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  1. Ramon
    Round 1 East New York, Boston, New Jersey, Pittsburgh West Vancouver, St. Louis, Chicago, Nashville Round 2 East New York, Pittsburgh West Vancouver, St. Louis Round 3 East New York West Vancouver Winner Vancouver
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    Happy Birthday!
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    I'm up for it. Matt and his Bruins need to go down!!! lol
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    Chapter 16

    Ramon commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Was anyone else shouting at Ellis to use the knife? I know he mentioned it afterwards but I was yelling at my computer screen for him to use it. lol I imagined it would be him that would kill Mishtar but just not the way it was shown.
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    Chapter 13

    Ramon commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 13

    I'm thinking Dav can't mess up again so soon thus he will probably behave for now. Anyway, I wish there was more. I know this was your usual length but it felt short. Next chapter will definitely be interesting. Also, just wanted to say that I support Andy and Mark's campaign! I look forward to you winning!
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    That was a fun read. I picked up on Lu "cleaning up" the father as well but it could mean different things. Anyway, looking forward to you expanding this story after Seeon. Thanks for the story!
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    The queen said son and Oma said brother-in-law so hopefully this is a sign that Seeon can be normal again. It is also nice to see that there wasn't much drama during the wedding though I was kinda looking forward to some.
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    Welcome nomoretears00! Will you be posting The Harvest here as well?
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    Growing up in the Philippines, we always stayed up until midnight and opened presents so there was never the idea of Santa coming down the chimney (which we didn't have) and putting presents under the tree.
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    Nice chapter. I like Oma and Tsal. It is a nice break from how Deda and Batea act towards Seeon, though that might be unfair judgement towards Deda and Batea since they are acting according to the norms of their culture. Still not too fond of them since I'm not really sure why they needed to suppress Seeon's powers. I'm also guessing that there might be some drama in the next chapter since the prince doesn't want to marry Seeon. Thanks for the chapter. Until next week.
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    I wonder if Batea understands that women being made over into men isn't any different than making Seeon into a Ma'Nee; it might even be worse. It will be interesting though that Seeon will now be a guy who's considered a girl but will once again be able to act like a guy. This was a good chapter. A bit confusing since the priests and Batea were a bit vague as to what exactly was going on. I'm guessing that Seeon has some powers like his sisters did and they are trying to suppress that with the oils and what not. Hopefully later chapters will elaborate on that. Thanks for the read and I'll eagerly wait for the next one.
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    Chapter 10

    Ramon commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I was worried that you would fix their relationship with one bite and an orgasm so it was nice to see that Ellis put on some fight. Kinda want them to struggle a bit more so hopefully this wall that Ellis has put up isn't torn down easily. Ellis' black out at the end makes me think that maybe his migraines are Carthera related but that could just be me making stuff up. Anyway, good chapter even though there is a cliff.
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    Intriguing. The story itself is well told but this whole Ma'Nee thing is weird. I've also never been a fan of people going with what they are told simply because it is their duty so I'm hoping Seeon still has some fight in him. Secretly training isn't much but I'm going to take that as a sign that he won't turn into some crying mess that feints all the time. (I'm not being too harsh on Seeon, am I?) Anyway. I'll stick around for a bit to see where you go with the story line. Thanks for the interesting read.
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    Test of Blood chapter 1 by Allen Smithee GA forums hotmail chess.com and chesscube cnn.com The top one changes depending on what story I'm reading but there's always a story in one of my tabs. I'm also currently in a 'nerd mode' so the chess websites will be there all the time.
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    Happy Birthday Conner! I also second Andy's suggestion.
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    Chapter 9

    Ramon commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I'm not sure I like what he is doing. It's like the Bachelor but he's gay and there are only three contestants left (though I wanna say two since I don't think Liam has a shot).
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    Chapter 4

    Ramon commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Aaaaaaahh!! Joey! That might be a bit premature but of the three (Joey, Liam, and Ced), I want Danny to end up with Joey. Of course he might have changed so maybe they won't be a good match anymore but I hope they end up together. Ced is too bold and Liam should end up with Lee. Anyway, drama should be ahead.
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    Chapter 1

    Ramon commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is a good start and it was really well written but that ending is quite something.The way you ended this first chapter is amazing!
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    Story

    Ramon commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Story

    This is really good. It is a simple story done incredibly well.
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    Chapter 1

    Ramon commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Nice story. I think you could have probably fleshed out the emotions a little bit more but overall it is a good read.
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    Wow. Incredible chapter. There are lots of questions to be asked but I'll ask the main one, what happened to his father? Derek mentioned that he wasn't always away before and he seemed like a nice dad during the "finding the off button" scene. Anyway, back to this chapter. I love Mrs. C. She is scary but it is amazing to see her in action. I hope Derek will get his act together before it is too late.
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    I just watched the Keys me video on youtube and I can't stop laughing. Anyway, I'm starting to like Derek a bit more now. I'm hoping I continue to like him more and more but I imagine the beautiful sexy engine will blow up soon.
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    Larger print?

    Ramon replied to Jeff1's topic in The Lounge

    The A- and A+ buttons at the top of every chapter can be use to decrease or increase the print.
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    Good start. Charlie is adorable calling Derek hero and being very excited when talking about dokumentarrees. I haven't decided if I like Derek or not though. 4 year old Derek is kinda cute. Mr. Perfect, not so much.
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    Welcome Alex.
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