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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Mark - 1. Mark

Mark

 

Wisps of fog

faces, torn

gliding past my eyes.

 

Snow flakes

perfection, melted

running through my hands.

 

Rain drops

tears, dried

never moist my skin.

 

In vain.

 

In vain.

 

In vain.

 

This is the second poem I wrote in English. Yes I count the other one. (some of you might remember it :P )
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I like reading things from Mark's pov, b/c we were first introduced to the story with Sam and the first story had to do with him and his pov. I hated Mark right away after reading that story. lol

 

But the last story and this poem say it all. Mark's wishes and his tears are all in vain. He can shed as many tears as he wants, but he will never get Sam back again.

 

Great job, Addy! :2thumbs:

On 05/02/2014 01:43 PM, Lisa said:
I like reading things from Mark's pov, b/c we were first introduced to the story with Sam and the first story had to do with him and his pov. I hated Mark right away after reading that story. lol

 

But the last story and this poem say it all. Mark's wishes and his tears are all in vain. He can shed as many tears as he wants, but he will never get Sam back again.

 

Great job, Addy! :2thumbs:

Thank you Lisa. No mercy for Mark, huh? He will never get Sam back again, but maybe there is someone else for him, scars and all...
On 05/04/2014 01:25 PM, comicfan said:
A loss that will not come again. Seems so forlorn Aditus. I feel sorry for Mark.
Just found this review, sorry for answering so late.

I never thought it could happen when I wrote 'The Wardrobe' but somehow I feel sorry for him too. He sneaked in and manged to become my favorite character actually. I'd like to give him his own multi-chapter story someday. For now it's just a poem. Thank you for your review Wayne.

On 06/14/2014 09:38 PM, Slytherin said:
Hey :angry: I missed this one too when it came out *pouts* I Think I was on holiday then.. hmmm.. Poor Mark, pain, lonely, sad, heartache :(

 

Yes, I am now even more convinced that Mark deserves a story ! Go to work - Mark needs you ! :hug:

Ha, ha. Okay, let me think about this some more. It won't be an anthology story, but he will get his own, promise. :)

Thank you. *hug*

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