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Rhymes - 22. January.

Poetry Prompt 2 - Haiku

The flower that blooms

Ahead in cruel January

Dies in January.

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AC Benus

I know exactly the feeling this poem generates in me, and it strikes a chord of truth. Where I'm from, the daffodils always seem to sprout and grow before the final freeze strikes, and most of them wind up never blooming.

 

Thanks for posting this!

 

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On 02/02/2016 05:49 AM, AC Benus said:

I know exactly the feeling this poem generates in me, and it strikes a chord of truth. Where I'm from, the daffodils always seem to sprout and grew before the final freeze strikes, and most of them wind up never blooming.

 

Thanks for posting this!

thanks for the review. yeah. it's tragic how something that was so full of life was robbed of its chance to fulfil its potential.

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Parker Owens

Oh my. This is so tragically true. Makes me remember the story of an ancient professor I heard about, walking on campus during an unusually warm January. Shaking his cane at the sprouting flowers, he cried: "Get back, you fools!" Perfect thought.

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On 02/07/2016 05:52 AM, Parker Owens said:

Oh my. This is so tragically true. Makes me remember the story of an ancient professor I heard about, walking on campus during an unusually warm January. Shaking his cane at the sprouting flowers, he cried: "Get back, you fools!" Perfect thought.

oh wow. hahahah that's an amazing story. he sounds like a man of wisdom. :D thank you for your review

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Emi GS

A perfect image of blossom and the stunning fact of being retard. Nice view and nice Haiku man. I liked it very much... :)

 

~Emi.

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