Mark M

Oh i am gona like this. I betcha he is gona be one of them straight guys that can only go gay for this one friend. Otherwise there completly straight. I'm so pumped! although i do hope for other surprises even if i think that's the main one. I wana see when they have to make out, etc, etc.

It's over? Really? Well I enjoyed it, that's for sure. Didn't care for the ending. Oh we'll cant get everything now -.0

I hate to say this, but "max" or the little guy, was annoying, very realistic that's for sure. One day i too want kids cuz i love them to death, but i duno i like this as an older story. I really hope you take it all the way to the college years, cuz that's the best time, probably cuz that's where i am in, in my own life. Eitherway i could do without Max, he was just too clingy for me, and plus it took us away from Zak and dusty, which i find with all these characters, we are genuinly loosing the Main's, and there own development, hopefully you eventually go in a direction of Main characters and not a combined cerfluffle of characters. I might as review it all and also mention that Zak's birthday was maybe not overboard, but it was very extensive and i didn't even know his mom had money to buy a brand new vehicle like that. So far i only knew Mattie had money in the family. Anyway I really enjoy this! that's for sure. I just need a Zak and dusty fix i think

I wana see twilight pt 2, and I'm going tomorrow!

Loved it! Keep it up! Are you all caught up now with the writing ratio? Cuz I wouldn't mind another 10 chapters. And please tell me you have an idea that this will be a longer then 30 chapters! It's too good for u to stop! Lol!

UGGGHGHHH you would stop that the second he gets on his HORSE! GRRRR!!! i want more!!! i love this story! and i have ridden a horse a few times and always enjoyed it

Very well done! i love this first five chapters! i can't wait to see what you have for Zak and dusty in the future, my only sad part is 5 chapters = almost 2 days. i really don't think i can handle having 20 chapters of Zak's week in school before he gets back on the ranch! But i am currious to see how this brings him out in school!

I believe I declare a cliffhanger! What the heck r these orders I wonder??? sounds mysterious. But I am enjoying the trip to rio, one day in real life I'd love to go for there festival!

CAP and the Bridgemont Series are so wonderful, i personaly love each one and check daily, for updates, usualy for me which is nice, updates are between the 11-12P.M Centeral Canada time, so i'm just like getting into bed to enjoy a nice relaxing read before sleepy time. Now i started reading when Mark was half way through be-rad, of course i got annoyed at starting with be-rad, and not knowing some of the refrences, but it was a good start, i eventually did go back in to read the first few books before be-rad and now am a patient reader of each new chapter. I honestly think i joined G.A because of Mark, Vlista, and Bill W. They all have amazing stories, although none as active as Mr. Mark Arbour! Each chapter has you wanting more! more! more! Andy, Bill W Castaway hotel is fantastic i admit, i read the original version rather then the revised edition, so i'm not sure exactly how it was changed, but once i read it once getting into it again was pretty hard since alot of the revised edition was in the original. However since this is about Mark A here i must strongly suggest starting the series! however once started good luck taking a break, it's very addictive. after all there's a "Syndrom" for the bridgemont series if it takes to much of a break even! what the abreviation is i'm not sure. But alas! Read it! Mark Loves first post cherry's as he has had a ton, and welcomes each new one very well Oh and to be clear, Mark Arbour calls me ~MM NOT that i took his name in any way shape or form cuz i'm a fan....i'm just one of the many Mark's in the world. Keep writing Mark! <3

Well i'm glad i looked around!! thanks Guys!!!!!!!! :D It was a great day!

Soooo this explains it.....I never decided to look too see if there was a delay...till now....probably three Ish weeks since the last chapter posted, and if it hasn't been that long, feels like it! But I here ya about school I just restarted and instead of finance I've taken interest in computer engineering technology major change, but Canadian financial institutions are heartless and want all the business so they work there employees like hell, without pay, expect them to be involved in the community, and have upwards of 15 goals involving a sales, skills, and continuing learning. All crap. But enjoy your first weeks of school I know I am, and I'm coming out in the process, meaning being more general on my sexuality then going with the flow type of thing and letting the issue be stationary. So far still no negative reviews. And alas I still await the next chapter in either instalment.

Beautiful! if only there was more Such a great short story!

Okay my inner Drama queen is coming out, and this was kinda boring for me. I was expecting a war, all i got was a cave in. i guess i wanted brad to fight for will because he loves him and wants to keep guiding him, but alas.....it wasnt. Now im okay with it, but im kind of lost now, this was the big kahoona or the big issue going on and its over just like that. The storys title is paternity so unless Will got the one chick he did it with then isnt the story.......well over.....for will anyway. Wade probably still has a story and it usualy involves guys around my age so thats a little nicer. lol Anyway! Keep writing even though this was not one of my favourite chapters, it was a good developental chapter. The mystery of where it heads next.

I am so moved by this chapter!!! I love drama! All that would have been nice is JP directly firing brad & making wade "head of the family" after him. But alas that's possibly more drama to come! P.s - I actually signed in on my iPad tonight to review =D totally worth it!

Well i think this chapter deserved a review from lil ole me! i havent dropped of the planet or anything just i usualy read on my ipad which is a pain when your half asleep to log in and type on it. Alas the last fifty eight chapters! were fantastic!!! hahaha little broad but still they were!! This specific chapter caught me on my computer before bed so i decided it's time to review and say my part. I'm very excited for Will & his emancipation from both of his parents, because i think that's his best bet. Brad is to much of a full on brawler/sneeky little shit that he needs to be put in his place. I think though that through all of this that Brad won't actually get that he's making terrible decisions untill JP tells the family that brad is no longer the "head of the family" and Wade is instead. I think Wade is a better handler of everything with his organization/government based history. I hope that's done at the dinner table, at i think thanks giving is the next holiday since it's november of 2000? Anyway Will is doing very good with his battles. Micheal should have been killed, he's done worse then Carsen that's for sure, manipulation is one thing taking picture's ilegaly and having the ability to possibly distribute them is discusting. Especially of JJ who i think is such a diva, but still in a good way? i can't help but think of JJ as a girl for the most part. Will's Story is going good too, with the whole issue of the election and stuff i hope that gets out to, but after will's all said and done. (unless JP does his "announcement") So excited for the future! keep it up Mark!! Sincerly MM- Dedicated long time reader. (since be-rad)

Ohh so this explains it. I was wondering what the heck happened! but i'm glad you did vacation! Have a Great Holiday :)

Im surprised that the Fact that Gathen is in robbies life, robbies wouldn't at least try and attempt some type of communication with his family. Jeepers! oh well i can't wait for more mark

Ooooo a Press Gang! and another Damned wilcox. I'm kind of excited Granger gets a little lively ness after all he was "bored" the night before. I like the way this story is progressing along. very catchy, i started reading and was done before i could say boo it was so good! i think i can justify a 40% cliffy here as to what will happen with the crew, if Granger's that lucky i think "GOD" (Ie: Mark Arbour) is giving Granger Quite the Share of luck, but maybe that's not a bad thing either? Either way i'm excited to read what happens next

This is terrible, i feel so coddled with these fast wonderful chapters!! your sticking to detail too! at least emotionaly rather then the physical descriptions of things. but either way i'm drinking it all in and loving every bit of it. I can't help but fear the slow down. Much less a Cliffy of Will possibly talking to his dad on the phone! that would be fantastic! i'm glad things might go a direction at least, however the cabby is very strange...i think will might be in danger. and i'm kind of surprised no one has clued in that the house in santa cruze code were put in to open the gate.....interestingly enough. I also have a strange feeling about Jeff, i think he might want/try to replace Matt, and i think Wade might have found his Carsen and or Neil....Scary but yet im intruigued. Can't wait for the next one mark!

The war is on! I'm Glad will did all of that. The Marine however should face more consequences then anything and i'm sure he will. However i think Brad and Robbie Created an enemy for the family by even trying him! oh well, we needed another neil or Carson Will is in Hawaii with $50,000.00 weeeeeoooo now what's he do when that runs out, i would guess his room would be something like 300-1000 dollars a night. If not somewhat more, unless he is in a low down housing. I'm Kinda surprised he didn't just go use Brad's house in Hawaii and just get the staff to not tell anyone....but yet again risky there so i understand why that wasn't used. I think will might find some solace in Hawaii because he's alone and 18 and maybe the sand's a wave's will just bring him in contact with a true boyfriend. If only. Another then i'm really excited for might be Wades reaction, i think he'll Freak his shit on brad along with the rest of the family. Course the only thing Brad and robbie will care about is the million or two that will destroyed or at least i think they will, but maybe not. I think brad should be reminded of Billy after all he was his brother not of his blood and he well "Attempted" to control him, now will he's trying to control.....so i duno i think this will get messier between the family before anything else improves.....isn't that the saying? Things always get messier before they get cleaned up? Thanks Mark!

Fantastic! i love that robey is back in the equation of this jouney. I think Granger being a having a Peerage will be good for him for the future, because at one point he'll have to leave the Navey, weather it be by force, or by old age, or by handycap. Either way the Navey will never always be there for Granger, however i can see him buying a personal ship with his money at one point. I'm Currious on who the Third LT, might be.....perhaps Calvert will show up???? :S that would REALLLY be fun.....lol not that im expecting it since calvert is indeed still the captain of Intrepid, Still dealing with Travers and how he's not around anymore, neither is his ship Victory....how sad... oh well i wish the best for Granger. To bad this story will probably never take a turn for a "coming out to the public" without Granger being Executed pretty much. =( Either way there's alot to come and i can't wait, the tension is building!

so excited that this happened now maybe brad will get taken down a notch, im really excited to see wills battle plans! i think though that they won't get too far without JP WADE or STEF or maye even clair to step in. i forsee will however moving out. and for some reason i suspect that raine might be pregnant either way. Bring on the war!!

I want brad and Robbie to go to an island of cocanut trees, relax underone maybe have sex or make love, then have all the coconuts fall on there head, Ryan's too cuz I just think he might need it cuz the jerk is probably gona hurt will one way or another. Either way very glad will n Ryan got closer! I think felicity or w.e her name is, is outa the game now, or will might get upset....either way great stuff, I love canoeing!

Yay i'm also surprised teasdale is going to replace bertie....i think granger is going to have to hang kerry or Teasdale on this trip for "Who" they might fall for.... and with grangers feelings toward the venture i suspect he might be captured for a time or hindered alot in some way. i do think positivly about the trip but alas i am not sure what to expect. I can't wait until the boat is finally described to us though. Enough of this drama. Talk about the boat, crew, and who's going where! lol exciting!

This was soooo cute!!! love will!! i imagin stef and grand and pop will have a major impacked on brad. hopefully soon surf will be up!