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    Emi GS
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  • 03/09/2016
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry

Mixed Emotions - 3. Tanka - Dancing in the Rain

strong>A childhood memory brought by a child… :)

A dazzling feeling
quite astonishing display.
A child drives himself,
to just dance in the raindrops;
as I find myself singing.

strong>Thank you all for Reading… :)
Copyright © 2016 Emi GS; All Rights Reserved.
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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2016 - Spring - Crossing the Line Entry
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AC Benus

It's a lovely image; compact and perfect. Like all good Tanka, you have used the interaction of the poet with nature to talk about (that is, illustrate) how many many people would feel in the same situation.
Bravo!

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Lisa

I also smiled while reading this, Emi! It's so easy to picture that child dancing in the rain while the adult starts singing along with the dancing. :)

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On 03/10/2016 04:05 AM, Parker Owens said:

I smiled to myself reading this. And then I hummed a long-forgotten tune. :)

Yeah, this is so fun to write. And Me too Loved it a lot of all the poems. I just love the rains and dancing. I am glad you liked it that much its made hum. Thank you review... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/10/2016 07:55 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Lovely visual!

I am glad I made you see what I actually seen and wrote this poem. Its a lovely visual in live. Thank You for the review Tim... :)

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On 03/11/2016 08:34 PM, aditus said:

Lovely! I can see it Emi!

I just feel wow, that I made you like that with my poem. And I am glad you liked it. Thank You for the review Adi... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/12/2016 10:20 AM, AC Benus said:

It's a lovely image; compact and perfect. Like all good Tanka, you have used the interaction of the poet with nature to talk about (that is, illustrate) how many many people would feel in the same situation.

Bravo!

I had written what I had seen. Cynus helped me to put my words into a straight line. I owe him this. And Than You for the great compliment Ben, I appreciate it... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/13/2016 12:27 PM, Lisa said:

I also smiled while reading this, Emi! It's so easy to picture that child dancing in the rain while the adult starts singing along with the dancing. :)

God! made me an adult already. Here I am the one who sing for the little rascal who is got the attention from all, and made me stand there and appreciate him. :( But I am glad he did that. or otherwise I'd not have written it, and haven't got the bestest compliment from you guys.

 

^_^ I can forgive him... Don't roll your eyes Lisa. Thank you for the compliment my friend... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 03/13/2016 04:50 PM, Defiance19 said:

This made me smile too.. I loved the visual..

Nice job!

I am glad you liked it Aunt Def. I am happy that my all effort are worth something. And you people made that possible by giving your best compliments. Thank You for the review Aunt... :)

 

~Emi.

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