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Nephylim

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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 7

    We can only hope Charlie is hilarious. I'd love to have her as a friend. Never a dull moment.
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 6

    Do you really think Charles will be okay with anything that makes Angel stronger and happier? I'm so glad you like the story. This one is kind of close to my heart for lots of reasons. Angel is a little love, but somewhat oblivious. Msrcus is his strong protector and Charlie keeps everyone's feet on the ground
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Thank you Misunderstanding and lack of communication is always sad. Don't worry, now everything is out in the open, at least Angel knows Marcus doesn't hate him
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    I LOVE that emotithingie. Bitch slaps all round.
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    They're both on the edge. Marcus has had more time to think about it than Angel. I genuinely believe he's never thought about Marcus like that and it's taken him completely by surprise. He's confused by Marcus' behviour and thinks it's his fault, which it kind of is.
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    Oh, I think you'll find Angel isn't quite as pathetic as he seems In some ways he's a step ahead of the Bishops the whole way.
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    Oh they did, they did. Charles Bishop is the classic hero with no redeeming features at all I love him
  8. Nephylim

    Prologue

    Thank you. This was written for NaNo, one year, and pretty much left as is, apart for a couple of run throughs. It's therefore quite rough, but I like it that way
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 20

    I'm sorry to hear about your husband and it's so humbling that having been through the experience you think I've nailed Alex's thoughts and emotions. Thank you.
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 20

    I'm sorry to hear about your husband and it's so humbling that having been through the experience you think I've nailed Alex's thoughts and emotions. Thank you.
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 20

    I think it would be frustrating for anyone. It would drive me nuts, I know that. There's a lot of work ahead, but they've definitely turned a corner.
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 20

    I think it would be frustrating for anyone. It would drive me nuts, I know that. There's a lot of work ahead, but they've definitely turned a corner.
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 20

    “The thing is,” Shay said over lunch, “you have no one to talk to. They have therapists and doctors and all sorts, but we have no one.” Shay and Alex hit it off right from the start. For one thing, Shay was a surfer with an intimate knowledge of all the local beaches. At one time in his life, Alex had been obsessed with surfing and thought nothing of driving a hundred miles to catch a good wave. He’d even been saving to go to California. That all went out the window when he met his new obsessio
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 19

    Thank you. I've only been on one side and I think I needed to see the flip side. It was a learning experience for me
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 19

    Thank you. I spend most of my life a little misty so glad I could share
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 19

    Thank you. It really warms my heart when people 'get' what I'm writing about. This is a real turning point I think, for both of them. Not saying it gets easier as such - just less hard.
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 19

    Thank you. That really is high praise. Alex had to blow at some point. He's been so strong and stable for Kei, but he's still very young himself, and no one can be that strong and together forever. I'm just glad they met their new friend.
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 19

    Getting Kei to the spa had been hell. Even though they had a special car with wheelchair access, it was a nightmare getting him into it, and he was horribly car sick all the way. By the time they got there, he was thoroughly miserable and exhausted. The first thing he did when they were shown to their cabin was be sick in the bathroom. Afterwards, Alex enlisted the help of one of the ‘on call’ nurses to get Kei into bed, then sat on the windowsill, gazing out over the sea. “It’s wonderful, Ke
  19. Nephylim

    Epilogue

    You're welcome. All my stories are set in the UK because that's where I live and that's what I know I'm glad you liked the story. Isaac is one of my favourite characters. I love writing characters who are damaged, and who have a total innocence about the world
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 18

    Rose is awesome. She's the antithesis of Bonnie. She cares passionately for both boys and will do anything in her power to make it work for them. Unlike Kei's parents she puts the boys first and not herself. The future is definitely looking brighter, but don't you think Alex had just been too good to be true and coped a little too well with it all?
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 18

    Define 'go to hell' There are still ups and down for the boys, but things are definitely on the up - mostly.
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 18

    That night, Alex had a shocking telephone conversation with Frank and Bonnie. They accused him of all kinds of things, but primarily of not caring about Kei’s recovery, restricting him to second class care, and denying him the very best opportunity for getting better. He’d responded with the same anger he’d received, and eventually hung up, after making his opinion of the Princes absolutely clear. However, after he hung up, he sat down and started thinking. Then, he rang his mother. “Are they
  23. Of course I remember you. I haven't really been around much lately either. I'm glad I popped in when I did and got a chance to say helloooo
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 17

    Thank you! My goal in writing this was to get away from the - bad thing happens but it's all better in a week - situation. I did a lot of research into this condition, including timescales and setbacks. Of course, some of the set backs are external - like Kei's parents, but mostly it's his own recovery which IS often frustrating and not always in a smooth line. I'm glad you mentioned that not even Alex' unwavering devotion can't last forever. You can only be strong for so long
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 17

    Kei's parents just aren't the kind of people to give up. They get the message in the end, though. Rose is amazing and she really comes through for them in the end
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