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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    Hmm. Well, Frank's part is pretty much over. He's done what he was meant to do and this isn't for him. Why do you think James fucked up again? I think you might be surprised. Although I can't deny that James is a jerk and totally self absorbed. Sacha was obsessed with Nik, but Lacey and Nik himself were right in one way - Nik was the very first boy who showed genuine interest in him, and it was very soon, and there are other fish in the sea
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    It wasn't really that short. Just a lot of things going on Suki's trouble. I think Lacey was keeping out of the way because she didn't really know what was going on This was all James!!
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    I love this story. Mirri is adorable, so excited and innocent. Jarra is steadier, but needs more looking after than Mirri does. I feel they will be good for each other
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    Chapter 5

    This was a lovely sweet story, but why so short!!! I want to know more about these two. I love Hani. I want to see him grow, see his curiousity encouraged and explored. Sigh. Ah well, my own mind can supply the rest of the pictures I guess. The sign of a true storyteller. Always leave them wanting more
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    Chapter 22

    I've been without a computer for a while. I've been keeping up on my phone and gutted I couldn't review. I should go back and review all the chapters, but I've got a million and one things to do now my computer is back, so I'm going to be lazy and pick up from here. Way to go Jason for his resourcefulness. It's a shame it wasn't in time to save Devyn, but at least he bought time. Thank heaven for the Sherrif's spot on intuition. It's always good when a dirty cop gets rooted out. It looks like Brad's reign is over, but.... I think Jason and his cop friends need to get a move on, because I have a feeling that paring knife is going to be lodged in flesh pretty soon, whether Devyn succeeds in burying it in Brad or whether he's intercepted and gets a taste of metal himself. The problem is that even if Devyn gets the knife in Brad there's still Sam who hates him and the other cronie whose name I forget. I'd like to think Chris and Trent would step in, but who knows? Great storytelling.
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 24

    The next few days were an utter nightmare for Sacha. He carried his cellphone with him wherever he went and checked it constantly, but there was nothing from Nik, and when he tried to call Nik’s number it wasn’t there. Lacey tried her best to distract him, but there was nothing anyone could do or say to take away the constant pain in his heart. He couldn’t eat, couldn’t sleep and everything was starting to hurt. It didn’t help when, the day after Nik left, James told him why. They were sitting
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    Poor lonely Hani. He's lost in more ways than one. Bless him. Hope he finds someone to love soon.
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 13

    So.... The doctor knocked Devyn out in the hope of having some 'fun'? It's getting more likely he deliberately damaged Devyn's throat. That's just unforgivable. I'm interested to see what the independent psych will say.
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    I love to read stories about people with disabilities, especially those likeMirri whose disabilities allow them to see the world in a different way. I can see immediately that I'm going to love Mirri It's a very interesting start and I will definitely be looking out for the next chapter.
  10. My favourites off the top of my head are Omorphi by Cody Kennedy. It's a borderline YA with themes of recovery from abuse and is a great adventure. The Statue by Zathyn Priest which should be a must read for young people and explores issues around mental health and the nature of love. It's a light read but is so profound it astonished me Also by Zathyn Priest The Curtis Reincarnation which is about a melting down rock star who is so cute I want to put him in my pocket and cuddle like a kitten and his Amara books which are about...unusual vampires and weres. Lucius' Bite by K-Lee Kline has it all - shifters, witches, gypsies Vassily the Beautiful by Angel Martinez is based on a Russian Fairy Tale and I LOVED Babba Yagga Its an unusual tale of constructs and a dystopian world that is awesome 'Alex' and 'The Shed' by Dianne Hartsock are my current raves. They're not for the feint hearted and border on horror...well no I guess they cross the border because there are some quite vividly gruesome scenes. I'm totally fangirling on all these books, so you should enjoy at least some of them Between them there are a lot of genres and styles
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    Chapter 11

    I scent the tempting aroma of shit hitting fire I wonder what the wild card is going to do. I have a feeling that once Jason knows the truth he's going to wind up being a match for Brad. I hope so, for Devyn's sake. I feel that a very bad time indeed is coming up for Devyn as Brad expresses his displeasure for upsetting his 'teacher'
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 11

    Thank you. I started to write a sequel, but it kind of got pushed aside for other things. I didn't like that the baddie got away. But I guess it was meant to be because I just haven't been able to kick start it.
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 10

    Thank you. This story was a strange one to write and there was all kinds of dark energies involved. I think it was all because I started it with a Samhuinn ritual
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 9

    Sorry you're so distressed. I hope you feel better later on. Although this is definitely among the darkest I have written.
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    Chapter 7

    You should be
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Ariel's magic Ariel is...Ariel. It's impossible not to love Ariel - especially if he wants you to. Unless you're a fairy of course, when you will be more likely to look down on him than love him.
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    Chapter 5

    Lucifer is a cat. Cats are jerks He totally believes the world revolved around him and he can't be arsed about anyone else - except Nick. With Lucifer I tried to get into my cat's head It was an interesting experiment
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    Chapter 4

    Ariel's something of an enigma. He was fun to write. How do you write emotion for someone who's never felt any, without him becoming so overwhelmed he spends the whole book huddled in a corner whimpering? I hope I managed to get a balance
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    Chapter 9

    Lots of questions. Not so many answers.Very nice chapter indeed. I hope Jason is beginning to see what's in front of his eyes
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 8

    So, so sad. Poor Devyn. Poor Michael. It's so unfair, but then life is unfair. Hopefully this will nudge Jason in the right direction
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    I see pictures very clear in my mind - the image of Lucifer lounging is VERY clear Yummm. I think Lucifer is angry with Sam for not taking better care of Nick It's true, Sam was diminished, but he's going to be minished again soon
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Trust me, Ariel is NOTHING like Bridge Thank you so much for your support and your wonderful comments
  23. WOW Thank you. I'm a great advocate of the journey being as important as the destination and I'm glad you enjoyed this journey. I have to admit that I did have a lot of worries about laving the story there, but, as you said it was already epic, and if I were to explore even a little further it would take another book, and I very, very seldom write sequels, unless the characters tell me they want to. In this case, I think my boys are happy to be left alone now
  24. Thank you I'm so, so happy that you love my boys. I do too. I adore each and every one of them, and that's in all my stories. For the time I'm writing they totally come alive for me and it's awesome when someone else appreciates them
  25. Thank you I'm so, so happy that you love my boys. I do too. I adore each and every one of them, and that's in all my stories. For the time I'm writing they totally come alive for me and it's awesome when someone else appreciates them
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