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The Holly and the Ivy - Prologue. Prologue

The Holly and the Ivy

Prologue

I hurry through the freezing cold to the heavy church doors. It smells like snow. The cast iron doorknob sucks the warmth from my hand, makes me wish for a mug of mulled wine. Shit. The damn door doesn’t move one bit. I have to push with the force of my full body weight before the wooden barrier gives way and promptly hear an amused chuckle from behind.

“What’s so funny?”

“Nothing, love.”

Nothing my ass.

The warmth from the inside of the incense-smoky church hits me and I almost gag. I hate incense.

There are only a few free seats left. When I feel a tug at my coat sleeve, I follow to our pew in the right aisle. I have a bad feeling. We shouldn’t have come here tonight.

"We’re not late, a real Christmas Miracle," I grumble.

He makes a noise between a grunt and a laugh.

"We should have stayed home. I've had a bad feeling for days, but you insisted we come here. Losing face... That's bullshit and you know it, but whoever listens to me?"

I'm whining. I just should shut up.

We sit down and I glance around the church. Nothing has changed since last year, or ten years before, or… The large Christmas tree behind the altar. The choir getting ready for the opening song, most likely 'Oh Little Town of Bethlehem'. The band retuning their instruments… “Somehow I expected that it would be different this year,” I mutter to myself.

From the corner of my eye, I can see he is looking, probably with a lifted eyebrow. “Why would you think that?”

Of course he heard that; superior hearing skill and all I guess. “Dunno… maybe because I am different?”

“Well, you were right then.” Pleased with himself he leans back and crosses his long legs at the ankles. “Something has changed this year.”

Smartass. I roll my eyes. That’s just so typical of him. Tipping my head back, I start counting the ceiling beams. I don’t know how often I’ve done this in the past years. It has always been oddly soothing, not tonight though. I shiver although the church is well heated and my stomach is churning with the little I ate. I can feel eyes on me. I need to get out of here.

He grabs my hand and entwines our fingers. "It's okay, Noël. Everything will be fine."

I wish I had his confidence. There is a real chance that tomorrow the man beside me will be dead. Or I will. Or somebody could try... I stare at the Christmas tree behind the altar, its many lights get blurry, my mind slips back, and I'm on the bus again, where my life took a turn. Whether for better or for worse has yet to be decided.

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On 10/03/2015 02:01 AM, Puppilull said:

Just right to get the interest awakened! Lucky us chapter 1 is already here!

Yeah, never a prologue without the first chapter. This would be plain mean. Glad I caught your interest. :) Thanks, Puppi!

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On 02/03/2016 04:35 PM, Headstall said:

Excellent lead-in, Adi... Onward...

The perks of reading a complete story...

Thanks for giving THatI a try, Gary. :)

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Before Reading Prologue:

I'm super excited to read this part one. I don't know why. I haven't had much time to read much of anything fun, I guess, and I saw the update for the current storyline and that it was part 2 and I just can't wait to read! I also have coffee this morning and survived several college assignments at 2 AM and desperately need to read something other than textbooks. 

 

Wow, that is some tiny font. I can't tell whether it's my screen settings or the site. *zooms in five times and turns the contrast to read white font on black* Aaaaahhhh sooo much better. 

 

After Reading Prologue:

I hate incense. - Same! Does something awful to my sinuses (not an allergic reaction, but definitely a reaction).

Well, I'm intrigued. Thus far we only know the name of Noel, which is quite ironic that they're in a church at Christmastime with a name like Noel. I love that. But, now I'm wondering who's after them and why. 

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1 hour ago, Thirdly said:

Before Reading Prologue:

I'm super excited to read this part one. I don't know why. I haven't had much time to read much of anything fun, I guess, and I saw the update for the current storyline and that it was part 2 and I just can't wait to read! I also have coffee this morning and survived several college assignments at 2 AM and desperately need to read something other than textbooks. 

 

Wow, that is some tiny font. I can't tell whether it's my screen settings or the site. *zooms in five times and turns the contrast to read white font on black* Aaaaahhhh sooo much better. 

 

After Reading Prologue:

I hate incense. - Same! Does something awful to my sinuses (not an allergic reaction, but definitely a reaction).

Well, I'm intrigued. Thus far we only know the name of Noel, which is quite ironic that they're in a church at Christmastime with a name like Noel. I love that. But, now I'm wondering who's after them and why. 

I'm glad to be of service in providing something fun to read.

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Why hello there Noel, pleased to see you again.

I have found the review button and I promise after reviewing a few chapters and re-reading them that I will go back to my work.

I have been following this story for a very long time (2012?), back in the early days. I can`t express how exciting I am to read this again. I can share my emotions with the person who counted the beams in church. I have nothing against religion but I don`t have the attention span nor patience for it, no matter how fascinating.

The last sentences are intriguing and made me feel very anticipating for the next one.

Onward I go.

 

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Hi Silver!

I promised you and  @Blueyes57 I would complete the story come hell or high water. I'm glad I did.

I'm looking forward to read your comments while you're re-reading the story. :heart: :hug:

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38 minutes ago, aditus said:

Hi Silver!

I promised you and  @Blueyes57 I would complete the story come hell or high water. I'm glad I did.

I'm looking forward to read your comments while you're re-reading the story. :heart: :hug:

So this is how you quote a comment 😀 and we are all happy that you did. I do wonder if there will be more in the future. 
Thank you for continuing and finishing this story :thankyou::hug:

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