Rhymes - 13. I Never Learn

good work. strong, direct. passionate.

On 04/12/2015 11:58 PM, carringtonrj said:

good work. strong, direct. passionate.

Another chill-inducing poem, totallyy.

I read it a few times and each time brought chills.

Very well-written and thought provoking. =)

On 04/13/2015 04:50 AM, Lisa said:

Another chill-inducing poem, totallyy.

 

I read it a few times and each time brought chills.

 

Very well-written and thought provoking. =)

Thanks for taking the challenge, and I love to see how you've tackled a 10-syllable approach for each line. This is a very personal poem, but it's also telling the narrative of that pain and how you met and so forth, so the Blank Verse form fits perfectly.

The poem is beautiful: direct and open. This is the kind of poem it takes courage to write, and the kind that once done offers the poet a bit of freedom from that same hurt.

Thank you for sharing it.

On 04/14/2015 06:30 AM, AC Benus said:

Thanks for taking the challenge, and I love to see how you've tackled a 10-syllable approach for each line. This is a very personal poem, but it's also telling the narrative of that pain and how you met and so forth, so the Blank Verse form fits perfectly.

 

The poem is beautiful: direct and open. This is the kind of poem it takes courage to write, and the kind that once done offers the poet a bit of freedom from that same hurt.

 

Thank you for sharing it.

I wept at this - the image of words burning on their way back up - bile as harsh and vile as melancholy. You have written something very, very powerful.

On 02/05/2016 02:29 AM, Parker Owens said:

I wept at this - the image of words burning on their way back up - bile as harsh and vile as melancholy. You have written something very, very powerful.

thank you for the review. it still amazes me that my words could touch someone else, so thank you for letting me share my writing with you in such a personal way.