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    Emi GS
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  • 06/03/2016
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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NaPoWriMo-2016 - 19. Day 19: My Embarrass Filled Self Control

strong>April 19
Okay. Here I am going to embarrass myself telling about my exact inner thoughts. Just don't laugh, okay. And this happened when we are returning from the dinner.

I looked out

and let a sigh

I tried to control

the randiness I'm in

I did my best to maintain

the primacy built for myself

I breath in

and I breath out

hid both blush and heat

under my pinky cheeks

Paced down my hurrying heart

even veiled rigid little me.

Its really a torture

being so close to someone

and not be who I am

strong>Thank you all for spending your time to read my poems. Any comment or compliment is appreciated. After all your words are the encouragement we get for the effort we put.
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Emi GS
On 06/03/2016 07:44 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Emi, there's nothing to laugh about. A good poem about the desire you feel, and the last lines say it all; that you can't be who you really are. I think you did a wonderful job here, my friend.

Those three lines are the ones I had written first. But they looked great on last stanza. Yeah, such a desire but unable to do or say anything. Its a different floating of the feelings. Desire to depress to sad to again desire.

 

I am glad and thank you people for not laughing at my uncomfortableness...

 

~Emi

Emi GS
On 06/04/2016 01:54 AM, Parker Owens said:

You certainly made me understand and live with what you were feeling. What a great job you did.

I laughed at myself while I was writing this. But the three lines are fitted perfect to told what I exactly feel other than the other things... :gikkle:

 

I am glad you liked it and enjoyed/lived with it... :)

 

~Emi.

Emi GS
On 06/04/2016 02:25 AM, Headstall said:

Wow. There is nothing embarrassing here, my friend. Your honesty touched me. I understand completely... cheers... Gary...

Thanks Gary. I am glad no one laughed at me even though I explained it damn clearly. Yeah those last three line are given it another perspective. You guys are so great that you understand it. And I am so thankful to that... :)

 

Thanks for the review Gary... :)

 

~Emi.

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