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Rhymes - 13. I Never Learn

Poetry Prompt 7 - Blank Verse

Stranger, could you have left any more scars?

How quietly you stole into my heart

And robbed me blind of all these precious things

I did not know I still possessed these days.

You whispered empty promises I’ve heard

Too many times before, yet I never

Learn that sweet words burn harsh on their way up.

I lie awake picking at the stitches

That holds together someone I don’t know.

When did they fall, these walls I built so high?

Poetry Prompt 7 - Blank Verse: Questions for You.
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Thanks for taking the challenge, and I love to see how you've tackled a 10-syllable approach for each line. This is a very personal poem, but it's also telling the narrative of that pain and how you met and so forth, so the Blank Verse form fits perfectly.

 

The poem is beautiful: direct and open. This is the kind of poem it takes courage to write, and the kind that once done offers the poet a bit of freedom from that same hurt.

 

Thank you for sharing it.

On 04/14/2015 06:30 AM, AC Benus said:
Thanks for taking the challenge, and I love to see how you've tackled a 10-syllable approach for each line. This is a very personal poem, but it's also telling the narrative of that pain and how you met and so forth, so the Blank Verse form fits perfectly.

 

The poem is beautiful: direct and open. This is the kind of poem it takes courage to write, and the kind that once done offers the poet a bit of freedom from that same hurt.

 

Thank you for sharing it.

Thank you for the great review. :) Poetry is a catharsis of sorts after all. As for the freedom from hurt part, I'm still waiting on it. But thank you :)
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