KevinD

It’s been ages since I’ve commented on any of my favorite author’s stories so my apologies to Mark and his team. If it were possible I would give this chapter two “hearts”

If only all coming out stories could end as Mark wrote it🥴

Please sir, may I a have another…chapter😋 Mark, your stories have entertained me for so many years. It’s been a while since I’ve posted anything in comments, so thank you!🤗

Maybe Team Arbour has a Veteran’s Day Holiday treat in store for us???🤞

Good riddance indeed! Thank you Mark😊

It is so obvious that is would have been Zack, but Mark, we know how sometimes you like to throw in a surprise plot twist😵‍💫😋

Just like nearly everybody else that has commented before me, I didn’t see this coming. It makes me wonder if there is anything at all that Zach could do that would make Will change his mind, but given what has been written regarding his feelings, I don’t think so. I think if Zach were to come out publicly and admit that he was having issues because of the pressure, would that sway will? But again since Zach is so self-centered and he sees football as his reason for existing, that would only happen in a crazy fantasy.

Too short, tooo short, toooo short😪 more please - Thank you Team Arbour

As much as I’m enjoying this Will focused story, it is always a welcome treat to have Grand & Stef join the scene , so to speak... A very nice Easter treat indeed - Thank you Team Arbour!

Well, Will certainly got his answer about Tom, now let’s just hope that Connie doesn’t pick this time to come back looking for Will… Thanks Mark & Team Arbour for another great chapter Gap Year!

Not in my wildest dreams did I expect the ending that Mark and his Team provided for us.😳 On reflection though, Randy certainly was an unhinged character, wasn’t he? More please?🤗

As always, I’m never disappointed in the writings of Mark along with Team Arbour’s contribution to my reading delight, even though this isn’t about me😇 Welcome back Mark - hope all is well and COVID is far behind you and even though your “absence” was short, you’ve been missed 😚

Hello Mark, please rest and take care of yourself as that is most important! We may miss a chapter or two as things slow down and wish they were out there, but in the overall scheme of things that is not important. Know that you are much loved by your reading community and I/we hope and pray for your speedy recovery! Screw the figurative distancing, a big bear hug for you😘

Thank you Mark &. Team for the New Year’s Eve gift of this chapter and that of Northern Exposure... Happy New Year to All!🎉

I enjoyed this chapter immensely and really was happy that Connie came to Will’s rescue. The blowback from family would have been intense if he’d been able to make his “panic button” call before Connie stepped in... Thanks Mark & Team Arbour for the usual great job! To borrow from another member & and steal a movie line - “Thank you sir, may i have another?”; chapter that is😉