And while I don't feel the annoyance with Brooke that some do, I do find her patience and the fact that even knowing what she knows, she still is going out with Levi to be nice. Even if they do not end up together, they may well find a way to be friends, and everyone can use more of them. Jamie got to experience what family is really about. Sounds as if perhaps even before his coming out, that was nonexistent in his life. And loved his present to Matt and Luke. Levi is reflective, but then he should be, so much as has happened in just barely one short year. He mustn't feel guilty about not thinking about or missing his mother as much. He will always care for and remember her, but life truly is for the living. His past year has been filled with so much, both good and bad, and at his age, he has to spend a lot of time trying to figure that out as well. Glad that Levi is keeping his journal. Do we perhaps have another budding writer in our midst? Jamie needs to refrain from trying to read any of it, unless allowed by Levi, journals are private for a reason.
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    Chapter 19

    Well, that was one hell of an explanation, and it certainly explains a lot. Not sure it was smart of Troy to ask for Miles's phone number; did he tell Owen that he did that? Miles and Robbie have settled down into a comfortable existence and sounds as if Troy and Owen have as well. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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    Chapter 3

    Well, thank god, they were honest with each other from the start. Not sure what that honesty will bring, but always a good first step.
  17. Thanks @Myr, as always appreciate the look into what is out there. Some truly outstanding stories here.
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    Chapter 15

    We can hope the ship is the right one, and that Sam will be on it and alright. Julian clearly waits for Sam, but he seems to be developing some feelings for Daniel as well. Will this cause problems, or just an added joy? They are going to make the party extra special for the children, but also for the adults. That amount of a bonus back then would be extraordinary and will change the fortune of some of the families. It would enable them to make changes in their lives, or the lives of their family that will really make a difference. Can't wait to see what happens next.
  19. As always, an interesting set of questions and answers...
  20. Buying a house and moving is torture designed by truly evil minds. And especially when you have four very distinct personalities that all are looking for something a little different. I do understand not taking Toby though, if he got fixated on one, no one would ever hear the end of it. LOL
  21. Levi did the right thing. Will there be repercussions, perhaps, but that is part of growing up, dealing with the consequences of your actions. Levi and Jamie are getting steadily closer. I really think Levi would do anything he had to do in order to protect Jamie. Jamie going back to the center and talking to the other boys, helps not only them, but himself as well. Casey is like a cornered rat, and they can be vicious.
  22. Glad to hear that you are feeling a little better. Please take care of yourself, delay a week's posting or two if you need to rest up some. Sounds as if this farm is damn near perfect in every way. Seems that August's grandfather knew what he was doing and built everything to last. I do understand Willie James and Runyon wanting their own space, even if it is just over the field a way. Someplace that they answer to no one and can share themselves without anyone around. Truly a wonderful chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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    Chapter 2

    Karla isn't exactly the person that you would want introducing a new person to this new home in the caverns. She might be okay in a brothel, but not here. Susanna is reluctant, but perhaps this will not be as bad as she expects it to be.
  24. As always, thanks for the deep dive.
  25. Quick turnaround on the test results, but I don't think any of us had any real doubts. Life can be hard on army kids; always moving and having to make new friends, and it can be more than a little difficult to break into new schools and friend groups.
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