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    Emi GS
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NaPoWriMo-2016 - 12. Day 12: Love is Pain

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">April 12
I am still dealing with issue of love. I don't know when I am going to get out of that mood. So I challenged today to all poets at GA to write a poem with the 1st line of below poem.

Love is the pain I built-in myself.

I craved,

ran for every opportunity.

Adjusted a lot.

 

Love is the pain I built-in myself.

I laughed,

believed in everyone.

Got hurt a lot.

 

Love is the pain I built-in myself.

That grown,

but makes me feel empty.

Almost dead.

 

Love is the pain I built-in myself.

Never leave,

haunts you everywhere.

Even in hell.

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">Thank you all for spending your time to read my poems. Any comment or compliment is appreciated. After all your words are the encouragement we get for the effort we put.
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I hope it's not like that for you much longer. I wish for you to see the beauty and find the joy in love again.

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Nicely done Emi.. I'll have to look for your challenge.. Like Def, I hope you find someone who sees the beauty in you, now and always.
xoxox tim

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You create a powerful refrain with the repeated first line. There is almost a suggestion that being too open – too receptive – is the root of the problems others caused for you. But, you being you is a good thing; them taking advantage is bad.

 

Don’t change, Emi. We love you for you.

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On 05/15/2016 01:05 PM, Defiance19 said:

I hope it's not like that for you much longer. I wish for you to see the beauty and find the joy in love again.

I wish and hope for the too Aunt Def. Thank You for the blessings... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 05/15/2016 01:53 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Nicely done Emi.. I'll have to look for your challenge.. Like Def, I hope you find someone who sees the beauty in you, now and always.

xoxox tim

Thank You for that Tim. And about the challenge, you have done great on that... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 05/17/2016 09:55 AM, AC Benus said:

You create a powerful refrain with the repeated first line. There is almost a suggestion that being too open – too receptive – is the root of the problems others caused for you. But, you being you is a good thing; them taking advantage is bad.

 

Don’t change, Emi. We love you for you.

I never did or never would change myself for someone. And thank you for great review and support Ben... :)

 

~Emi.

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