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RESEARCH "Raunchy evening sex," Even advised Riley "Could help." CLEANERS

pestilence pestilence rubble and rot tonight the pale horse begins to trot

No, Caleb is not an autobiographical me. Sorry. I don't really see myself at all in this story, to be honest. These are their own people with their own minds. I like how you're rooting for team Caleb too. It might turn into a prequel!

I'm pretty picky when it comes to reading. I can get distracted easily, lost easily, sometimes I just lose interesting - not to say anything here is like that, however Matty's story caught me right off. The parallel scenes between the rebellious Will and later on with the mysterious detective had me going through each chapter. Literally wondering more. Finally, Matty being the a-hole that he is throws in some high amounts of tension in the last portion of Chapter 5, stressing me the hell out. Even though he has post-poned, if you haven't done so, check this one out. I look forward to more, so like... hurry up.

My religion? Me. But I'm not gay.

Benji! Haha, that is awesome, keep up the theories, very good very good.

I can tell you some stories about desperate gay men. I could tell you some epic stories.

Benji just owned me.

James, apart from the illegalness, criminal acts, disgusting aspects that it has become... I'd let you cruise me any day. Tee heee! Illegalness isn't a word.

Chapter 5 has arrived.

I go to the 24 Fitness in the Spectrum in Irvine, even though its like a 20 minute drive. Why? Its really nice, new machines, big... no HUGE and never full of people. The only down side is the bathrooms. The place is a huge cruise spot and I was actually reading an article the other day that IPD (Irvine Police Department) frequent there alot. If you are caught on the premise doing that, your membership is taken away, they will arrest you (oh and they will) anybody who "saw" you or "found" you will be asked to press charges and it gets messy. A bunch of guys got arrested a month ago cause of that, they were all ages, sizes colors etc. There is a beach in Laguna where guys go all the time, forgot the street but its infamous/famous. You literally go to the darker end near the cove and stand next to the guy you want to bang. Never been, thankfully. James is right, its a bad scene. But its fun to get cruised of course, boosts your ego. Just don't participate. Well, I retract that statement, its only fun to get cruised by good looking people. Haha. So ironic, I was reading articles on cruising the other night then you post this haha. In Amsterdam, at a park we were at, there are signs that state there is homosexual activity and if you see it you must report it to the authorities aswell.

H&M a while back I think. That or Urban Outfitters.

Your so gay.

Well I really just want to see Nephylim giggle and blush at my awesome, well placed compliment.

Creep. The eyes look bad, amateur phone photography.

That's easy Nephylim. Timeless of course.

He would be referring to me. As I am near the definition of a sage, or maybe "sage like".

Thanks for all the thoughts everyone, even the speculations. I'm trying to insert enough mystery to keep both myself, the reader and the characters guessing several steps ahead. I hopefully won't disappoint. And MikeL; Probably nothing. In regards to William.

I'll come clean your place and only wear boxer-briefs. I'll jog around first just to work up a sweat before I actually start. Would you like that...big boiiii?

Human Paladin - Lightninghoof, I'm PRO

Movement 3 is now up. Tell me what you think, the good, the bad and of course the ugly.

I can probably buy Tasmania, and I really do hope PlugInMatty sends me my story.

Went to the gym early which is new Going to see TIME TRAVELERS WIFE SO AWESOME CAN'T WAIT NEVER READ IT BUT IT LOOKS SO COOL LIFEHOUSE HAS A SONG IN IT I might make a huge decision this weekend that will affect my academic future, whatever I've been listening to Mylene Farmer all day, French pop star, educate yourself if you haven't on her shit Might do some writing, my muse has been horny for some typage for the past week No complaints. Weather is better than your weather.

Thanks for the various comments. Readers: I am looking for solid, specific feedback. The above is perfectly fine, however I am looking for likes and dislikes so I can improve my writing and or the process in which I write Elijah. So any discussion on characters, plot etc would be helpful. Be it these four chapters or the upcoming chapters. Thanks alot.

I had hair like that once, then God said, "No, asshole." and it was gone