Rilbur

Unknown Enemy

I'm up to managing it about 1 out of every 3 tries. I wish I could figure out how they programmed the cat's AI... I think it's some kind of greedy algorithm (that certainly fits with how it can't 'see' traps coming) but I can not for the life of my define it's behavior. Still, it's fun.

Stupid question: but if he had amnesia and couldn't remember his own name... How did he sign the insurance and consent to treat forms? Anyway, another great chapter and I can;'t hardly wait to see more!

That is absurdly amusing... and fricken difficult!

Mark Her

What Punctuation

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. But you do realize that if you don't try to figure out what I'm doing, you won't be half as surprised when I do something totally different? Just to warm you up (and because I found the line absolutely hilarious) here's a fragment from chapter 16... (Which, yes, means I'm writing seventeen at the moment...) Sorry, I just had to... I love the line too much to let it languish, in the dark... Out of curiosity, for those of you that happen to be authors, how many of you have character that control the story? And, more importantly, have you ever had one set of characters leap 'ahead' of where the others are in the planned storyline? I'm having a small problem, you see. Ronan and Jason are taking a nice, long, leisurely courtship to their first kiss and beyond. This was planned. The 'gathering storm' which is going to become one hell of a climax... is not taking a long, leisurely pace in it's building up. It's moving too fast, too quick. And I'm not sure how, or even if I can, slow it down. Which means that any number of scenes that I thought were 'locked' in place... might not be Anyone else ever have this problem?

All Aboard!

Site Construction

Thumb Handed

Wow, that's a lot of posts!

Onward March

Unpleasantly Painful (AKA: My back)

Sign Ends

Slogan Maker

Hey, there are worse jokes that could be made. I could have commented that he just needed somebody well hung...

Forgotten Trouble

As far as I know, it's one of those 'grammatically incorrect' things you can use if it improves the writing. So, yeah, you can use it, just be sparing and have a good reason.

Entertain Yourself

Maybe... it'd probably help Oh, I am, slowly. Sooooo much to read, so little time, especially when I'm doing my own writing. Take your time, you can't write if you're rushed.

Case Law

Air Freshener (I didn't mean that kind of suck, but that works too )

Others Suck

I've been too busy posting 'more, more!' reviews to bother posting here But yeah, it's a great story, well done, and I wanna see what happens!

Bad country song? I suppose... No, not even country has that bad a taste!