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    Emi GS
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NaPoWriMo-2016 - 14. Day 14: I Smiled

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">April 14
After three unbearable days, I finally smiled on the occasion of starting the works for My Cousin's Daughter's Marriage.

I smiled

After long time

All the anguish —blanked out

Pitying self —finally gone

I smiled

span style="font-size:1em;line-height:1.3em;">Thank you all for spending your time to read my poems. Any comment or compliment is appreciated. After all your words are the encouragement we get for the effort we put.
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This is good Emi. It's honest and I feel the relief as you come back to your usual self.
nice work
tim

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On 06/01/2016 02:05 AM, Mikiesboy said:

This is good Emi. It's honest and I feel the relief as you come back to your usual self.

nice work

tim

Life will not be fair and will not be naive for so long my friend. We have to deal with both now and then. I am happy today(on that day) because of the circumstances. But life may not be like that forever.

 

I am happy that, my small smile can make you sigh. Thank You so much for caring/worrying about me.

 

Love,

~Emi.

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I loved this, Emi! A little journey in so few words... beautiful... and I'm glad you could smile finally... cheers... Gary...

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On 06/01/2016 03:32 AM, Headstall said:

I loved this, Emi! A little journey in so few words... beautiful... and I'm glad you could smile finally... cheers... Gary...

After all, its my cousin's daughter's marriage and I am the care taker of every work. As I was badly hurt last three days(according to 14th April), because of the marriage I was happy.

 

Thank you Gary. Thank You for the kind words... :)

 

Love,

~Emi.

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Yes, self-reserve being broken by a self-smile is like the sun scattering clouds. Loved the image, and love the sight of you smiling again - well done!

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On 06/01/2016 10:26 AM, AC Benus said:

Yes, self-reserve being broken by a self-smile is like the sun scattering clouds. Loved the image, and love the sight of you smiling again - well done!

I am enjoying all the attraction because of the marriage. How I can not smile, when for every 5 mins someone calling me for help. As well as, it is the great chance to forget last three days...

 

Thank You for the great review Ben... :)

 

Love,

~Emi

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On 06/01/2016 10:43 AM, Parker Owens said:

Your smile made me smile, too. This is a grand bit of cheer after the pain.

I glad that you liked the poem. And thank You(I thank a lot :lol: ) so much for the caring words, and for the review... :)

 

Love,

~Emi.

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