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Song and Dance - 6. Chapter 6 Heartbreak Hotel

Hello, Goodbye

Song and Dance

 

 

Chapter 6

 

 

“I don’t know about you, wolfman, but I could eat the ass-end out of a skunk.”

“What did you just say?”

“I said, ‘I’m hungry.”

“Okay, that’s a relief. I thought that was some weird-ass come-on.” Arron smirked.

“Very funny. So what should we do for supper? It feels like my stomach’s touching my backbone. I need me some protein and some carbs.”

“Well, I could be convinced to cook something up… maybe a chicken stir-fry? How does that sound, you poor starving man?”

“Really, you want to do that? That sounds like a great idea, so how can I convince you?” Chet wiggled his eyebrows suggestively and Arron rolled his eyes before he crushed Chet’s hopes, at least temporarily.

“Don’t even go there. We’re taking that part slowly, right?” After what he seen in the gym, it was going to take some serious willpower.

“Yeah, you’re right. This is about a lot more than sex. I really do want us to get to know one another and build a trust first. So what will it take to convince you to do the stir fry thing?”

Arron loved how much importance Chet was putting on building things between them the right way. “I’ll cook if you promise to give me a foot rub after dinner… you do know how to give a decent foot rub, don’t you?”

Chet’s mind flashed on the memories of rubbing Ian’s feet after his runway shows, where he had to wear numerous kinds of ill-fitting shoes.“Yeah, I’m good at it… guaranteed. I’ve had some practice. That reminds me… something happened I need to tell you about.”

“Okay, what happened? And how did giving me a foot-rub remind you of something? Is this something kinky?”

Chet laughed at that. “No, not kinky. Far from it, unless you find vomiting kinky.” Arron shook his head violently. “It’s a long story… I’ll tell you while you’re cooking me dinner at your place. Let’s get going before I faint from starvation. I want to see that Craftsman style house of yours. It sounds amazing.”

“It is amazing, or at least I think so. My grandparents maintained it very well, and kept it all original before I inherited it, but we won’t be able to cook a stir fry if we go to my place. My gas stove is out of commission for a couple of days because my gas line has a weak spot. I had to shut off the valve to my stove until the line is replaced. We’d have to do takeout or microwave, or maybe something cold.”

“That’s fine, as long as we’re eating together, I’m good.” That earned him a tender kiss and a brilliant smile.

“I wanted to show off my culinary skills for you, though… you know, the way to a man’s heart and all that?”

“I don’t think you have to worry about finding the way to my heart, wolfie. You’re doing just fine.”

“I am, am I?” It was plain to see that comment made Arron happy, as his face lit up with a huge smile.

“Yes sir, Officer. I perved on you in there, and you do not need to have cooking skills.” He comically leered at Arron.

Arron’s laughter could be heard all through the parking lot. “I perved on you too, and you could be dumb as a post and I’d still date you.”

“So you just want me for my body, then?”

“Occasionally, yeah.”

“I can live with that,” Chet said looking quite pleased with himself and that got them both laughing.

“Have you got a Wok, because I am really craving a stir-fry now?”

“Yes, Officer, I’ve got a Wok. Do you want to cook at my place?” Chet liked the idea of Arron in his kitchen, cooking them something. He had never had that kind of domesticity before. He couldn’t remember a time that he had a boyfriend cook for him. Certainly Ian had never cooked him anything.

“Sure, if that’s okay with you?” Arron didn’t want to overstep, but he relished the idea of cooking in Chet’s kitchen, for Chet.

“Let’s see… you in my kitchen wearing nothing but an apron, and me sitting there ogling, I mean watching you; what’s not to like? Let’s do this!”

Arron loved the flirting from Chet. It felt so natural and full of fun. “Okay, that’s settled, but I’m wearing more than an apron... I think I'll need protection from you more than from splatters."

Chet stuck his tongue out at that.

"Let’s hit the grocery store and get this done. Loblaw’s always has good fresh produce.”

“Sounds good, I’ll follow you, Officer Bailey,” Chet said with a salute.

“I do have handcuffs you know,” Arron teased.

“Oh, I thought we were waiting on the sex stuff, but okay, if that’s what you want, count me in.”

Arron just smiled, rolled his eyes and got in his Highlander.

Who knew shopping for food could be so much fun. Chet was like a happy little kid, checking everything out and getting into stuff. Arron saw the normally mundane task of shopping in a whole new light with Chet at his side. He was very touchy-feely, and Arron found himself comfortable with it, and loving the intimacy of it. He had never interacted this way with Dwayne. Chet didn’t place items in a basket. No, he threw them from good distances away. Flying bags and packages of peppers, mushrooms, carrots, snow peas, fresh ginger, bean sprouts and the like kept Arron on his toes. He drew the line at the boneless chicken breasts though, threatening mutiny… and no dinner if those things came flying at his head. Chet conceded to Arron’s demand at that point, satisfied after already having had his play-time. At the checkout, Arron realized he had forgotten soy sauce, and with the airs of a superhero, Chet announced, “I’m on it!” and took off running down one of the aisles.

“That’s my guy,” announced Arron to the amused people waiting in line. Saying it surprised him, but God it felt good to say that in public. Arron had never felt freer, and admitted to himself that he was falling fast for this adorable, warmhearted, brown-haired man. Chet was back in a flash, planting his feet wide in a heroic stance and presenting the soy sauce to Arron with a serious countenance.

“My mission has been accomplished, Officer Bailey.” Arron grinned widely at his antics, as did the people around them. Could the man be anymore charming?

Whispering to him, “You come in handy, green eyes,” got him an eyebrow wiggle and a whispered response.

“You have no idea.”

Arron just grinned some more, blushing at the same time.

Both of them carrying a bag of groceries, they raced up the stairwell to Chet’s apartment like two little kids… actually, two hungry big kids. At the door, Chet had trouble getting his keys out because Arron chose that moment to claim a kiss from a laughing Chet. There was a different kind of hunger they were feeling now, as Arron’s free hand held onto the back of Chet’s head, his tongue exploring that delicious mouth. Breaking apart, breathless and giggling, they managed to get the door open and step inside.

What greeted them startled them both, for different reasons. What Chet saw was Ian violating his privacy, his loft, and his life. What Arron saw was a stranger, a stupendously beautiful god of a man, pretty much naked in a skimpy pair of briefs, staring at him with displeasure.

“Who is this, Jets?” The man looked proprietary, and Arron didn’t like it. He was stunned, and having trouble comprehending what was happening.

“Ian, what the fuck are you still doing here? You were supposed to be gone this morning. You have no right to be here… Arron, I’m sorry, this is what I was going to tell you about. Ian, get dressed for fuck sake, and get the hell out of here.” Pure anger was radiating off of Chet, and Arron was practically reeling from the shock of the situation. A sick feeling settled in the pit of his stomach. This guy was Chet’s ex-partner? Why did he look so familiar?

“I thought we could continue our talk. I thought you said there was nobody else in your life? Who is he, Jets?”

The ‘nobody else in your life’ comment hit Arron hard. This whole thing was way too much to handle.

“That is not what I said, and he’s none of your fucking business… and stop calling me that. Fuck, Ian, what the hell are you thinking? There’s nothing more to talk about, and I made that clear last night!”

Arron felt Chet’s concerned eyes on him while he was talking. What Arron saw was big blue eyes filled with tears staring at ‘his guy’ beseechingly. So much for Chet being ‘his guy’ anymore. Arron knew that face… and it dawned on him where he knew it from.

“You’re the guy in those cologne ads, coming out of the water?!” Arron blurted out before he could stop himself. Ian turned his attention to Arron, tears still flowing, and gave him a short nod before dismissing him with his eyes, and returning his focus to Chet.

Arron was suddenly overwhelmed by all of this and Chet could see it. “Arron, are you okay? I’m so sorry this has happened but there is nothing here that affects you and me… I promise you. Arron, say something.” Arron’s face was blank, his demeanor that of a man closing himself off, and putting up shields. “Ian! Get your ass dressed and get out of here… now!” Arron was aware of the sound of sobs disappearing towards the bedroom. The bedroom? Why was he going to the bedroom? This was all too much for him. “I’m sorry about this, baby. Arron say something, please?”

“I’m not your baby,” Arron said with a sigh. Realizing he was still holding a bag of groceries, he walked over and set them on the kitchen island. Turning around, he faced a shell-shocked looking Chet. That response had hurt him, scared him even.

“Please tell me you don’t think there was anything was going on here. He came by last night after you left, out of the blue.”

Arron dimly remembered a guy on the stairway as he was leaving. It must have been Ian. “Why did he come here?” No emotion seeped into his voice because all he felt was a numbness.

“Arron, listen, nothing happened between us. I swear.”

Arron remembered someone else saying words like those to him in the same pleading tone. “Why did he come here?” Same question.

“He wanted us to get back together, but I said no, and that’s the truth. Please believe me. I know this probably looks bad, but he was drinking and he took some drugs and he threw up. Remember what I said about vomiting… that’s what I was talking about. So I couldn’t throw him out even though I wanted to. You believe me, right?”

“Did he sleep with you, Chet? Was he in your bed?” Arron glanced towards the bedroom, afraid of the answer.

“Look, I put him on the couch and that’s where he was supposed to sleep. But he ended up getting into my bed when I was sleeping. I swear as soon as I realized it, I went out to the couch because he wouldn’t wake up. Nothing happened, I promise you.”

There was another phrase he'd heard before, from Dwayne. “I think you guys need to finish talking. You have things to work out, and I shouldn’t be here. I need to go.”

“Please don’t do this. Trust me. There is nothing for Ian and me to talk about. That ended a long time ago and there’s nothing to work out. You’re letting your fears get the best of you. Don’t let them control you. I need you to have faith in me. You’re the only one I care about.”

Arron sighed, as feelings he didn’t want began to make their presence known. “You may not think you need to talk, but he does.” He gestured to the far side of the living room where a dressed Ian was standing barefoot, watching them.

“What about our stir-fry... our plans? Ian is leaving; Ian, hurry up and get the fuck out of here!” he glared at the golden-haired man with anger. “Please don’t go, wolf.”

“Chet, it’s okay. You have something you need to do, and I’m not feeling hungry anymore.” He gave Chet a pained look as he walked past him to the door, not really sure how he was feeling because it was too much to process all at once. As he opened the door, he turned to see a devastated Chet coming towards him.

“I know this freaked you out, and I get it and I’m sorry, but don’t let it wreck what we have. I fucked up. I had no idea Ian was still here or I would have told you about last night earlier. I don’t want you to leave, but I can’t stop you. I really wish you would stay so we could talk about this. Ian is not going to be here much longer; I can promise you that.” There was no response from Arron. ‘Can I call you later?” The look on Chet’s face tore at something inside Arron, and he knew he had to leave.

“I don’t know right now… maybe in a couple of days. You’re right… I am freaked out and you have stuff you need to sort out.” A picture of Chet revealing how much he had loved Ian, with tears streaming down his face, forced itself forward in Arron’s tortured mind. “Maybe you guys have a second chance.” His attempt at a smile failed miserably.

“What can I do to convince you I don’t want a second chance with Ian?” Chet looked and sounded exasperated.

“Right now, you can’t. You need time to think this through. I know how much you loved him, and he is… he’s very beautiful, and he wants you back.” Ian’s looks had definitely intimidated him. The numbness was leaving and tears were coming, so Arron turned and left a frustrated Chet standing in the doorway. On his way down the stairs, the dam broke, and he had to brush the onslaught away so he could see.

Behind him he heard Chet say clearly, “You’re making a mistake. Please, don’t do this. Arron, trust me... please!"

Thanks, once again, to Lightning Tim.
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On 03/24/2015 04:02 AM, aditus said:
They are still very new, even though they moved fast and thought they had it all figured out. Arron's reaction showed this clearly. You can't build genuine trust in such a short time. It really looked bad. Would Chet have reacted the same way, if Dwayne had been at Arron's house? Who knows?

No really, if you've been hurt bad, you always remember this and try to avoid that it ever happens again at all cost, that's not a conscious decision. I understand Arron.

So, my trust is in you, Gary. Go fix this! ASAP! Lol.

Thanks Adi, I know this chapter was tough but I'm glad you understand Arron's actions. They ARE very new, and they have things to learn about one another. Chet learned a valuable lesson here. I will post soon... cheers
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Oh my God, the initial seesaw tension was almost unbearable – Will they wind up at Arron's house (good), will they wind up at Chet's place (BAD!!!). You toyed with us, back and forth, back and forth, and I bet you had a wicked smile as you wrote it, right? lol.

Damn – "Yes, Officer, I’ve got a Wok. Do you want to cook at my place?” So you did it, you really did it…but still at this point, I can have hope that I'm going to be wrong, and Mr. Model Man/Boy will be long gone. But still, nail-biting moment, lol.

Master manipulator – what a fantastic shopping foray, ending in the most perfect kiss yet…door opens…fuk. It's not often, but sometimes I do hate to be right. lol.

And then all the rest…you said it, numbness.

Thanks for a great chapter. I don’t know of ever reading a better set up of conflict and misunderstanding. Now, I have one more prediction to make, and I know I've got this one right too: Moondoggie and the Wolfman will be all right. I just feel it, and you will give us a great love-making scene as reward for all your readers' faith in you as a writer, and faith in love as the healer of all wounds. (No 'lol' this time)

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On 03/25/2015 10:57 AM, AC Benus said:
Oh my God, the initial seesaw tension was almost unbearable – Will they wind up at Arron's house (good), will they wind up at Chet's place (BAD!!!). You toyed with us, back and forth, back and forth, and I bet you had a wicked smile as you wrote it, right? lol.

 

Damn – "Yes, Officer, I’ve got a Wok. Do you want to cook at my place?” So you did it, you really did it…but still at this point, I can have hope that I'm going to be wrong, and Mr. Model Man/Boy will be long gone. But still, nail-biting moment, lol.

 

Master manipulator – what a fantastic shopping foray, ending in the most perfect kiss yet…door opens…fuk. It's not often, but sometimes I do hate to be right. lol.

 

And then all the rest…you said it, numbness.

 

Thanks for a great chapter. I don’t know of ever reading a better set up of conflict and misunderstanding. Now, I have one more prediction to make, and I know I've got this one right too: Moondoggie and the Wolfman will be all right. I just feel it, and you will give us a great love-making scene as reward for all your readers' faith in you as a writer, and faith in love as the healer of all wounds. (No 'lol' this time)

Thanks again AC for another extremely encouraging review. I knew this chapter would be tough on the readers... so I am pleased that you enjoyed the chapter itself for what it was... what it had to be...master manipulator...sounds naughty, but I like it...I don't know if they were wicked but I might have smiled a few times while writing this...I grimaced a few times too...Cheers
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On 03/25/2015 10:57 AM, AC Benus said:
Oh my God, the initial seesaw tension was almost unbearable – Will they wind up at Arron's house (good), will they wind up at Chet's place (BAD!!!). You toyed with us, back and forth, back and forth, and I bet you had a wicked smile as you wrote it, right? lol.

 

Damn – "Yes, Officer, I’ve got a Wok. Do you want to cook at my place?” So you did it, you really did it…but still at this point, I can have hope that I'm going to be wrong, and Mr. Model Man/Boy will be long gone. But still, nail-biting moment, lol.

 

Master manipulator – what a fantastic shopping foray, ending in the most perfect kiss yet…door opens…fuk. It's not often, but sometimes I do hate to be right. lol.

 

And then all the rest…you said it, numbness.

 

Thanks for a great chapter. I don’t know of ever reading a better set up of conflict and misunderstanding. Now, I have one more prediction to make, and I know I've got this one right too: Moondoggie and the Wolfman will be all right. I just feel it, and you will give us a great love-making scene as reward for all your readers' faith in you as a writer, and faith in love as the healer of all wounds. (No 'lol' this time)

Thanks again AC for another extremely encouraging review. I knew this chapter would be tough on the readers... so I am pleased that you enjoyed the chapter itself for what it was... what it had to be...master manipulator...sounds naughty, but I like it...I don't know if they were wicked but I might have smiled a few times while writing this...I grimaced a few times too...Cheers
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when I started to read the chapter, I was full of anticipation praying to keep Ian away from the house. then I was :pissed: at you for keeping him at home. at last I was like "DON'T GO ARRON!! YOU WILL REGRET IT SO BADLY" :,(:,(

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On 07/04/2015 05:59 AM, Victor Gutte said:

when I started to read the chapter, I was full of anticipation praying to keep Ian away from the house. then I was :pissed: at you for keeping him at home. at last I was like "DON'T GO ARRON!! YOU WILL REGRET IT SO BADLY" :,(:,(

This chapter was heart-wrenching to write. It tore my heart out. But this is how life works sometimes and we have to struggle to have faith. Arron is damaged. and he needs to face the fears that control him. I hated putting the readers through this, but love is sometimes very hard work. Another great review I thank you for... cheers... Gary...

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I knew from the title that this wouldn't be an easy chapter to read, but it started so well, too bad Ian was still there :/ Arron was overreacting but he has had a bad experience in the past and he hasn't known Chet for very long.
I don't think I have mentioned, but I love the titles :boy:

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On 10/31/2015 06:20 AM, Suvitar said:

I knew from the title that this wouldn't be an easy chapter to read, but it started so well, too bad Ian was still there :/ Arron was overreacting but he has had a bad experience in the past and he hasn't known Chet for very long.

I don't think I have mentioned, but I love the titles :boy:

Arron shut down. That baggage he carries did him in. All he can think of right now is what he sees in front of him, and the memories he has of Dwayne. Hang in there. Glad you like the titles... Another great review... cheers... Gary...

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I usually don't read all of the reviews before I put my own out there, but on this chapter I did. At first I was shocked at all the people mad at Arron. Really? I don't think he overreacted, I think he was devestated. Of course the more I read the more I realized more people were at least dissappointed in Chet than mad at Arron.
.“Yeah, I’m good at it… guaranteed. I’ve had some practice. That reminds me… something happened I need to tell you about.” Really Chet, that reminds me? Like it wasn't a big deal still? I agree about how your writing built the tension on which house they were going back to, but I got the feeling from a few reviews that some people thought that Chet intentionally wanted to go back to Arron's house. I don't think that is the case, that is the only time I am taking up for Chet in this matter. I do like that he tried very hard to talk Arron down while he was freaking out, but again I was a little dismayed how he didn't see this coming. The kid took oxy and alcohol just to come talk to him and then the tears and the pity party. Surely he didn't think letting him lock up behind himself was going to work out well. Preoccupied with Arron or not, there was one bad decision after another from Chet. Letting him in to begin with, not calling him a cab, not locking his door, not admitting he was seeing someone else (although I get why that one happened), not seeing him on his way in the morning, and not telling Arron when there were so many opportunities. I like that he admitted he fucked up, but in the same breath he said if he had known Ian was still there he would have told him sooner - still like it was no big deal. Rule number one in any relationship, new or not, say to yourself if the other person were doing this how would I feel. The second he thought that hugging a naked ex felt like cheating on Arron he should the lightbulb should have went off and he should have sought Arron out for a discussion. I imaging walking in to see a nearly naked Dwayne would make Chet lose his calm good guy real fast.
All that to say what this chapter really made me feel. I want to hug Arron like a mother and soothe him until he is coherent then make him go back and find out what in the hell is really going on. Chet I want to smack upside his head and yell at him for being so naive and easily manipulated, then I would hug him. No soothing though. Ian, well I don't think he warrants much effort. There will always be an Ian around.

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On 11/26/2015 05:55 AM, pzetts3 said:

I usually don't read all of the reviews before I put my own out there, but on this chapter I did. At first I was shocked at all the people mad at Arron. Really? I don't think he overreacted, I think he was devestated. Of course the more I read the more I realized more people were at least dissappointed in Chet than mad at Arron.

.“Yeah, I’m good at it… guaranteed. I’ve had some practice. That reminds me… something happened I need to tell you about.” Really Chet, that reminds me? Like it wasn't a big deal still? I agree about how your writing built the tension on which house they were going back to, but I got the feeling from a few reviews that some people thought that Chet intentionally wanted to go back to Arron's house. I don't think that is the case, that is the only time I am taking up for Chet in this matter. I do like that he tried very hard to talk Arron down while he was freaking out, but again I was a little dismayed how he didn't see this coming. The kid took oxy and alcohol just to come talk to him and then the tears and the pity party. Surely he didn't think letting him lock up behind himself was going to work out well. Preoccupied with Arron or not, there was one bad decision after another from Chet. Letting him in to begin with, not calling him a cab, not locking his door, not admitting he was seeing someone else (although I get why that one happened), not seeing him on his way in the morning, and not telling Arron when there were so many opportunities. I like that he admitted he fucked up, but in the same breath he said if he had known Ian was still there he would have told him sooner - still like it was no big deal. Rule number one in any relationship, new or not, say to yourself if the other person were doing this how would I feel. The second he thought that hugging a naked ex felt like cheating on Arron he should the lightbulb should have went off and he should have sought Arron out for a discussion. I imaging walking in to see a nearly naked Dwayne would make Chet lose his calm good guy real fast.

All that to say what this chapter really made me feel. I want to hug Arron like a mother and soothe him until he is coherent then make him go back and find out what in the hell is really going on. Chet I want to smack upside his head and yell at him for being so naive and easily manipulated, then I would hug him. No soothing though. Ian, well I don't think he warrants much effort. There will always be an Ian around.

Another amazing review, and I can't disagree with any of it. I do see Chet differently. He's like my kid. He learned a lot today... stuff he really needed to. Maybe he is naive, but he really didn't expect Ian to violate his life. He thought it was settled. And I think he showed compassion for Ian, and no he didn't deserve it, but Chet has this huge heart that makes him who he is. He doesn't downplay anything with regards to Arron. His whole head is wrapped up in Arron, and he wasn't trying to hide anything. I don't blame Arron for acting how he did... it's understandable, but his baggage got in the way, and that has to be dealt with for them to have their chance. I'm glad you have sympathy for Arron. So do I. I didn't play with the readers, but this is real life for me. Trust is the hardest thing to acquire and hold on to. And yeah, there will always be Ians around... thank you once again, pzetts... you really make me think... cheers... Gary...

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I have to say that I saw this coming, when Chet began to tell Arron about Ian, but then never followed through. Just goes to show that you should always divest yourself of the important stuff when the time is ripe. I don't blame Arron for being confused and upset, especially if this all feels like something he has experienced before. Quite a shock, to get to the home of someone you're crazy about, and then have it all come crashing down like that. Arron needed time to do some sorting, but I do hope you will allow him to see he needs to go back - at some point. Of course, if he didn't, then we wouldn't have a story, would we?
Chet may be a little too nice when it comes to Ian. I don't like to think of myself as a mean guy, but I would have been tempted to hurry Ian along with the sole of my shoe. Then again, Ian isn't my type, so I doubt he'd have been the problem for me that he is for Chet.
Well, that you've crafted an engaging story here is obvious, because here we are talking about Chet and Arron and Ian like they're real people. Go figure. You got me. So - let's move on to the next chapter so that I can sleep tonight. :)

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On 09/27/2016 02:03 PM, Geron Kees said:

I have to say that I saw this coming, when Chet began to tell Arron about Ian, but then never followed through. Just goes to show that you should always divest yourself of the important stuff when the time is ripe. I don't blame Arron for being confused and upset, especially if this all feels like something he has experienced before. Quite a shock, to get to the home of someone you're crazy about, and then have it all come crashing down like that. Arron needed time to do some sorting, but I do hope you will allow him to see he needs to go back - at some point. Of course, if he didn't, then we wouldn't have a story, would we?

Chet may be a little too nice when it comes to Ian. I don't like to think of myself as a mean guy, but I would have been tempted to hurry Ian along with the sole of my shoe. Then again, Ian isn't my type, so I doubt he'd have been the problem for me that he is for Chet.

Well, that you've crafted an engaging story here is obvious, because here we are talking about Chet and Arron and Ian like they're real people. Go figure. You got me. So - let's move on to the next chapter so that I can sleep tonight. :)

These guys are real to me, which made it very hard to write this one. Chet took a lot of flak, but Ian really was inconsequential in his mind. He was all wrapped up in something astonishingly good, and frankly, he was starved for it. Ian doesn't play by anyone's rules, and we all know that, and NOW, so does Chet. It was a new low for the young guy used to getting his own way. I hated doing this to Arron, but we see the damage Dwayne did in how he shut down and pulled away. The newness of what they have left both men unprepared for the detritus of life... it was both a test and a wake-up call... thanks for the awesome review, buddy... cheers... Gary...

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Damn I knew this would happen!:devil: And i thinks its time to ruin Ian perfect features.:fight: God I hope we can fix this awful situation, crosses fingers

 

YOU GOT ME GOING AGAIN lol:worship::thankyou:

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On 5/23/2017 at 4:58 PM, Albert1434 said:

Damn I knew this would happen!:devil: And i thinks its time to ruin Ian perfect features.:fight: God I hope we can fix this awful situation, crosses fingers

 

YOU GOT ME GOING AGAIN lol:worship::thankyou:

LOL... yeah, I think a lot of readers wanted to ruin Ian's perfect features. This was a tough chapter... I had to weather quite a storm... have faith, buddy... what's real usually has the best chance... glad to get you going ;) Cheers and thanks... Gary....

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Chet made a couple of mistakes here, but it makes for good drama. I know Chet didn't intentionally conceal what happened with Arron, but it wasn't smart at all. 

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3 minutes ago, Potterslashfan said:

Chet made a couple of mistakes here, but it makes for good drama. I know Chet didn't intentionally conceal what happened with Arron, but it wasn't smart at all. 

Yes, he did, but he's a trusting man. Arron is the cop here. :)  He wouldn't have made the mistake of leaving Ian in the apartment... and Chet already said he needed to tell him something. I almost had to go into hiding after this chapter. :huh:  Thanks for reading, and the comment, buddy... cheers... Gary

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Why do I have this sick feeling about Ian, I just knew I should have kick his sorry ass:rofl: God just as I feared the bastard Ian is there now where did I put my bat? Man this is going so wrong I so want to stump Ian sorry ass into the ground for Chet's sake!:yes:

I think I need a second glass of wine:rofl:

Great Chapter sad through:thankyou::worship:

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2 hours ago, Albert1434 said:

Why do I have this sick feeling about Ian, I just knew I should have kick his sorry ass:rofl: God just as I feared the bastard Ian is there now where did I put my bat? Man this is going so wrong I so want to stump Ian sorry ass into the ground for Chet's sake!:yes:

I think I need a second glass of wine:rofl:

Great Chapter sad through:thankyou::worship:

Lol. Yeah, wine goes good with this chapter. :P  Ian sure was hated when I wrote this, and I still feel the echoes. Yes, it was a sad chapter... for both me and the readers. It was hard for me to read again. :yes:  Cheers and thanks, my friend... G. :hug: 

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Stir fry? Why didn't Chet channel K and M and order Chinese take out?  Why didn't Chet talk to Arron before he arrived home?  I so wanted to see the Craftsman house, and I am not an architect!  Chet's mind is still scrambled and Arron's mind is also after encountering Ian.  I know that Arron has self esteem problems, but he needs to remember that Chet was going to talk to him about something important when the get to Chet's place.  Chet needs to get rid of Ian permanently and FAST! If there is any future for Arron and Chet now, Arron needs to get over the shock and realise that Chet has left Ian in the past. Arron is Chet's future as Chet's future is Arron.

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5 hours ago, raven1 said:

Stir fry? Why didn't Chet channel K and M and order Chinese take out?  Why didn't Chet talk to Arron before he arrived home?  I so wanted to see the Craftsman house, and I am not an architect!  Chet's mind is still scrambled and Arron's mind is also after encountering Ian.  I know that Arron has self esteem problems, but he needs to remember that Chet was going to talk to him about something important when the get to Chet's place.  Chet needs to get rid of Ian permanently and FAST! If there is any future for Arron and Chet now, Arron needs to get over the shock and realise that Chet has left Ian in the past. Arron is Chet's future as Chet's future is Arron.

Yup, yup, and yup. :)  I don't think I've met anyone that doesn't have at least some baggage. I know my walls can go up quicker than lightning when I have doubts. This is painful... but I write about life... and emotion. A lot of things should have gone different, but it doesn't work that way, so I say keep the faith. :) Cheers, my friend... Gary.... :hug: 

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I have read all the comments. Some I agree with and some I don't agree with. But knowing from reading COTT that Chet and Arron got together and became a couple during the almost 2 weeks that Kendall and Mike were gone out west. So this is in that period of time. And they were a happy couple at that intended fix up dinner. Nothing was ever brought up about this wrinkle.

When I saw the title of this chapter I knew that the shit was going to hit the fan. I didn't think that it was wise for Chet to leave Ian at his place when he went to work. He should have at least called in late, and made sure Ian was gone. But he didn't. I really think Arron overreacted even though he had been snake bit by his ex. This was only their second date, and 3rd time of ever meeting each other within 1 1/2 days. Him being a cop he should know he should listen to what to the parties involved. But if I didn't know the outcome before reading this and knowing Chet's point of view. If I was Chet I would not call Arron after I get rid of Ian. I would leave it up to Arron having some time to call me. If he didn't, oh well someone else would come along. It wasn't like he cheated on anyone. But there is always if's. Like the old saying. "If my aunt had balls, she would be my uncle. 

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Our baggage affects us in so many ways. Sometimes we go through life oblivious to the fact that our past experiences are in control. With all things being even, Chet did nothing wrong... but Arron was intimidated, and his insecurities took over. I understand him running away and telling Chet to talk with Ian. He cares so much for Chet, but he doesn't know him enough yet... it's been a whirlwind, and he's slammed back down to earth. I feel bad for Chet, but I also feel bad for Arron. We'll just have to see what each man does from here. :)  Cheers and thanks, buddy... I'm glad you aren't wanting to hang me. :P  :hug: 

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Damn Damn Damn I just know I should have tossed Ian out the window:rofl:

I never knew how sexy shoping for food could be I am loving this! I just knew that bastard Ian would be there so many mistake in this chapter. Chet start to tell Arron and didn't sigh! I just hate this hate this, Ian you rat run for it before I get my hands on ya! Chet is so weak you never leave so one like Ian in your home before you leave sigh!

What a chapter great one!:2thumbs::kiss::thankyou::rofl::worship:

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2 hours ago, Albert1434 said:

Damn Damn Damn I just know I should have tossed Ian out the window:rofl:

I never knew how sexy shoping for food could be I am loving this! I just knew that bastard Ian would be there so many mistake in this chapter. Chet start to tell Arron and didn't sigh! I just hate this hate this, Ian you rat run for it before I get my hands on ya! Chet is so weak you never leave so one like Ian in your home before you leave sigh!

What a chapter great one!:2thumbs::kiss::thankyou::rofl::worship:

It was a good chapter until the shit hit the fan. Chet is a great guy... even to those who don't deserve it. Remember how noble he was with Kendall, even though he really cared for him? He doesn't cheat... never has, so I don't think he's used to considering someone might think that of him. Still, I will concede he was naive. What has that cost him? We shall see. :unsure: Cheers and thanks, Albert. :hug: 

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A chapter that had us swinging like a pendulum. Chet was so excited he didn't think that Ian might be hatching a plan. Arron is still wounded from his last relationship. 

Once Chet has sorted out Ian he needs to get his ass over to Arron. They will be OK, but will need to rely on each other to get through rhis first, and many other hurdles they will face. 

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