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I knew something was "up" when the drugs weren't in the suitcases, but didn't expect the Bridget/Geroge relationship ending the way that it did! I though that Sanchez would Send Bridgetmto her "dirt nap" so was surprised when he left her alive... I wonder how the danger to our four teens will be brought to an end, somehowmSanchez has to fall as well as Bridget in ordermformthem to be safe. Hopefully Blasingstoke will suffer some sort of catastrophic failure whilst airborn...
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These first two chapters sure have provided a volatile mix of circumstances and emotions between the characters - quite explosive actually!
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Wow - a couple of big surprises for the surprise final chapter. I sure hope Zach's new persona is a true one Thanks Mark - Hope you have had a wonderful Thanksgiving!
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Things have heated up in FL and darn Joel & Lisa for going to the guest house again - argh! Doesn't appear to be enough time for Gonzalez to intercept J & L to stumble upon the new suitcases Bridget just gave to them. That would seem too easy a way for Bridget & George to get caught by their own plans to frame J& L... And lastly, Trevor seems to be settling into a good mindset for dealing with the surprise of his Mom and the realization of his new extended family. Could Trev & Shane really be so lucky as to having the Australian Navy as their unwitting protectors? Sure would throw a wrench into Blasingstoke's plans! Circles within circles within circles... Thanks for another great chapter CJ!
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Another great chapter though no visibility of how Trev is doing down under. I'll be biting my fingernails until Joel & Lisa are in Australia with Trev and his family... As for Bridget, George, Blasingstoke, & and Sanchez??? Hearing how Important Bridget's operation is to the cartel, gives promise to the grisly end that may be I store for Sanchez (&others?) when the house of cards comes tumbling down...One can only hope!
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OMG! What a chapter - 'nuff said!
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Until the sentencing is done, when Jordan gets to know the terrible price he will have to pay, this will not seem to really be over and done... Satisfying, no - tragic, yes. Outstanding story Andy, I'm looking forward to the epilogue.
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After this chapter maybe we can attribute Matt's hostility towards Gathan as him picking up vibes that Gathan lusts after Wade? Of course that seems too simple - would Mark just lay it out there like that for us...?
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Ugh - how many chapters can we go before the suspense kills us?
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So I wonder what it is that has Matt treating Gathan the way he is? Could it be that Matt feels that Gathan had it easier than he did, comparing the way that theynwere each assimilated into the family? A bit of resentment?
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Hey Mark - welcome back! Thanks for giving us another chapter of this great series!
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A chapter that meanders along until the last sentence... Evil smelly old goat - blissfully unaware of what?!?!
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Chapter 5: Reasonable Doubt
KevinD commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 5: Reasonable Doubt
Well it is a good thing that closing arguments are not evidence for jurors to consider. If it were, you could believe that Jordan was innocent. Is it an accident that Jordan's initials are JC, and that he has been unfairly persecuted by a vindictive Jason? LOL... Thanks for the chapter Andy - another fine job... -
Another fine chapter with the tension really beginning to build as Blasingstoke pretty much figures what Trevor is sailing upon...now let's hope the boys manage to stay out of sight!
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Chapter 4: The Defense
KevinD commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Defense
Many have commented on Andy's courtroom realism and now I can add to that from personal experience. I'm currently seated as a juror on a Federal District Court case...Interesting case but I can't say more. As usual Andy, you ended another chapter too soon! -
Whoa - a real big emotional roller coaster for Will and we see the real depth of Gathan's feelings for Kristin. ...and Poor Tony - I hope he gets some counseling... Thanks for yet anothe rgreat chapter Mark!
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Concerts and Conversations
KevinD commented on NightOwl88's story chapter in Concerts and Conversations
I can't add any more to what's already been said except - what did the letter say??? I figure we can wait another chapter or two for the Templeton parent plot to ratchet up, but I really wanted to know in this chapter what Seth had to say to Billy - argghh! Thanks for sharing this story with us! -
At last, much of the long agonizing wait is over. Now that Billy and David have admitted their feelings to each other, we can now see what develops with the rest of the story! Thanks for sharing this with us...
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Enjoyed the Ned & Shane show though I'm sure Trevor could've done without it...at least he got the benefit of seeing Shane shower. I wasn't sure that Shane suddenly grabbing and tossing Trevor overboard would trigger a stress/panic attack... Thanks CJ - so how many chapters will we have to endure Blasingstoke lurking about - and where is his machete? Not that I want to see him get a chance to use it...
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Must have been tough for Tony to see his dad in the tapes. Seems to me like he is really torn between anger at his dad and wanting to know more about the man he did not have in his life as he grew up. I wonder how his feelings will change, if at all, after JP's sharing Sam's regret. Maybe he will ask to see that letter...will JP let him read it? I wonder how long it will take before Tony unlocks that door and turns to Will for some comfort, non-sexual though I'm sure - his shell will presumably crack and the need for basic human comfort will win out...
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Alas, I was hoping that Blasingstoke would have problems with unpredictable winds causing him to plow nose first into the ground. Instead we see the bad guys making lucky guesses and getting very close to Trevor... We can only hope that Kline is not delayed and prints his story in time for Blasingstoke to see it within the next couple of days - just in time to misdirect him from running Trevor to ground... CJ has certainly brought turned up the heat with thisnchapter!
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Pretty cool of Lark to help Will out relating his puberty experience and acknowledging what Will was feeling... Nice bonding moment between Brad and Will as Brad admitted he didn't have all the answers to life... What a money lesson for Gathan...and Will's giving nature on display again with no hesitation. Good 'ol JP, taking the lead to ensure Gathan fully understood and learned from the experience, even working in budgeting for the next three years. Another great job Mar - thanks!
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In agree with Comicfan - the Colmars need their nose rubbed in it...
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While others might say it was light on action or didn't move the story forward enough, I loved it for the details we were given. Yet another satisfying chapter from CJ...
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Zach just can't give it a rest, can he? I hope we get a chapter or two of Zach to learn what drove him down the hateful path he seems to be on - perhaps he will have an enlightening event to wake him up? Cole...hmm, I will have to go back and find him in the story to refresh my memory. I'm sure Mark will share his circumstances as they drive west... John, John, John...heavy sigh!
