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Hit the - review key by accident... Tough chapter to read but you had to expect some psychological fallout grommets attack. Pete's refusal to get counseling doesn't bode well, at least for the short term. Perhaps the "almost rape" of Jase by Pete will be the catalyst that Pete needs to recognize, and get himself into counseling. At some point the guys will have to go together as well. Another great chapter Andy...thanks

Thanks for the kind words Andy - somehow a couple of minor typos got past us, but that didn't hurt the reading of the story. It was my pleasure to "give back" to you as an author, by making the small contribution to your story. This was another great chapter loaded with the dynamics of a big family with the twist of how prosperity can affect us if we are not watchful... I will add a comment here about the mall chapter-the feelings were so palpable that I felt as if I was in the mall with the guys watching the near implosion of the relationship...wow! Thanks for sharing this story with us. I'm not happy thinking that this story is almost at an end though... ;-)

As usual, another great chapter. The guys seem to be having their share of fun with each other, perhaps something more will happen as they get more comfortable with each other...?

Another great chapter...I agree with everyone about ho great it is to see the guys sharing their feelings for each other...The nightmares, I wonder if Graydon offers psych counseling/help for their students? Maybe Peter can get some help via those services since he can't afford private counseling? Both Jase & Peter can use the help, each for their different issues...

Hmmn...just keeping us off balance huh Andy?At first I couldn't believe the lecture from Royce about frivolous spending...huh? Haven't seen evidence of Jase wasting money in the story, but then it all worked out to be not so bad...Peter, another small but happy surprise. Not nearly the bad scene I had been expecting. Now let's see what you can do Andy to give us a really nice romantic first Christmas for the guys...;-)

Vie been reading this story and it at times is so hard to read from an emotional standpoint. That bein said, I still enjoy reading this fine story and hope that future chapters see Andy & Matt get back what they had growing up...

Wow...Now that Trevor has told his story to Shane, it appears that Shane may try to capitalize on selling the story to the press before Trevor is willing to do so. And here we were hoping that Shane was going to befriend to Trevor. I guess though when you've been dealt a tough hand like Shane, your first thought would turn to a chance to make some money; too bad it will be at Trev's expense?Too, we have to worry about Sanchez and his vow to serve up Trev's head on the literal platter! I hope CJ doesn't torture his faithful readers like he did when Trev was tossed bound and weighted to sink and drown...you can get close to Trev but if we have another situation as harrowing as the near draining, I propose that we get out our skewers to prepare some goat jerky! Lol! ;-)Thanks for another great chapter CJ...

Yes. Ditto Nephy's comments. Brings to mind a line from a movie - Starman, I think...it goes something like this from Jeff Bridges character (the alien explorer/map maker) to the govt agent risking everything to help him: "What I like the most about your race (humans) is that you are at your best, when times are at the worst..." (paraphrased as best I can remember it)

Great to see a "new generation/branch of family" join then ongoing story. I'm in the process or re-reading CAP stories from the start just because I love the whole series so much.Thanks Mark!

Working down under Trevor?

Ba aa ad nasty smelly evil old Billy goat! Clearly you're illness has nor gotten in the way of keeping us on edge... Glad to hear you are well on the road of recovery! :-)

Now Joel & Lisa need to stay out of the love shack to keep the bad guys in the dark for just a bit longer as Trev can well use the "quiet time" to get centered...

Yes, while I was excited to get my latest chapter fix, I don't want to see at at the expense of your health.

Roasted tough old goat? Nay, a slow cooked red curry goat is what's needed to overcome that tough sinewy old mountain goat. ;-)

Another good chapter Andy. Great to learn more about Peter's (and family) standing in the local community. Thanks for providing the additional character depth/development. Part of me wants to read about Jordan hearing his perspective...is he having any remorse now that his life is really in the dumpster? While he is a minor player from an overall perspective, he has had a major role in the movement of the story... As usual, can't wait for the next chapter!

...and here i was ready to blame the new software for not being able to get my Trevor "fix"! Sorry to hear that you're under weather-get well soon! :-)

I know this is just fiction, but it left me with a sick feeling. I hope this really isn't the end of Trevor...