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NaPoWriMo-2016 - 13. Day 13: Obdurate Love

strong>April 13
Yeah, still in pain but cannot deny the truth...

It turned out to be the day

I don't want to exist

With the face he knew.

Heartbroken still

I'm all done

With this.

But

It's

Not cinch

To let go

The man I love

With my breath and soul,

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">Thank you all for spending your time to read my poems. Any comment or compliment is appreciated. After all your words are the encouragement we get for the effort we put.
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They say, the truth can set you free, but it doesn't always feel right or good. I like the honesty in your writing and your braveness to tell it like it is.
Don't change that, but I do hope you find that brave man to be part of your life.
tim oxxo

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Emi, this must have been a very hard thread of poems to write, but they are very good. Your clarity and courage come through in every line.

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It's a heartbreaking poem, Emi. Your emotions are well known to me, but you put them beautifully. Damn mirror…

 

Feel better, okay.

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On 05/16/2016 02:48 AM, Mikiesboy said:

They say, the truth can set you free, but it doesn't always feel right or good. I like the honesty in your writing and your braveness to tell it like it is.

Don't change that, but I do hope you find that brave man to be part of your life.

tim oxxo

I hope for that too. And thank you for the great review man. I appreciate them... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 05/17/2016 12:30 AM, Parker Owens said:

Emi, this must have been a very hard thread of poems to write, but they are very good. Your clarity and courage come through in every line.

This have been a hell of a three days of my life. And worst. I never felt like this, even when my Ex cheated on me. Any way thank you for the great review Parker... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 05/17/2016 10:03 AM, AC Benus said:

It's a heartbreaking poem, Emi. Your emotions are well known to me, but you put them beautifully. Damn mirror…

 

Feel better, okay.

Wow!!! Such a great compliment from a great guy. I'll get a big smile, every time I read this. Thank You for that Ben... :)

 

Love,

~Emi.

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